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#114 in Romance
#26 in Contemporary Romance
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161 pages
18.03.2021 — 12.04.2021
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Total number of threads: 63
Mariam Mehmood 15.04.2021, 18:02:23
Hey author!
Just wanna acknowledge your work. Usually I’m not into reading books and all that stuff but to be honest this was my first book that I read and probably the best decision I made to read this book. This book and the characters are so on point. Especially the way you portray the leading character of Desmond and his dominance was the bestest of all. And the scene before the wedding anniversary was so so emotional and heartbreaking. Overall the plot, leading and supporting characters were so good.
I wish you all the best for your future dear author. Hope to see you writing great stories again. You have a very bright future ahead and I can see that. Keep writing. Blessings to you.
Regards:
Your Fan
Mariam Mehmood
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Failia Baighaan 16.04.2021, 08:32:34
Mariam Mehmood, Thank you very much for your reveiw and support! it means a lot. I'm glad you liked it. .
Tanvi XD 13.04.2021, 23:54:40
Is there anything in the third chapter
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Surekha Madiwal 13.04.2021, 21:04:49
its really nice reading it...
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RUCHIKA NAHATA 13.04.2021, 20:55:43
waiting
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RUCHIKA NAHATA 12.04.2021, 13:39:20
sequel will be free
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Dr-Hana Khalid 12.04.2021, 03:34:37
Nice ending
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Beautiful princess 11.04.2021, 16:58:14
Awesome❤
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Dr-Hana Khalid 11.04.2021, 06:53:29
Nice update
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Dr-Hana Khalid 09.04.2021, 06:17:03
We want them to be together
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Sabiha Sultana 08.04.2021, 08:37:14
I hope everything will be alright between them
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Nada Yousry 07.04.2021, 19:55:01
I want to know more, why is he treating her like that?
Interesting story
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Dr-Hana Khalid 06.04.2021, 18:55:25
We want happy ending dear author
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Chanderika Sharma 06.04.2021, 18:55:14
Amazing writer ♥️♥️❤️❤️❤️❣️.
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Beautiful princess 06.04.2021, 16:31:09
Update plzzz
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Beautiful princess 06.04.2021, 16:30:57
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Beautiful princess 05.04.2021, 12:53:20
It hurts when ester gets hurt .. i dont get it the behaviour of desmond ones he will be good n other time he changes! I know there will reasons behind it ...but then too i feel bad for ester ... waiting for next update
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Mahzabeen Khan Tumpa 05.04.2021, 11:57:18
This is so sad.....
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mirha ali 05.04.2021, 09:20:44
wating for what next...
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Dr-Hana Khalid 05.04.2021, 07:34:22
I feel bad for ester when finally she thought Desmond is changing he returned to his usual cold self
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Beautiful princess 05.04.2021, 05:58:07
Poor ester how much she's sufering... but i have feeling desmond likes her too but for some reason he's behaving like that to her
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mirha ali 04.04.2021, 21:09:50
intresting
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Dr-Hana Khalid 04.04.2021, 16:38:45
Hope so Desmond will also open to ester the way she did
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Dr-Hana Khalid 03.04.2021, 17:18:07
Please try to update daily
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Failia Baighaan 03.04.2021, 18:21:10
Dr-Hana Khalid, I will. Just had some problems but I will upload daily now.
Beautiful princess 02.04.2021, 08:20:31
Update please
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Dr-Hana Khalid 01.04.2021, 14:09:23
Finally a good change in Desmond
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Rupsa Roy 01.04.2021, 09:49:49
I like this Desmond.
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Dr-Hana Khalid 30.03.2021, 13:28:18
Want Desmond to reveal his reason of hatred for ester
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Mavis Yeboah 30.03.2021, 12:35:51
Eiii what is wrong with this girl.
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Sweet Girl 28.03.2021, 16:08:18
Awesome
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Sweet Girl 28.03.2021, 15:44:56
Awesome ???
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Sweet Girl 28.03.2021, 15:13:54
Nice
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Dr-Hana Khalid 28.03.2021, 13:36:40
The story got us hooked up
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Dr-Hana Khalid 28.03.2021, 13:36:20
Keep up the good work dear author
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Chanderika Sharma 27.03.2021, 16:21:18
Your writing skills are so unique ❤️❤️
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Dr-Hana Khalid 27.03.2021, 12:24:56
Nice update
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WS 26.03.2021, 11:38:08
I hope he won't hurt her when they go back home
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Sweet Girl 25.03.2021, 08:21:22
It's so emotional
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Sweet Girl 25.03.2021, 07:59:12
Nice
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Dr-Hana Khalid 25.03.2021, 03:12:34
O no don’t want them to be separated
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Sweet Girl 24.03.2021, 14:06:14
Awesome
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Sweet Girl 24.03.2021, 11:47:03
Awesome
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Sweet Girl 24.03.2021, 11:36:11
Nice
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Sweet Girl 24.03.2021, 10:30:36
Emotional one
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Sweet Girl 24.03.2021, 10:30:36
Emotional one
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Dr-Hana Khalid 24.03.2021, 08:55:49
We want happy ending between Desmond and ester
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Sweet Girl 24.03.2021, 08:26:07
It's emotional
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Sweet Girl 24.03.2021, 08:15:35
Nice
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Sweet Girl 24.03.2021, 07:47:45
Awesome
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Sweet Girl 24.03.2021, 07:24:01
Interesting
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Dr-Hana Khalid 23.03.2021, 15:24:10
Hope so Desmond will open to ester and stop hating her
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