Midnight Call

Jarvic 05.04.2021, 20:04:57

I request others to read my book ' I will love you till my last breath.' if you like it then please give it a star and comment and ya follow me.
thankyou

Jarvic 05.04.2021, 20:03:22

hello I liked your story keep it up

Miss J 05.04.2021, 17:34:11

This chapter is fantastic and nice introduction by the way. Very simple and clear, how your characters play out and fit into their roles.

Points to note though: You need to work on letting Krista remain a female. You used a lot of male pronouns to identify her which made it difficult to understand some lines.
It was her mom calling her daughter that clarified it for me. Please try and fix these errors.

Also, keep up the good work. Already added to my library, will read and comment as I go.

Emma Louise 05.04.2021, 17:17:12

I liked your first three chapters I think that it has good content but when referring girl on the story it gets confusing when you use he instead if she. Third chapter is not the same s the second I guess you changed it. Good start don’t wit for more chapters.

Arcane 05.04.2021, 13:12:30

dear, you really write good.... I don't think that you're writing first time because your skills are really good.... but one more thing, I think you published chapter 2 again as chapter 3? both are same....
well it's up to you... and yeah dear, I also know if you have read my book or not, but give my book a star only if you like my idea from your heart. I don't take star in return of star or followers in return of doing follow... I hope you understand.... all the best....

Heena Kundra 05.04.2021, 12:58:35

can't believe you're writing first time... it's really good .. all the best...