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Ranking:
#101 in Billionaires
#6 in Romantic fantasy


Ongoing: 11 May 16 pages

Publication: 02.05.2021 — ...


Description of book "Billionaire's wife"

Nishant Mehta is CEO of Mehta groups of company. He is very rich and famous business tycoon. He's natural is not calm he is aggressive rude business minded person. He is eligible bachelor. But still he find her school friend. Which is now disconnected with him because of time. And the other hand isha is innocent soul very calm nature she is happy go Lucky girl. But her financial condition is not as good as compare to Nishant. She is completed her graduation and find job. What happens if he will tie a knot with her he will make her life like hell. Bcoz he doesn't know that she is her school friend which he likes her most but now he is just unknown that he hurt that same girl bcoz he don't know that she is the same girl he crave for.

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Dream Soul
11.05.2021, 21:42:19

I see ur writing has improved... Write future chapters in this format

Dipi
11.05.2021, 21:42:19

Dream Soul, thank you so much ^_^

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Alisha verma
11.05.2021, 20:49:05

there is a improvement in this chapter but you have to be more cautious from next time because there still some grammatical error ,spellings mistake and some words are Missing by adding them which make a proper sense , some of the words are added like...will in some paragraph.... otherwise you improved a lot and i like it....and your story is interesting :)

Dipi
11.05.2021, 20:49:05

Alisha verma, next time I don't repeat this, than you I am happy that you love this story^_^

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Dream of books
08.05.2021, 16:15:01

really dear you explained Maggie also really funny by I like it how you story as it is really happening in front of our eyes nice story update soon

Dipi
08.05.2021, 16:15:01

Dream of books, aww, thanku so much dear (•‿•)

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Tanuja Panda
09.05.2021, 20:59:30

Nice story

Dipi
09.05.2021, 20:59:30

Tanuja Panda, thank you (•‿•)

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Alisha verma
08.05.2021, 21:42:06

there many spelling mistakes and grammatical error and please use comma and full stop and in a proper paragraph otherwise it was very confusing ....try to solve this.. aur you can see any other author story about related how to write in paragraph and both cast P.O.V

Dipi
08.05.2021, 21:42:06

Alisha verma, thank you, sorry I am new so I don't know how to write next time I don't repeat (•‿•)

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Dream of books
07.05.2021, 06:54:38

update soon dear its nice story I think you are from India

Dream of books
07.05.2021, 06:54:38

Dipi, by reading I understood dear I am also from India only so.

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Dream Soul
08.05.2021, 08:38:18

Amazing story update more author

Dipi
08.05.2021, 08:38:18

Dream Soul, Yaa soon ^_^

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Dream Soul
08.05.2021, 08:43:15

U Use inverted, coma in few places but you should use it in every dialogue when the dialogue is mixed with para it becomes confusing and least interesting

Dipi
08.05.2021, 08:43:15

Dream Soul, Thank you for your suggestions I try sorry but I am new so I don't know thank you :-)

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Dream Soul
08.05.2021, 08:39:31

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fariaeity
06.05.2021, 13:26:49

Hey Author, I'm new in this website would love to grow some audience plus support my fellow Authors. Let's Follow each other. I have done, hoping for yours too.

fariaeity
06.05.2021, 13:26:49

Dipi, Thank you

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Dipi
04.05.2021, 11:18:14

can you explain me where is the problem so I can solve it? thank you for comment (•‿•)

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Barnali Mondal
02.05.2021, 17:01:10

Problems with she and he

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