Book. "Mated " read online
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Ranking:
#169 in Paranormal Romance
#2157 in Romance


On Hold: 26 Apr 0 pages

Publication: 15.03.2022 — ...


Description of book "Mated "

I have been chosen from birth to be the mate to the alpha of the strongest werewolf tribe even though I am human.
I have trained for this moment all my life, but now when I am to be joined with my alpha, I have been kidnapped by the most notorious group of terrorists.
I fear the leader, but not for my life. I fear that he has stolen my heart, and yet I must flee him, for I must be joined with my betrothed. I am Shira.

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Madukaife Chidiogo
11.06.2022, 23:22:58

author I hope all is well

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Slow poison
07.06.2022, 14:09:00

why are you not updating your book is pretty much interesting tho

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Slow poison
29.04.2022, 16:46:04

such an awesome story dear I would love to read hope to see you update soon

Slow poison
30.04.2022, 22:37:03

June Estee, :)

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Madukaife Chidiogo
27.04.2022, 13:03:21

nice update please update soon thanks

June Estee
30.04.2022, 21:29:35

Madukaife Chidiogo, Okay. I would try to update soon. Glad you enjoy it

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Madukaife Chidiogo
19.04.2022, 13:23:40

so much for Shira escape plans. can't wait for next update to know the punishment for Shira from the shark please update soon thanks

June Estee
19.04.2022, 13:43:19

Madukaife Chidiogo, Yes. Would update soon. Funny enough, even I wish Shira escaped too.

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Madukaife Chidiogo
17.04.2022, 22:37:12

Shira is so confuse of her feelings for the shark but still I love her characters can't wait to see how she will pull off her escaping plans please update Author thanks

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Kuhle
15.04.2022, 16:48:42

oooh, i'm getting goosebumps from that last paragraph. and i really like Shira's character traits—she's all feisty and she has a bit of a rebellious spirit. love it.

June Estee
15.04.2022, 20:34:26

Kuhle, Thanks so much. Like I said earlier, she's one of my best heroines too.

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Kuhle
15.04.2022, 16:42:32

i would be angry like how Shira is. imagine spending your whole life being trained, taught all these things in preparation of mating an alpha, only to get kidnapped! i hope Farok does something about it.

June Estee
15.04.2022, 20:33:51

Kuhle, ❤️ I'm actually as excited as you are. I've drafted the whole story, but I have to look at the draft to remember what happens next.

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Love Egbejale
15.04.2022, 12:06:05

nice. loved it. keep up the good work author.

June Estee
15.04.2022, 14:05:33

Love Egbejale, Thank you so much

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Kuhle
15.04.2022, 12:50:22

this is a great opening to the story. i love the fact that Shira is a badass and can fight; she's not some damsel in distress just because she's human. really looking forward to reading more. keep it up, author.

June Estee
15.04.2022, 14:05:24

Kuhle, Thank you so much. As a writer myself, the heroine is one of my favorites ever written.

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Ginnie S Chua
12.04.2022, 17:41:31



You have an interesting idea here--a woman caught in a love triangle between two men, one as a chosen mate, and the other as her choice. But I think you tipped your hand too early with Chapter 8, introducing a character that was not present in previous scenes, and then subsequently hinted in the next chapters. You've written in a few decoys to keep the reader guessing, but those details will be a problem to clean up as you progress. If you want to keep readers in the dark, my suggestion is to do a limited POV using Shira's character and eliminate chapter 8 together. If you want to keep the multi-POV of both main characters, you can continue Shark's POV, but with slight hints.

The easiest way is to openly let readers know Shark's identity through his own POV, while retaining Shira's ignorance through her own POV. The readers will feel they are holding an ace, and sympathize more with Shira.

I hope my comments will be helpful to you when you start revising. Good luck in the contest.

June Estee
14.04.2022, 15:30:32

Ginnie S Chua, Thank you so much for this comment. It's obvious this is really an honest review. The whole point if chapter 8 was to keep the readers a little bit doubtful. To believe the Shark is actually Farok, and then not be very sure about it.
Another thing I am trying to create is the impression that even though they may be one, they have two personalities. I want readers to look forward to meeting Farok also.
Thank you so much for reading.

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Madukaife Chidiogo
10.04.2022, 15:50:49

so finally it happened awww so sweet but not happy with the shark anyway I hope he comes to his senses waiting for next update .u are doing a great job author

June Estee
11.04.2022, 01:35:26

Madukaife Chidiogo, Thanks so much? The Shark is still grieving over the death of his former mate though

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Priya Amour
18.03.2022, 15:42:49

The story plot is an amazing author. The first chapter seems so great with the cliffhanger in the end. keep up this good work.

June Estee
30.03.2022, 20:17:30

AYIRP, Thank you so much

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Dranel Penumbra
19.03.2022, 14:41:21

Currently in a tug of war moment but instead it is entertainingly one-sided. Lovely storytelling and characters--can't wait to read more about them

June Estee
30.03.2022, 20:17:18

Dranel Penumbra, Thank you. This means a lot coming from you. I can tell that you fully appreciate a well written novel

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Madukaife Chidiogo
19.03.2022, 16:46:24

just love this novel .read it in one go please am begging you Author please update Author

June Estee
30.03.2022, 20:16:27

Madukaife Chidiogo, I sure will!!!

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Rachel WesternWind
20.03.2022, 07:46:37

Very interesting situation this young lady has gotten herself into. I like the flow you have established and the suspense. Will follow.

June Estee
30.03.2022, 20:16:12

Rachel WesternWind, Thank you so much. I appreciate

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Heartfixer
20.03.2022, 13:58:04

Interesting plot! Waiting for more!

June Estee
30.03.2022, 20:16:00

Heartfixer, Thanks for reading ?

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carol onumonu
20.03.2022, 14:33:31

Interesting story and I love your style, it's quite unique. Please update. I really want to know if the Shark would go ahead and punish Shira, although I doubt he would.

June Estee
30.03.2022, 20:15:49

carol onumonu, Thank you so much for reading ? I'm sure you know now what happened next

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Dr-Hana Khalid
20.03.2022, 16:01:46

The story is getting interesting with every update

June Estee
30.03.2022, 20:15:16

Dr-Hana Khalid, Thanks. I'm sorry I haven't replied until now, my account was restricted

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Madukaife Chidiogo
23.03.2022, 01:20:02

so that means Farok is the shark right . can't wait for next update to know if the shark would punish Shira or not please update soon thanks

June Estee
30.03.2022, 20:14:56

Madukaife Chidiogo, I'm sorry I haven't responded to your comment until now, my account was restricted. I'm sure you know now what happened next. Please like, and add it to your library. Thanks for reading