Description of book "How to Save a Life"
Xander Lawson is a man with a double life. On one hand, he is the brilliant billonaire architect and on the other the dangerous son of the most feared mafia boss. his two lives are like oil and water, they do not mix.
this all changes when he is involved in a car accident and he is saved by Sage and immediately feels a strange connection between them that neither of them can explain.
After a series of events that endanger both their lives, it seems the unnamable bond between them only grows stronger. and then they get stuck together in a house during a lockdown.
what will happen? will they finally be able to unravel the mystery of what they feel?
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Log inHello. You have too much narrative exposition and background information for each character, and they slow down the flow of the story. My suggestion is to add only needed information about each character as you write so that the you can sustain readers' interest.
Ginnie S Chua, Thank you so much, I kinda was thinking the same thing. I'm working on it.
Hi, kindly add billionaire tag to the story for it to be accepted to the contest.
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