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My Brother's Keeper

Payal Mandal

Story about:forbidden love, mafia, love and hate

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Ranking:
#5 in ChickLit
#26 in Contemporary Romance


Ongoing: 23 Jun 143 pages

Publication: 07.05.2021 — ...
Contests: Forbidden Love


Description of book "My Brother's Keeper"

"Don't you dare to touch me."
"Oh Really? Why would I listen to you? You are my wife, I can touch you wherever I want"

Lucian Frederick, an Australian mafia who is obsessed over a young and beautiful Nina Walker so much that he ends up abducting and marrying her. Soon his obsession develops into genuine feelings but that's when he finds out that she loves his brother Jasper, who has Schizophrenia which makes him question one thing, is it love that Nina has for Jasper or it's something else?

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Mahamotha Khatun
11.06.2021, 06:05:36

me also what ???? I loved that ghost part , sweet possessed demon haha , love it dear

Payal Mandal
11.06.2021, 05:15:24

Mahamotha Khatun, Thank you :)

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Darsha riti
09.06.2021, 17:30:58

Ohh..yes some ghost must be possessing him...hahaha...Sudden changes is Lucian..Let's see ye kab tak rhta

Payal Mandal
10.06.2021, 04:22:51

Darsha riti, ;)

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Piyu Aggarwal
09.06.2021, 17:22:00

Lucian considering someone's words well that's something new bt chlo dekhte ye v
Waah nakli sweetness dikha ra ye to
Ab ese ekdm se acha acha behave kra ekdm se koi v smjhega k bhoot ghus gya h wrna ese log kabhi ni badal skte
Or ye bhi ni bdla bs ek nakab phn lia h kuch tym k liye

Payal Mandal
10.06.2021, 04:22:31

Piyu Aggarwal, Let's see ;)

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Zunish Khan
09.06.2021, 13:03:48

That ghost part was funny. Jasper is doing all this for nina's safety. who was on the phone call and talking about which videos?

Payal Mandal
09.06.2021, 10:23:34

Zunish Khan, Will get to know soon ;)

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Saloni Seth
09.06.2021, 10:44:38

this is unbelievable lucian is considering Jasper's words

Payal Mandal
09.06.2021, 10:23:17

Saloni Seth, :p

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Mahamotha Khatun
09.06.2021, 09:51:05

what happened to Jasper I am so egar to know

Payal Mandal
09.06.2021, 07:39:54

Mahamotha Khatun, :p

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Beautiful princess
09.06.2021, 08:10:09

Haha " lucian had been possessed by a ghost " :))

Beautiful princess
09.06.2021, 05:15:48

Payal Mandal, Thanks for the update!! i love itt❤❤

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Zunish Khan
08.06.2021, 01:25:42

14 parts completed and i am loving nina's confidence Tit for tat. thr bastards like Lucian deserves this. i am feeling bad for jasper. In his hallucinations megan is too much ughhh she made him so weak

Payal Mandal
08.06.2021, 01:15:03

Zunish Khan, :)

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Darsha riti
07.06.2021, 15:44:08

Jasper and Nina look comfortable together. They're able to take each-other's pain at least. Who was on that call now..

Payal Mandal
08.06.2021, 01:14:58

Darsha riti, :)

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Zunish Khan
07.06.2021, 13:50:57

Finally completed 8 parts
i am hating lucian such a bastard he is. who doesn't know how to respect a women and treat her like an object bloody mindset. Hope jasper will help nina. Nina is strong I am feeling happy how she kicked him he literally deserves this proud of nina

Payal Mandal
07.06.2021, 11:56:54

Zunish Khan, :))

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Zunish Khan
07.06.2021, 12:24:59

4 parts completed. Jesper is going through all this but overall he is a gentleman and sweet guy. His sweet gestures are enough to attract attention. Nina is going through something worst what happened with her i am just curious to know it. on the other side Guy like Lucian ughh they are bastards who even Don't now how to respect a girl.

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Saloni Seth
07.06.2021, 11:45:14

if i got a chance i will surely kill lucian

Payal Mandal
07.06.2021, 08:52:46

Saloni Seth, :p

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Zunish Khan
07.06.2021, 11:07:10

Finally Stated this Story Prologue was amazing Nina will surely Blast on Lucian. 1st part was interesting Lucian is quite a dangerous man But i was expecting it because he is a mafia leader. Jesper character is quite interesting I don't know much about his disease but hallucinations is so bad manh. Nina is strong Kind girl Hope she will get rid from problems

Payal Mandal
07.06.2021, 08:20:33

Zunish Khan, :)

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Piyu Aggarwal
07.06.2021, 08:31:46

Lucian ko koi pyar vyar ni hai nina se its like ek bigda hua bacha h jise har wo chiz chahiye jispr uski nazar pd jaaye insan ko v khilona smmjhta ye Jasper nina are Love Kon h ye jo phn kia nina ko jo nina ekdm darr gyi

Payal Mandal
07.06.2021, 05:41:22

Piyu Aggarwal, :p

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Mahamotha Khatun
07.06.2021, 04:26:59

now who is he ????

Payal Mandal
07.06.2021, 05:23:09

Mahamotha Khatun, let's see ;)

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Mahamotha Khatun
06.06.2021, 09:02:42

I think Lucian done something with Megan & that led her to die , that's why Jasper is also miserable now

Mahamotha Khatun
06.06.2021, 09:52:56

Payal Mandal, thank you

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Darsha riti
05.06.2021, 16:49:10

Well, on a serious note, I want to kill Lucian... He is a fu*king asshole...I just can't tolerate him... Nina and Jasper kissed...but jasper regretted it...nd nina is scared of whom..

Payal Mandal
06.06.2021, 01:30:09

Darsha riti, Let's see ;)

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Piyu Aggarwal
05.06.2021, 16:10:44

Lucian is scared waah
He ended up smiling but deserve to krta ni ye bnda smile krna
Chutiya shi me ese insan se to shaitan v pyaar na kre and iske aage jhukne se btr hoga dub k marr jana
This marriage was indeed a scam
love schme hume strong bna deta h bt whi love agar negative ho usme obsession ho to sb bigaad v skta h
Chlo acha h jasper apne khayalo se bhr nikla or khane k liye rdy hogya
Jaspr shnt h ab
And lucian k khwab khawab hi rhjane shi me
So moral of the story is k writer hume ni bta ri k lucian actually kya kia jasper k sath kita cruel hua k jaspr ki halt esi hogyi
Khair jasper ko yaad nhi hoga bhi kse
Bt ye lucian k alawa kon h jo bhagne baad nina ko pglayega
Waah kiss
Bt kiss? Abhi jasper k is action ka reaction kya hoga
Megan uske samne ni aayi?
2months lets see 2 months baad kuch kr v pata ya ni
Oops ab lucian kya react krega

Payal Mandal
05.06.2021, 13:26:49

Piyu Aggarwal, Sabka answer milega :p

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Saloni Seth
05.06.2021, 12:11:34

nina is scared of whom... who will hurt her more than lucian

Payal Mandal
05.06.2021, 11:51:28

Saloni Seth, Some sawa sher.. bigger than Lucian :p

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Alisha Mehar
05.06.2021, 12:15:08

What will happen to Jasper after he gets to know abt nina that she married to him.. :( So sad of nina...i want nina nd Jasper to be a couple :)

Payal Mandal
05.06.2021, 11:51:07

Alisha Mehar, :)

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Siya Rajpoot
05.06.2021, 14:35:26

woaaahhhh amazing,
read 5 chapters but can't get enough of it.
nina is truly feisty,but I will love to see her giving lucian a hard war.
she shouldn't give in to anyone who doesn't respect her.
jasper is really a gentleman but I don't want him to use nina for her illness , instead I want him to truly love her.
the trio will rock the stage....
can't wait to read more.

Payal Mandal
05.06.2021, 11:50:59

Siya Rajpoot, ;)

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Beautiful princess
05.06.2021, 06:31:32

Hehe still thinking with whom Nina will end up at last :))

Beautiful princess
05.06.2021, 04:05:47

Payal Mandal, Yeahh waiting for thatt!!!

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Joe Fletcher
05.06.2021, 06:53:54

This story always keeps me on the edge as to what will happen next. I mean will she choose the man who forced her to marry him or the man who loves her truly. This story forecasts True love and sacrifice. Really want to know what will happen next.

Payal Mandal
05.06.2021, 03:55:19

Joe Fletcher, :)

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Ghouse Mohiddin Mohammed
04.06.2021, 23:03:11

this story is amazing Lucian is a strong personality and Nina is a feisty one and Jasper is a calm one.lucian is obsessed with Nina and he will get a hard time to tame her and Nina is confused about Jasper. Hope Nina can choose the person who loves her and deserve her.

Payal Mandal
05.06.2021, 00:22:49

Ghouse Mohiddin Mohammed, :)

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Mahamotha Khatun
04.06.2021, 06:35:04

this story is really amazing ,I want to what she does from now ,I am understanding this mafia man can't temp her but whom will she choose , mafia or Jasper ?? mafia Lucian loves her mostly obsessed with her but Jasper ,does he love her or just simple like ??? whom will she end up with ?? author I have read all of ur stories currently reading WL & Ruksar & already read desire & HS , all stories r amazing ,I know u will make this story also outstanding ,,so I wanna read this story so bad

Payal Mandal
04.06.2021, 12:03:01

Mahamotha Khatun, :))

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Sayba Naznin Riya
04.06.2021, 08:31:08

Well my brother's keeper is a forbbien love story. So what can we expect from it. Nina is jasper 's sister in law though Lucian marry her by forced. She is Lucian bride.you can think I am from the side of Lucian,(yes I am from luican side) I would like to Nina and Lucian togather. He might change who knows. Though I know author she will not tell us what will happen

Payal Mandal
04.06.2021, 12:02:51

Sayba Naznin Riya, :)

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Darsha riti
04.06.2021, 13:00:37

What a great definition of love... I'm amazed...

Payal Mandal
04.06.2021, 12:02:46

Darsha riti, thank you :)

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Beautiful princess
03.06.2021, 18:07:46

Interestingggg!!!

Beautiful princess
03.06.2021, 15:47:35

Payal Mandal, Welcome dearie author!❤

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Saloni Seth
03.06.2021, 18:35:13

feeling sad for nina and jasper... how difficult their life is

Payal Mandal
03.06.2021, 15:46:37

Saloni Seth, ;)

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Mari AA
03.06.2021, 16:55:33

Chapter 1; I love how you describe the characters. I can get a real image of their looks and personalities

Payal Mandal
03.06.2021, 14:02:10

Mari AA, hey thanks ^_^

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Mari AA
03.06.2021, 16:56:31

On chapter 2 now, I like where this is going

Payal Mandal
03.06.2021, 14:01:59

Mari AA, :)

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Mari AA
03.06.2021, 16:57:22

Great story, keep up the good work

Payal Mandal
03.06.2021, 14:01:52

Mari AA, thank you ^_^

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Mari AA
03.06.2021, 17:00:38

Good luck in the contest.

Payal Mandal
03.06.2021, 14:01:38

Mari AA, thank you :)

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Mari AA
03.06.2021, 16:54:02

Just read the prologue, well written and looking forward to reading this book

Payal Mandal
03.06.2021, 14:01:30

Mari AA, thank you :) Do read the complete book.. ;) it's going to be something kinda unexpected as per my thoughts :p

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Beautiful princess
02.06.2021, 06:28:58

Awesome i love itt ...❤!!!

Beautiful princess
02.06.2021, 03:39:07

Payal Mandal, Yeahhhh I'm really in extreme happyyyy^_^❤❤

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Niharika Nafisa
01.06.2021, 20:18:39

She is the only author to set the bar and raise the bar. And she proves it with her every single work. I love how she doesn't show mercy towards wrong and sympathise wrong people or defend them. She is Payal Mandal. Just read the initial chapters and I'm all set to buy it soon. So far I just loved how Nina didn't give in to Lucian and her gestures which made sure she wasn't attracted towards the person at all who forced her for marriage. Usually Female leads go gaga over that person after a few days even when he had literally forced her. I don't see any personality in them. Nina has a very strong personality. I never regret reading your work. Truly shows the worth of a woman. Bdw I don't know what will happen between Jasper and Nina. However, even if nothing happens between them, I'll love to watch Nina walking out of this mess alone. Some happy endings don't need a couple reunion but freedom and peace.

Payal Mandal
01.06.2021, 17:29:49

Niharika Nafisa, same here ;__;

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Piyu Aggarwal
01.06.2021, 18:10:10

jasper ko schme professional help chahiye bt Lucian ne ku treatment ni hone dia uska
agar ye esa hi chala na to pta ni kya hoga
and nina hm lga bhn pta lga sb jldi mrko v janna k kya hua
ye ldki jo trika btayi h na Lucian ko usse ghnta ptegi nina hahaha kuch na hone wala lucian ka
sare armaano pr paani chhodo samadar firega

Payal Mandal
01.06.2021, 15:11:50

Piyu Aggarwal, :p

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Darsha riti
01.06.2021, 15:36:12

Uff what's going to happen ..Nina will never fall for lucian.. megan was a bitch..uff

Payal Mandal
01.06.2021, 12:42:28

Darsha riti, Ufff :p

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Saloni Seth
01.06.2021, 10:34:45

how will nina help jasper

Payal Mandal
01.06.2021, 07:41:21

Saloni Seth, Let's see ;)

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Darsha riti
30.05.2021, 17:57:49

Let me tell you one thing,, this book is going to be awesome... Drastic change in Nina... her rebellious behaviour...I loved it... She is confused and hurt sometimes but the way she dealt with Lucian..I totally loved it... Lucian actually deserves it... Megan is not less than Lucian in Jasper's imagination. Perhaps she would be a good girl in real but in Jasper's hallucination, she is the female Lucian.

Payal Mandal
30.05.2021, 15:19:33

Darsha riti, let's see what happens next ;)

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Piyu Aggarwal
30.05.2021, 13:25:33

Mohit ki satak gyi sathme nina ki v stka kr satk gya
Jasper k thought me megan bhtt strong hai bht jyada jo guilt usme hai wo us thought ko us Imaginary megan ko or bhi strong krdete h itna k anjaane me hi self harm jsi chize hone lgty jse k abhi ye khana na khana paani na pina
Uske andar ka guilt use punish kr rha h or is way me kr rha h k wo pgl hogya hai

Payal Mandal
30.05.2021, 15:18:43

Piyu Aggarwal, aage or kya kya hota dekhte jao :v

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Saloni Seth
30.05.2021, 11:40:43

megan is not less than lucian

Payal Mandal
30.05.2021, 09:47:21

Saloni Seth, But megan isn't real atleast :p

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Piyu Aggarwal
28.05.2021, 18:49:32

waaah mohit ese kse bol skta ye bht harsh tha kuch jyada hi but uski baat me point h nina jitna jasper k pas jayegi uski jaan khtre me hogy i dnno lucian phle kya kia h uske sath jiski wjh se wo esi condition me hai idea h but detail janni
vaise lucian mst chutiya hai narcissist
khudpr ita guroor hahaha ekdm bewkuf sound krta ye bnda

Payal Mandal
28.05.2021, 16:50:09

Piyu Aggarwal, Sab pta chalega :p

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Darsha riti
28.05.2021, 18:42:35

Well.. Nina is lucian's wife legally.. but the way she became his wife is illegal... Because of her, jasper can relax and win over his thoughts.. so why mohit is blaming her..

Payal Mandal
28.05.2021, 16:49:58

Darsha riti, Things will unravel soon ;)

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Saloni Seth
28.05.2021, 10:22:20

mohit directly said it... he didn't even think twice that because of nina only jasper is now feeling better

Payal Mandal
28.05.2021, 09:03:11

Saloni Seth, let's see how nina reacts :p

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jemima
28.05.2021, 08:45:48

so how do I do this tasks??

Payal Mandal
28.05.2021, 06:06:38

jemima, https://booknet.com/blogs/offerwalls

follow up the link... you will get the details

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jemima
28.05.2021, 08:45:23

thank you so much

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Darsha riti
26.05.2021, 19:26:32

Jasper and Nina.. both are right.. If lucian can marry her off without her consent... then they can do whatever they want..Nina is confident.. hope she get her life soon

Payal Mandal
26.05.2021, 16:29:27

Darsha riti, Let's see what happens next ;)

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Piyu Aggarwal
26.05.2021, 14:58:35

nina me darr v hai ese me hona lazmi bhi h still wo lucian k samne weak ni pdri
dekhte jasper or nina is mafia k aage tik payenge ya ni

Payal Mandal
26.05.2021, 12:47:12

Piyu Aggarwal, let's see ;)

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Saloni Seth
26.05.2021, 09:34:02

i like nina's confident and Lucian reaction after knowing to get kick at his balls

Payal Mandal
26.05.2021, 06:35:25

Saloni Seth, :p

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