Description of book "His Heaven"
She gasped as she saw him covering the remaining distance between then. Her back was already pressing hardly against the wall. This was the first time fear had entirely covered her being. She was never a timid shy girl but a girl who loved to accept challenges and embrace her fears, but the man in front of her made her doubt her self.
Placing his hands on the either sides of her head he tilted his head to look directly into her eyes. Moving a step ahead he hissed near her ear " ready to bear the consequences babe" Venom dripping from his voice made her froze.
Where as she stood still as to not provoke him further or avoid any other contact with him.
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Log innice one , i would really like to read future
The story is nicely written! Can't wait to read more soon
Nice story can i just get to know this male lead name plzzzz pretty plzzzz
Nice story so far, I like it.
If you don't mind, I would suggest you make paragraphs. Also, it helps the reader if you highlight in bold letters whose POV it is, and indent between the POVs.
Good luck!
Danny Nat, always dear =)
Very interesting, can't wait for more chapters update
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