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Midnight Call

G A Rosell

Story about:mystery, death, night

22 10 161

#28 in Mystery
#19 in Suspense

Ongoing: 09 Apr 26 pages

Publication: 03.04.2021 — ...

Description of book "Midnight Call"

Krista Dunaway escaping from her past, arrives in New York City, and just on the same night that the pandemic begins, mysterious calls from her own apartment begin to happen every midnight. Can you unravel a mystery from the past with the calls of the present? And above all, will you be able to survive the experience?

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Total number of threads: 6

Jarvic 05.04.2021, 20:04:57

I request others to read my book ' I will love you till my last breath.' if you like it then please give it a star and comment and ya follow me.

Jarvic 05.04.2021, 20:03:22

hello I liked your story keep it up

Miss J 05.04.2021, 17:34:11

This chapter is fantastic and nice introduction by the way. Very simple and clear, how your characters play out and fit into their roles.

Points to note though: You need to work on letting Krista remain a female. You used a lot of male pronouns to identify her which made it difficult to understand some lines.
It was her mom calling her daughter that clarified it for me. Please try and fix these errors.

Also, keep up the good work. Already added to my library, will read and comment as I go.

Emma Louise 05.04.2021, 17:17:12

I liked your first three chapters I think that it has good content but when referring girl on the story it gets confusing when you use he instead if she. Third chapter is not the same s the second I guess you changed it. Good start don’t wit for more chapters.

Arcane 05.04.2021, 13:12:30

dear, you really write good.... I don't think that you're writing first time because your skills are really good.... but one more thing, I think you published chapter 2 again as chapter 3? both are same....
well it's up to you... and yeah dear, I also know if you have read my book or not, but give my book a star only if you like my idea from your heart. I don't take star in return of star or followers in return of doing follow... I hope you understand.... all the best....

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G A Rosell 05.04.2021, 13:23:33

Arcano, No, that was a mistake :( So anxious to publish a story produce this type of mistakes *TT

Heena Kundra 05.04.2021, 12:58:35

can't believe you're writing first time... it's really good .. all the best...

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G A Rosell 05.04.2021, 13:01:11

Heena Kundra, OMG, Thank U so much for reading, every week will be another chapter. I hope see you in coments, and a lot of thanks to take your time to read my story.

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