Cruel trap of love

Souheir Benadis 03.03.2021, 21:12:00

Hello guys, please go to my post to have your answers

Swe et Biya 03.03.2021, 19:58:20

is this story finished ? I wonder madison come back to take revenge.

Arundhati Sengupta 03.03.2021, 10:13:34

This ending is kind of incomplete. Do we get an epilogue?

MGMP Bahasa Inggris Kota Cirebon 03.03.2021, 07:05:15

I thought Edward would know the secret about his wife's heart injury. But I am glad he learnt his lesson. Thanks author.

Richa khan 03.03.2021, 06:23:41

why such ending dear,
is any part 2 coming?

Red Delin 03.03.2021, 00:05:59

is this story finished already? It is so incomplete and confusing. There are a lot of lose ends that needs to be clarified.

yamini 03.03.2021, 03:50:37

oh is it going to be paid

yamini 02.03.2021, 20:58:37

author end is not clear

Zoya Khatun 01.03.2021, 15:32:03

Hello author make Eric and Madison became together.

Mylovelyreaders 01.03.2021, 05:51:56

oh thanks author for clarifying:) by the way it was a nice chapter.

Red Delin 01.03.2021, 02:24:36

my dear, your story is really very captivating and i can't wait for your next chapters

Mylovelyreaders 01.03.2021, 10:48:16

I also want Edward to just let her go. after ruining her life don't play this innocent victim card that kill me Madison and all nonsense. If you're really sorry then just let her go man, and let her live. she had suffered enough because of your stupid revenge or whatever it was. Just free her now and then die yourself. Don't involve her in all your shits!! FUCK OFF!!!

Mylovelyreaders 28.02.2021, 07:47:37

I don't understand how she became blind? This Edward is such a cruel character I have ever come across in any book. By the way you write well author, great job. But I want justice for Madison this is too much, way to much. :(

MGMP Bahasa Inggris Kota Cirebon 28.02.2021, 01:24:13

thank author...

MGMP Bahasa Inggris Kota Cirebon 28.02.2021, 00:38:51

thanks for updating regularly.

Shahnaaz Cassim-Azmuth 26.02.2021, 23:46:56

love this book. please do a part two. Really love this Eric guy

Monika Dasgupta 27.02.2021, 08:08:18

I love your story.

Red Delin 27.02.2021, 00:50:57

yes, you have such a nice plot please don't just suddenly end it. Thank you author

Confidence Kelvin 25.02.2021, 21:42:03

wow! so it has part 2?

Maz Ahmed 25.02.2021, 21:09:21

Hope she ends up with eric! Stuff Edward

Red Delin 25.02.2021, 01:48:24

get well soon dear.

Toma Lika 23.02.2021, 15:55:29

this book is too good.thank you

Swe et Biya 24.02.2021, 22:11:32

please dont let antyone die especially madison and edward and yeah we need a new love twist...

MGMP Bahasa Inggris Kota Cirebon 23.02.2021, 13:57:50

thanks author. you are doing great.

MGMP Bahasa Inggris Kota Cirebon 22.02.2021, 12:36:49

I feel sorry and pity. I hope the story does not take so long to complete it, coz I cannot stand to read the cruelity.

Red Delin 22.02.2021, 01:35:26

it was raining here yesterday. i hope today would be sunny. Thanks for a wonderful update.

Ishika Mamurkar 21.02.2021, 20:38:54

why do u maje her blind... it's so heart wrenching... i can't see her more miserable...nd make her run away from edward... he such ruthless nd heartless bastard...

My soul is dark 21.02.2021, 19:45:06

I waiting truth to be come out..

Red Delin 21.02.2021, 05:07:23

Hi there souheir,

I'm glad to know that you're reading and taking into consideration your readers comments and ideas. I really wish that you give this story a different twist because, I'm sick and tired of reading stories that have the same and predictable endings. I've had enough of the same plot wherein the evil male lead still ends up with FL , after abusing and hurting her. your story already has a very good plot and momentum, i just hope you could sustain it till the end. I can't wait to read your different take on this story. Goodluck!!!

Red Delin 20.02.2021, 06:29:09

pls author don't disappoint me by writing a cliché story of forgive and forget

Maz Ahmed 19.02.2021, 21:49:23

Please author please can we have a nee love interest, edward ist tried to get her raped, insulted her on each occasion and verbal and physical abuse and she is expected to forgive him..
be the first author to so something different.. we or i would like edward to regret his actions and be pleased for her to find someone that can cherish her.

Swe et Biya 19.02.2021, 20:52:48

I'm not shipping them... Even she forgives him but he dont deserve her..

Maz Ahmed 19.02.2021, 20:41:19

Need a new love interest

Maz Ahmed 19.02.2021, 20:41:03

Hope she dowsnt end up with Edward, he doesnt desevre her.

My soul is dark 18.02.2021, 12:47:31

Can't wait for that day when edward will regert

Pamela Hardeo 18.02.2021, 09:20:15

lovely story cannot wait to read more

AKARSHITA GOVIND RAO 17.02.2021, 20:34:19

The story is becoming exciting with each passing day.

My soul is dark 14.02.2021, 04:04:08

I dnt want maddison to take revenge,, she will never get her parents back by taking revenge,,.. So she should stay away from Edward nd start his new life with some one else.. Let Edward rotten in hell

Swe et Biya 16.02.2021, 14:29:31

edward dont deserve madison even if he wants her to forgive him but madison deserve better..

Swe et Biya 16.02.2021, 14:28:40

POOR MADISON

Swe et Biya 16.02.2021, 14:24:41

I hate EDWARD BASTARD

My soul is dark 15.02.2021, 21:36:23

Edward is doing big mistake..

Divija Muppidi 14.02.2021, 17:23:09

I would not ever wish death upon even the most cruel person but I'm about to change my mind and say this bastard Edward should die of regret. He must get a very painful death. I'm usually not a violent person but I just hate this asshole

Chanderika Sharma 13.02.2021, 17:27:07

Very good story ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️...

My soul is dark 13.02.2021, 18:32:53

Edward will regret very badly..

Dream Soul 13.02.2021, 20:15:32

Bastard Edward author plz make fl strong and she would take revenge and change ml

AKARSHITA GOVIND RAO 13.02.2021, 19:45:08

I love the plot and how it's progressing... Keep up with the good work dear

Toekey Tasung 12.02.2021, 19:54:42

plot is very interesting

Alora 12.02.2021, 14:30:24