Book. "Fallen" read online
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Ranking:
#743 in Romantic fantasy
#351 in Supernaturals


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Publication: 05.01.2020 — ...


Description of book "Fallen"

Book #1 This is a story of magic, the cycle of life and true love.

There once was an old woman who looked after the animals, the deities and all of the unknown. It is a peaceful life until one day, a deity comes crashing from the sky, in need of her help. Fortunately her granddaughter is not too far behind.

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Izzy
03.08.2020, 11:43:07

I can't believe I'm only reading this now... it's amazing :))

HypGothic
04.08.2020, 00:52:09

Izzy, you are too kind. Thank you for your lovely words. It means a lot.

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clfford onyinyechi perpetual
05.06.2020, 02:38:10

great story

HypGothic
05.06.2020, 02:40:22

clfford onyinyechi perpetual, thank you for your kind comment

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Ryo Francis
19.02.2020, 13:44:59

One down, two to go.

(1). Wow again — this is very original to me, because i don't know anything about babushka, aonghus, caer and samhain. So, reading your story is educational for me. Thanks :)
(2). Again, i need my dictionary ready when i read your stuff
(3). Short chapters = a joy to read for me

HypGothic
19.02.2020, 21:27:34

Ryo Francis, gosh, thank you so much for your kind words.

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AnnaRCase guru
26.01.2020, 02:27:04

oh I didn't realize this was modern times.

AnnaRCase guru
26.01.2020, 11:16:44

HypGothic, ok.

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AnnaRCase guru
26.01.2020, 02:27:16

its getting hot

HypGothic
26.01.2020, 05:11:15

AnnaRCase, fire extinguishers to the rescue!

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:38:46

I loved this first Fallen!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!

HypGothic
14.01.2020, 09:20:15

Emma Swan, :) yay thank you xo

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:02:57

ch.1 Scottish lads... hmmm... But, why "babushka"?! has something to do with Kate Bush's song or you simply like the word?

HypGothic
14.01.2020, 09:19:38

Emma Swan, haha I think she thought that Babushka was a young sexy woman and liked the word & yes, there were no milfs or cougars back then :)

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:12:10

ch1. "Aside from her family *visiting her..."

HypGothic
14.01.2020, 09:10:52

Emma Swan, great. Thank you. I will check it

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:25:24

ch.3 "Anna's familiar *stew"

HypGothic
14.01.2020, 09:10:29

Emma Swan, oh brilliant. Thank you. I will look for that xo

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:05:30

ch.1 I like Eka, but... 7 days

HypGothic
14.01.2020, 09:10:03

Emma Swan, cool. It's a great number

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:04:13

ch.1 keep his body in the house?! ok, definitely creepy...

HypGothic
14.01.2020, 09:09:21

Emma Swan, I wanted it to go beyond the normal but the number seven is also magic. It is the number of the highest power, be it god or whatever it is. I wanted to show that she could not let go of him and that it was longer than most.

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:30:02

ch.4 the swan story... sooo romantic...

Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:07:44

HypGothic, awwww...

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 08:57:21

ch.1 "She knew the woods well enough to know..." how do you think replacing "to know" with "to understand" just to avoid another repetition?!

Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:01:48

HypGothic, :))))

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:34:20

ch.5 please, don't tell me that the gorgeous angel is here to take Eka away...

HypGothic
14.01.2020, 08:55:35

Emma Swan, the cycle of life.... Actually he is honouring her and returning the favour of looking after him when he was vulnerable

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:32:24

ch.5 wow!!!! this was fast!!!!

HypGothic
14.01.2020, 08:54:49

Emma Swan, there might have been some rumpy pumpy that I chose not to mention.

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:23:47

ch.3 oh, Katrina... he's an angel... It's understandable

HypGothic
14.01.2020, 08:52:54

Emma Swan, yep agreed

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:18:04

ch. 2 and Katrina came... I wish that her and Aonghus...

HypGothic
14.01.2020, 08:52:35

Emma Swan, hehehe

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:10:30

ch.1 oh, I see now why Babushka... the grandchildren and so on...

HypGothic
14.01.2020, 08:50:46

Emma Swan, ah yes and her originally being Russian. She starts a family in Scotland

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 08:53:15

ch.1 also, the repetition of the word "loud".

HypGothic
14.01.2020, 08:47:50

Emma Swan, thank you. I will look at that.

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 08:51:35

ch.1 try replacing "slowly" or "slower"... the repetition it's a bit distracting.

HypGothic
14.01.2020, 08:47:36

Emma Swan, Oh good one. Thank you

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Emma Swan
14.01.2020, 09:31:36

ch.4 a warm kiss... yes!!!!!!

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Goodness Shadrach
11.01.2020, 11:36:38

interesting, rushed but interesting. I enjoyed it. going for the sequel now : )

HypGothic
11.01.2020, 10:47:54

Goodness Shadrach, just a short story. I never intended for it to go further

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Renuka Kadlag
06.01.2020, 12:59:47

i loved this story. Can we get more of this please. And keep going...

HypGothic
06.01.2020, 22:43:38

Renuka Kadlag, I will, I promise. Please can you consider liking my page and book and you will get notifications when I do. I have been thinking on a sequel.

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Lisa Lay
06.01.2020, 00:20:26

good story

HypGothic
05.01.2020, 23:15:31

Lisa Lay, thank you. It came to me in a dream

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