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Hiwaga and Alfonso

Plume Alter

Story about:romance, mythical beings, urban fa

35 32 808

#31 in Urban fantasy
#263 in Short stories

Complete 10 pages

Publication: 08.11.2019 — 11.11.2019
Contests: Once Upon a Time

Description of book "Hiwaga and Alfonso"

Waiting can be a very painful process. Will someone endure the process of waiting in exchange for the glory of love? Discover a one of a kind mythical love story that will surely melt your heart away.

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noveltealover 27.07.2020, 05:19:02

Hullo! :) This was a beautifully written short story. I've always enjoyed stories steeped in mythology and folklore so it's probably why I enjoyed reading this a lot haha. I also really like your writing style and you have a way with words with your descriptions. I like how you transitioned between the past and present where it starts off with Alfonso as an elderly man reminiscing on his youth. And so, we see as a young man, Alfonso and his friend Erning are an adventurous and curious pair after they pass by the Acacia tree on their way to the festival. And then they try to see if they can spot any mystical beings that have been rumoured to linger around the area haha. And ooh so only Alfonso saw Hiwaga bathing in the lake but his friend didn't. I wonder if maybe it's because she decided to let only Alfonso see her or if he perhaps had a second sight? That being said, she appeared at the festival and they fell in love. In a way, I saw this as a tale of Alfonso telling his son the story of how he and his mother met and the love they had for each other even after so many years apart. Great story and I'll be back some time to start on your other ongoing story. Till then! ^_^

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Plume Alter 28.07.2020, 04:27:32

noveltealover, omg!!!! Thank you for this comment. This really made my day. Thank you so much for the support. It really means a lot to me.

muthulakshmi G 20.07.2020, 20:26:04


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muthulakshmi G 24.07.2020, 13:26:12

Plume Alter, l like you story ❤️ I followed you about you followed me ❤️ you read my story pls you feel happy smile and you give comment and stare.thank you

Gigi Jamiro 16.02.2020, 13:51:02

Hiwaga means 'mystery' - are you by chance a Filipino?

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Gigi Jamiro 02.07.2020, 16:47:37

Plume Alter, Ikaw din, ingat

Plume Alter 01.07.2020, 22:11:31

i just revisited my story here. it's been 7 months since this was posted.

Gigi Jamiro 16.02.2020, 13:53:42

Oh okay, read the first part - you are a pinoy! Proud of you to make it here!

Goodness Shadrach 28.11.2019, 17:14:28

very interesting and I really love it.

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Plume Alter 29.11.2019, 15:23:49

Goodness, Thank you so much for the positive feedback!

Booknet Authors 22.11.2019, 21:43:14

We just noticed that your story does not have Short Story listed as 1 of your 2 genres. Please change to be considered for our finalist list.

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Booknet Authors 24.11.2019, 19:43:53

Plume Alter, Thank you!

Roza Csergo 18.11.2019, 15:41:59

Wishing you good luck in the competition.

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Plume Alter 20.11.2019, 05:46:02

Roza Csergo, Thank you so much Roza!

Booknet Authors 13.11.2019, 15:00:32

When you complete your story you will have to send an email to the contest’s moderator ( letting them know that your participating book is complete. Only completed stories will be considered for the shortlist and winning book, so be certain to mark your story as COMPLETE on your Litnet profile.
The format of the letter:
Topic: “Once upon a Time,” Story Complete
Text: I (your name-pseudonym + link to your Litnet profile) have completed my story “Name of Your book” on (date when you have finished) and have published and submitted it for the contest in full. Please include my story in the list of the finalists.
After this, your story will be among the contest’s finalist and you will be considered for the main prize.

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Booknet Authors 13.11.2019, 18:54:18

Litnet Authors, They just notified me after I posted this comment. Thank you!

KrissAy Escoro Escobidal 12.11.2019, 10:45:31

I love the story.. ❤️

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Plume Alter 12.11.2019, 17:00:21

KrissAy Escoro Escobidal, Thank you for the support ateee.

Plume Alter 11.11.2019, 17:20:29

I finally finished it!!! I hope the rest of you will enjoy reading it. Please know that your comments and suggestions will be looked forward to and deeply appreciated.

Ps. I edited many parts in the story. God speed!

Athena Bock 09.11.2019, 18:19:22

so interesting

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Plume Alter 09.11.2019, 19:56:22

Thank you for the comment, Athena Bock!

JA Renwrite 09.11.2019, 09:35:57

this story remind me of Juanito Alfonso and Carmella Montecarlos haist

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Plume Alter 09.11.2019, 17:20:33

JA Renwrite, Thanks for reading, Miss JA Renwrite!

Marilyn Lucero 09.11.2019, 07:12:01

This is interesting. I followed you.

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Plume Alter 09.11.2019, 08:10:31

Thank you , Miss Marilyn.

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