Devil's Snare 1
mafia dark romance, obsession possession madness, cruel and innocent
18.09.2022 — 21.10.2022
#94 in Billionaires
#72 in Romantic erotica
Complete 137 pages
18.09.2022 — 21.10.2022
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First of all, I am so glad I'm reading the completed book. At least I don't have to wait for updates with bated breath. Secondly, I think Maya is the one that ordered Alzea to be burnt and the person she slept with was Raphael. But how could Raphael sleep with her , his twin's girl??? That's too bad. I pray him and Victor don't become sworn enemies over this.
He doesn’t want her talking to other men but let her see him having a bj with another woman. What a hypocrit. I don’t think he’s redeemable. I don’t like ML to cheat on FL just turns me off from book. Especially him not regretting it.
If he is so crazy about her why did he have another woman giving him a bj. I hate that. He never even felt guilty about it he couldn’t possibly feel anything for her and do that. So disappointed with this chapter.
I don’t like that he’s hitting her just because the locket hit his eyes. Also he sexually assaulted her and she never really like it. But at the end she end up falling for a person like that.. I don’t like that he hit her
Why she’s tolerating him? She can find a job anywhere? She’s acting like someone doesn’t have any education. She’s like a maid everyone scolding her. I wouldn’t stay in a place like that I know Rafael will do something after she leave but she needs to try without doing anything and taking all their bullies
Pageluv, well. you are in another country on a visa. you need to work under the wraps.. if not, people have power to do anything..especially men like rafael
Chapter 19 is kind of unrealistic.. Because he has been stalking her for days and she should be able to recognize the voice.. Without asking about vampires etc.. Idk.. but I like the book
Pageluv, i mean...people have different accents in different languages. and when you are being stalked you don't always remember things.. so
Why Victor is asking Rafael to marry someone for their purpose and business but then he marry the one he loves?
Pageluv, you will find the answers in second part
No Rafael has kissed before. I’m chapter 4 that woman was kissing him. So that mean he has kissed
Pageluv, once you read it fully, you will see what everything meant, it will makes sense then
In Chapter 4 the woman who comes to Rafael room is Maya right? So that mean they have done it before according to that chapter. But according to Maya’s POV they have only done it ones
Pageluv, he was remembering it, flashback
For all guys she use the word “Bro”.. That’s brother mostly. We say it to guy friends who we brother zone.. That’s weird she’s calling Rafael bro
Pageluv, who? i used it as informal dont touch me kinda way.. not exactly you are my brother kinda way..kinda like addressing a stranger.. she doesn't know him. so
But Mata cheated on Victor many times right? Because she came to Victor’s room that night and slept with him and even before they have done it
Pageluv, she kinda
his father new wife
I don't usually leave comments, but I wanted to say that your book is really good and well-written.
The story is different from the other mafia love stories I have read. Your book kept me interested and I am excited to read the second book. Well done author I would definitely recommend your books.
Rebecca Berry, Thank you, means a lot ;)
this was really beautiful story.Never read one like this before It got me hooked till the end.You are very talented writer
Prathyusha Chintakindi, thank you for saying that means a lot :)
Thank u author
Sangita Das, you're welcome
What is the age of Alzea? 22 or 25??
Sangita Das, she's 23 when she moved to the country
I know she's being harassed but her being so innocent and naive I can't stop laughing lmao
Sruthionyx, haha poor Zea.He sure did I also had fun lmao
haha poor Zea.He sure did I also had fun lmao
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I think it's Maya ??I mean there's still no other woman in there aside from Sadie and Maya and I think there's no problem with Sadie she's just a bitch with her insults but kaya is another story she will kill anyone in her way specially any woman that will between her and her love one
Naut Gumaga, well that's a secret haha
their father is a disgusting mf!!
I hope Vic will end up with someone else.If it's also Maya who's betraying the brothers that's so unforgivable and the facts she's also cheating.Vic may be an ass but also deserves some1 who loves him and loyal
Naut Gumaga, agreed :)
I'm actually scared for our Zea from this bitch Maya
yeah just now i read your note at the last part lol i thought it was the end..thank you author eagerly waiting for book 2....stay safe!!! ;-))
Eva Celeste Kyamko Villamor, thank you!! you too ;)
Author is it the end?it says it's completed....i panic lol....;-))
Eva Celeste Kyamko Villamor, no haha!! I'll post book 2 soon ;)
I don't think he will let her leave but she surely will try to escape
Klein Prinsesje, we have to try to escape haha!!
she got burned?
Winchesterwhore, some conflict haha
my question is what's in the tattoo Why is this woman so obsessed with zea's tattoo to the point that she wants to burn it Is it related to Zea's past....omg cant wait for the next update...thanks author for this long update ;-))
Eva Celeste Kyamko Villamor, you're welcome.. don't worry all your questions will be answered
I think It was Sadie because she enjoys the pain
Andrea Castillo, ;) we will see..
I think it has something to do with her family or her past.. this attack was to get rid of some evidence but we still need to find out why or what has happened in the past.
Klein Prinsesje, haha!! good one
oh my god. this chapter was intense, i feel bad for her
Anna Maria, me too (laughs evilly)
now thats dark love it how she is still being sarcastic while she is in pain !!! i laughed really hard at that hahah i can't
Iammemust, copig mechanims hehe
normally i dont like dark romance author, but you got me captivate from chapter 1. i hope to read more in the futurei am excited seeing where this buk is going to go. i like Rafael so much the dream paragrah is really good you described it like a movie! cant wait to read more. i like vampire diaries and swrial killer references sp much
Kritika Singh, thank you!! yes we love Rafael even though he is twisted and sadistic ;)..
Update soon...am soo excited
Ananya George, will update on Wednesday;)
effect on too much watching horror movies Zea haahahahah dont underestimate Rafael ;-))
Eva Celeste Kyamko Villamor, true ;)
burn her tatoo. she going to die
Anna Maria, she is he main lead... so haha
he knew where she was hiding and still chose to play game with herhe is a sickoand she is smart for real
Iammemust, he's mr. sick so...
I have no idea who wants to get to Alzea or burn her tattoo. Maybe it has something to do with her father?
Sruthionyx, great I cannot wait to find out
It was Mr Paul
Andrea Castillo, keep guessing haha ;)
Alzea is so naive but at the same time smart hahahahaha liked her attitude ;-))
Eva Celeste Kyamko Villamor, she is ;) but we love her haha
updare please. i wwnt to kniw what rafa will do next when will she find about gim?? and what will.she do??
Winchesterwhore, will update soon my dear......... gotta wait!!
I am glad that we can read it again!
Klein Prinsesje, ;) thank you..
omg!! i am sorry, i sww that the likes and comments are deleted too. what a waste, i hope you get them back. also, who is spying on Alzea? so many enemiez so many possibilities.
Winchesterwhore, i know :( i want to cry lol
getting more exciting author. love your writing akills
Iammemust, thank you :)
Jeffery dahmers ghost?? haha
Anna Maria, what can i say ;)
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