Alice in Mapleland
26.12.2020 — ...
#814 in Young adult
#215 in Humor
Sample 55 pages
26.12.2020 — ...
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Just awesome ..... wow what a story ..... ahhhh i love you more for creating such a wonderful story .... it will be my fav forever.....loads of luv to u author .... keep rocking
Наталия Арчер, waiting ..... author
I fell in love with this story from the beginning!! I couldn’t take my eyes off it. Well done author!! My fave story so far!!!
Sarah Wallace, Dear Sarah, you've made my day! ❤️(ˆ‿ˆԅ)
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm happy that you liked it!
Thank you for your comment! It means a lot to every author. To me, especially. Because I cannot speak for others, to tell the truth )))
❤️Wow, wow, wow! ❤️
Awesome! That’s wonderful!✨✨✨✨✨
I finished reading this beautiful story.
It was a great trip. Natalia, you are a miracle!
Thank you for the positive, for the tenderness and for the smile! All this appeals to me! I wish you success!
“ if you were wearing my T-shirt on your naked body, that would be even better”.
Наталия Арчер, ❤️ Oh yeah. Pretty boy.
Alice told Den
“Now, I want to play a doctor and a patient.” ☺️☺️
Wow. Poor boy!
However, she’s playful. Well done.)))))))))
And then it will be more interesting.
I didn't have time to read this weekend.
Tomorrow I'll start chapter 16.1. ✨✨
Wow! Book finished in English. ☺️
Наталия Арчер, Good day! ☺️
Take away from sleep, it will take everything away to the fullest. ❤️
Dennis’s POV. It’s cool. ❤️ Awesome.
Наталия Арчер, Oh yeah!☺️ You are absolutely right. I don't have much time to read. I read in the evenings. Sometimes I read books until night, when the story is interesting. Thanks for the advice! ❤️
Congratulations on finishing a good book.
Наталия Арчер, You are most welcome Nat...waiting for ur new book
This book deserves to be a commercial one. But why do readers seem to not discover very well-written books right away?
Marilyn Lucero, (´｡• ᵕ •｡) ♡
I love it! Pure pleasure!
Thank you very much for the story! I’ll read it not once.
It is a perfect winter story. I'm happy to find it. Will be waiting for the next one.
Good luck, Natalia!
Just Me, Thank you very much! For your inspiring review and your support on the way to the final. :)
Especially, thanks for the reward. It means a lot to me. (｡♥‿♥｡)
it's over already!!! Bravo it was good.
Jessie Achen, Thank you, Jessie! I'm glad that you liked it!
Also, I'm exceptionally grateful for your kind comments and your attention to my work! :)
Thank you! ❤️
Wow!! This is really amazing and sweet...thanks so much...hope to see you soon in a new journey
Наталия Арчер, ??
it was amazing...keep writing Natalia.....I am in love with this book,....can't believe its complete now......Dennis and Alice made a place in my hearts....lovelyyyy.....
DreamerM, Thank you very much! ❤️❤️❤️
Love, love, love! Reading your book has been my reward when I finish a chapter. Imagine how spoiled I felt reading all of these pages! Now I see why your ending took longer than expected haha. It was absolutely perfect. I love the New Year’s celebration, and you aced the epilogue! Perfect amount of space between, I think. I’ve so enjoyed reading this book and what a wonderful way to conclude this beautiful story on first (and true) love. I look forward to reading anything else you write!
Thank you so much, Natalia! It is 90 degrees here, but it feels like Christmas reading your book!
Jocelyn Black, I was writing you my brilliant response, then I was distracted and closed the window without saving/sending it. Very disappointing. ) Fortunately, when I write in Google docs, it saves automatically. Otherwise, I would repeat it every day. ))
Thank you very much, Jocelyn! Your support was always very valuable and precious. I'm very grateful to you for your kind words and for reading my book.
Thank you very much! ❤️❤️❤️
I love this so much, thank you for this beautiful story dear❤
Rose Blaze, Thank you, Rose, very much! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my story!
Lovely as always! I love Alice’s reaction to being seated next to Den’s mom! Such an honest conundrum to have. Go Den for insinuating himself between at the perfect moment. What’s not to love about an attentive man?
LadyoftheTrashPond, Thank you very much for your comment. It's the first one about the upload, I was afraid that it was that bad, but I didn't have the energy to change anything (I would do it if I did have some time)).
I'm finishing the last part. Hope to wrap up everything this week (yeah, I'm already behind the mentioned before schedule (❛‿❛✿̶̥̥)).
Thank you! ❤️
I love it
Jessie Achen, Thank you so much, Jessie! ❤️❤️❤️
Your kind words make me simply happy!
And it's so important to find your source of happiness. :)
it's not what I expected. Bravo author. you are doing some justice here. I love it
Jessie Achen, Thank you very much, Jessie! I'm so happy that you liked it! I'm so grateful that you tried it, first of all! :)
I'm finishing the last chapter now, so I plan to publish the final part this week.
I do hope you will like the book.
Thank you very much!
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Amazing and the cookies are soooooo beautiful
Наталия Арчер, ? yh i noticed....i'm also soo happy with the progress of the book...keep it up
thanks for the update but i wonder what are the reactions of their mothers having not known their stories and now seeing these two making those sweet light intimacy in front of them. Thanks.
Good idea to mention feelings of the mothers, thank you! We know that Alice’s mother knows about a boy, who has broken her daughter’s heart, winning it first. At least she suspects that it was Dennis. :) So she must know that those two, from her husband’s story of meeting the boy, must have feelings. :) It’s easier for moms to share the news. I’m more worried about Alice’s father when he meets Den Richards again. ))
Thank you very much for reading! I’m just happy to know what you think of the story. ❤️
I just loved this chapter! I found myself smiling all the way through it. I love Den’s tee-shirt comment and when Alice takes his hand back after letting it go! Just melts me haha. Great writing as always
LadyoftheTrashPond, Jocelyn, I always melt reading your comments :)
Thank you very much for your high praise. It’s like having Birthday wishes with every update. Thank you! (✿◠‿◠) ❤️
It's a very interesting book, Alice is just so cute and cheeky, Den is taking things seriously which make the story more interesting and they are damn so cute together. I am love the humour and overall the story keeps you hook. Anticipating more chapters. Great work booknet Author
Roseblazee, Thank you so much for the kind words and amazing review. :D
It’s a huge honour for me to get a praise from a fellow-author. Thank you very much! ❤️❤️❤️
Grt work...Alice is sooo cheeky
Nuriya Abuu, Thank you very much, dear Nuriya! ❤️❤️❤️
Love, love, love this last chapter! They are just so cute together, but I also love Jess. As a big sister I can picture myself acting as the virginity guard too haha! Not ready for this to be over yet (sobs)
LadyoftheTrashPond, Thank you very much, Jocelyn, for your support with your inspiring comments! :)
They warm my heart, giving me the energy to write better (exclusively my personal assessment, may not coincide with public opinion)). Thank you so much for that! ❤️
Wow! I love this book, interesting, it got me hooked
Roseblazee, Thank you very much!
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?? luckily it wasn't either parent...grt continuation..waiting
Nuriya Abuu, I'll be honored if you do it, dear Nuriya! Thank you! ❤️
Oooh nice final note! Den is certainly taking things seriously, as he should be! Making the relationship Facebook official right? I remember that being a very big deal in high school haha. Wonderful update as always!
Наталия Арчер, Hahaha you are so welcome! I have been guilty of doing the same thing!
Such an interesting story!
Наталия Арчер, You're welcome. It's such a well-written story.
Nice update. Good to know the story of the “Rabbit” with the clock :-)
Just Me, Thank you very much for reading and leaving comments! It makes me simply happy!
Lovely chapter! The banter is so sweet between them! You definitely capture that essence of first real love
LadyoftheTrashPond, Jocelyn, thank you for your inspiring words! :)
As you said, there are endless possibilities. There is always a place for love.
Remember Orwell's 1984?
Oh, forget it. Wrong example. :D
virginity patrol...LOL. sweet chapter
Thank you very much for reading!
““Take a seat here, please,” I say, asking Alice to sit on my comfortable computer with a gesture.”
It’s the winner of the slips. )) The King of blunders. XD
If you meet anything of that sort, I beg you to let me know, please. :)
Nuriya Abuu, Thank you, Nuriya! It is very important for me that you like it. I can’t stop smiling reading your kind words. Thank you very much! ❤️❤️❤️
I can't wait for their trip to the mountains! Also glad that the formal apology has been made. Den is off the hook, I now forgive him ;-)
Наталия Арчер, Haha so true! Endless possibilities!
??? wat a terrible doc Alice is?? Won't be surprised when they are caught lip-locking ?? ...dennis did gud apologizing... waiting for more have a grt weekend Natalia
Nuriya Abuu, Thank you very much, dear Nuriya! We'll see if they get busted by someone ))
Have a great weekend! I hope to be ready with an update on Monday. :)
Thank you! ❤️❤️❤️
i really love this chapter cant wait to know more about Alice
Angel soko, Thank you very much, Angel! ❤️
There will be more, for sure.
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Wow!! Dennis rlly made Alice freeze bt let's see wat Alice is upto...grt work Natalia
Nuriya Abuu, I'm so happy that you liked it! Thank you very much, Nuriya!
Poor boy, he doesn’t know me at all yet. Haha you put him in his place, Alice!
LadyoftheTrashPond, (¬‿¬) He surely may hope for something behind the words, right? ))
Boys have a really vivid imagination, I've heard. :D
Thank you, Jocelyn, for reading! ❤️
Thank you very much, Nuriya! ≧◠‿◠≦❤️
Hahaha ‘Who grabs people’s asses when they’re just close enough for the deed’ I laughed so hard! Love the humor in this chapter! Eager to see if Alice follows to Den’s room ;)
Oh, thank you so much! ❤️
I reread your comment several times during the day just for good feelings and smiles. And I’m smiling with gratitude now, writing these words. :)
Thank you very much, Jocelyn! ❤️
PS Surely I’ll push Alice towards the door. I want to see his room too. It’s not the time to be selfish. :D
Yay! I'm so glad Den came through. After he started making assumptions, I was definitely siding with Alice. I'm glad he redeemed himself as a good guy.
LadyoftheTrashPond, Thank you very much, Jocelyn!
Thanks for the update, Nat.
dreamweaver, I will be happy if you like it! ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you very much! :-*
Ahh up to chapter 10.5 and it was so beautifully written! I love the rose liquid nitrogen reference, just beautiful! Also, love the way you portray Alice's fear in the kitchen with freezing up. Definitely on point! Such a great read, thank you!
LadyoftheTrashPond, Wow! Unbelievable! Awesome!
Unbelievably awesome. :)
Oh no, I’m all caught up! :*(
LadyoftheTrashPond, Thank you very much, dear Jocelyn!
what a suspense that was....
dreamweaver, Hi! Thank you! ❤️(ˆ‿ˆԅ)
I'm finishing the next chapter. I hope it will be interesting either. :)
Hey archer! sorry i forgot ur name ....i truly am!
very very very nice story. I loved it!!! ....i am loving Den and Alice....keep writing...love
Наталия Арчер, ʕっ•ᴥ•ʔっ(e-hugs) >.
Nuriya Abuu, Hello Nuriya,
I'm planning to make the whole chapter 13 from Den's POV to reveal more about him. :) I hope you'll like it. ❤️
It's a new story by Natasha. Congratulations! Humour, detailed story-telling, small moments which are significant - they are special characteristics of Natasha's writing.
The title is very interesting )) It refers to the famous and well-known Alice whose adventures promise the same extraordinary ones for the main heroine and at the same time the Maple prompts at the certain real place on the map.
The book-cover is bright and living, It gives motion and one can feel the wind blowing and moving you ahead.
The tags reveal the genre and the topics that are waiting for your attention and interest.
Start reading and get speaking names, curious situations and tender relations.
Thank you very much! ❤️
That’s great to have an opportunity to get into Den’s head and see through his eyes. I like! Thanks!
Just Me, Thank you very much! ʕ•́ᴥ•̀ʔっ
I'm so happy that you liked it! I hope other readers enjoyed it as well.
To tell the truth, I always like to read the male's POV much more. )))
Thank you for your support! (ɔ◔‿◔)ɔ ♥
Your story continues thrilling...waiting for more bt take ur time
Nuriya Abuu, Dear Nuriya, Thank you very much! Your words mean a lot to me! ❤️
I’ve read up to ‘The Party’ and laughed out loud when Alice tells Chloe her donut goes to all the right places! So good!
LadyoftheTrashPond, Thank you very much, Jocelyn! ≧◠‿◠≦❤️
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