Matsyaa curled her fists on her sides, standing on the opening of the drawing hall and acting like a figurine. The couple before her hadn't noticed her yet and she took the liberty to burn them with her glare. When her husband saw her, he pulled back and the girl also straightened up confusingly glancing at her.
"What are you doing here?" Despite everything, Ranvijay had the nerve to ask. Matsyaa couldn't keep her eyes off the girl still bracketed in his arms and he didn't even push her away.
"I thought about coming back home." She pouted and glared at him, "Guess I made a mistake. I shouldn't have been here."
His eyes flashed with resentment before getting cold. "I'll ask Bhushan to drop you back."
"That won't be needed." It took her everything to not bark the words at his face and she turned, hiding the tears welling in her eyes. She tugged at Veer's arm, pulling him along with her.
So, is everything over now? One mistake and his love and care evaporated. She howled in her mind and her lips trembled, dreading the thought of her replacement.
How's this? Any idea what has changed? I'm sure it will keep you awake at nights. ;)
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Log inI'm really excited for this story, been following it since Wattpad days!! Can't wait for it. I know you won't disappoint us :')
I just want to point out that during whole story Ranvijay was shown as a very cunning person, emotionally unstable but very cunning. He had eyes everywhere, he had ears everywhere, he knew his enemies, he was shown very intelligent with foresight and strategies for everything. He always looked at bigger picture and acted according to it but how could he be manipulated this easily about Matsaya. Someone from inside, someone his very own has played him regarding Matsaya and he was manipulated that easily into thinking that Matsaya could kill people for her sake. She was insensitive towards him but that was changing, he knew her moves before her and yet instead of relying on his instincts and investigating the situation with her or assuming alternate options for the happenings he took the easy option and accepted whatever was presented before his eyes. How can he bot see the bigger picture now??
Shruti Omar, Damn : ( who killed Seema but!!?
I really don't like this new plot I guess I will stop at book 1 only. Bye
Neha Singh, I don't know what to expect. I'm very disappointed
Okay, initially I thought to let the readers make their assumptions but right now, I feel I should clear the air. Guys, first thing first. The plot or story or anything hasn't changed. My sole objective to split the book was to do justice with the characters and their emotions. I wanted to portray where they stand. So, your revenge plot assumption is ruled out. There's no revenge gonna happen, at least not between the couple. This sneak peak is just a segment. A scene that doesn't define whole story. I thought you'd be more concerned about the new girl here, Ranvijay's anger and Matsyaa's mistake. I now know that my whole plan to release a teaser backfired. Aa a reader, you are free to make your own choices but if this sneak peak solely is going to make you say goodbye to the story, I will say please don't do that. This is not the summary of entire plot. I am just trying to be unpredictable and willing to have you trust. Further beyond this, it's your choice. ?
Veeja, Same I'm disappointed too
I believe there's some twist here and I believe in you author. You know the story line well than any of us and I'm pretty sure you wouldn't disappoint anyone. I'll be waiting for the updates just please don't make us wait for long❤️
Rock this book like you always do. All the best Author!
Oh no! I’ve been following this book from wattpad days and I’m really disappointed in the new change I feel like it’s really drastic and I just preferred it better before. How can his feelings for her disappear so quick? I don’t like this whole revenge plot line I feel like I waited two years to get a romantic story line for it to go in the bin. I mean no disrespect to you, you’re a fantastic author but I think I can speak on a lot of other readers when I say that I’m not feeling this new change. I’m gonna stop reading here but I wish you the best of luck with your writing career!
Liah Durani, This is only a spot...... Not whole story..... Sometimes to get a good click from camera you need to go two step back.... May be this is like that only. Ranvijay is sensible enough to make her love with him. His method is wrong but his love for Matasya is pure. I believe Shruti will be back with a blast. Have faith in the author
I don't think that we can judge the whole book by its sneak peak only.....I didn't know that this was on wattapad also....so I can't compare...but i can tell one thing that i trust your skills...and i know this would also be the masterpiece like previous one
And yes....it will be all over my thoughts now!!.....pleaseeeee make it sooooonnnnn
Of course Ranvijay got tired of her. In the previous version that wasn't possible, but I think it's all part of his plan. He wants to test her, because he said that all Sisodhia men fell in love once and they make it work, so I'm sure there's a twist ;)
Will die to know....just can't wait.... Ranvijay is being to ride to her.... leave it na...love her the way he used to be
How can Ranvijay do this she did nothing to deserve this
Yeah I hate this new change I’m gonna stop reading now super disappointed!
Drastic change
I mean, ah?! Man i want to wait and read why this happened and want them to be back to eachother ? why love has to be comolicated in stories too? Please!
I’m not sure how I feel about this version :-/ I preferred the older version but it’s your book so I trust your verdicts. Ranvijay better go on his knees for forgiveness tho for hurting Matsyaa like that poor girl.
mayuri gupta, Agreed I’m in two minds reading the second book for my sanity because I don’t want Matsyaa to be hurt :(
No .... i hope it still follows the same storyline as before .. what we read in earlier version
Kritiksha Rana, I won't say that it was better. I've always found her updates in the story to be better than previous ones so I'll hold onto that hope that this will be better.
I also think we're all judging too quickly. The prologue is just a glimpse and whatever the relation be, a person does feel a bit possessive of their partner/spouse.
I'm not supporting Ranvijay completely here but to be honest, Matsyaa is the kind of a person who needs to be slapped in the face with reality. If Ranvijay will keep coddling her, she would never see the truth and would always blame him.
I have been following u on wattpad since 2018?and I really don't know why u changed the line of story even the eplique u changed it u made it like matsaya was giving up easily and u also changed ranjvey slot .in the old version he was heels over her
And there were more to the story in the old version .
The old version is still much better ♥️
Veeja, Oh ok
The previous version was quite better. But let see how this version will turn out. But I don’t want that old revenge drama. Ran vijay was obsessed with her but it seems his love and affection just vanished. Moreover he was no other girl than matsya so what happened now. Moreover I don’t want matsya to turn into a weak crying girl tolerating all the tortures.
Well it's ur story u have all rights to change ur story line according to u ❤️
The of old version was better ? according to me .
Hope u don't mind my opinion ?
Like the plot becoz it Matysa time to win Ranvijay love and understand certain things .
Totally agree that how suddenly all his care and love went out.
Yrrr I won't be able to sleep now
Will their love end? Can't wait for last week
I wish Ranvijay's love for her remains the same and through this their relationship changes.
I really don’t want the sequel to follow the usual storyline .. :(. The USP of fist part is it’s uniqueness and it’s strong female character equal to main male character. I really don’t want Matsya character to shape in a weak pitiful wife . Let’s see what’s there in store for us .
I am more curious about her relationship with Veer. I hope they become best friends. It would be fun to read !
I think ranvijay is doing it purposely to said matsyaa away from him to save her if not then i hope ranvijay begs matsyaa for forgiveness. She has suffered alot
Ohhh my godd..this cant be happening..cant wait till month end
O my god...... I am curious is an understatement
I just can't stop commenting !
I wish rather than leaving , matsyaa should have slapped the shit out of him .
I'm so excited for this book
Don’t get yourself hurled with sweet curses from your die hard fans.. Haha.. you surely know to create a lot of curiosity... Loved it!!! Yes we will stay tuned..
Oh lord ! Ranvijay is so going to loose her for good this time.
Sooo confused.... Husband??? Who... Veer... Shruti you are auch a tease. Grhhhhh update soon
Shruti ! Please don't do this yr ? how am I going to concentrate on anything else now . Please start the sequel soon. I can't wait.
Seems like obsession has turned into some revenge game now.
You damn author, uhhhhhhhj my wind gona explode
For sure gonna wreck are mind's
Damn right!!!! It's definitely gonna keep me awake at night ??
you sure know ways to tease us.
I already had sleepless night cause of epilogue and now this uff the wait is killing.
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