Author, I am sorry to make this kind of comment but their stupidity is getting annoying. Rina is just one person yet she had played them all too well... Redeem yourself by punishing her severely. Hahaha!
this story is like drama full of foolishness.this kind drama I used to watch on indian channel s.thanks god I stop watching these kind of evilness.how could she wins and other party lose every time.i am sorry for hurtful comment but it's the reality.please spread positive thinking.
I don't understand for the life of me why these chapters are continuously ridiculously short.
it doesn't give me the encouragement to want to read this
Sophia let Rina do whatever she wants to do, let Frederick fly high, only then his fall will be more painful. Make sure divorce is approved, then you can start a NEW LIFE, without any disturbances.
hey , I really love that u keep updating soon, and the story is amaziiiinnngg !! thanks and all the best for the upcoming chapters. love u !! I will be with you throughout this book ...
an honest comment... i loved the plot but when i read the story ,no offense it was shit except for the plot nothing else kept me reading till here and there was no twist and turns or spice to make the story read worthy
an honest comment... i loved the plot but when i read the story ,no offense it was shit except for the plot nothing else kept me reading till here and there was no twist and turns or spice to make the story read worthy
an honest comment... i loved the plot but when i read the story ,no offense it was shit except for the plot nothing else kept me reading till here and there was no twist and turns or spice to make the story read worthy
an honest comment... i loved the plot but when i read the story ,no offense it was shit except for the plot nothing else kept me reading till here and there was no twist and turns or spice to make the story read worthy
you have a great story line just it look a little rushed up just an opinion try to give space for incident happen to let them ppl feel it and then move to next you r doing great with story.
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Log inAuthor, I am sorry to make this kind of comment but their stupidity is getting annoying. Rina is just one person yet she had played them all too well... Redeem yourself by punishing her severely. Hahaha!
Tehreem zehra, sure.. no problem. thank you
Incomplete but good story
ambreen khan, yes please.. thank you so much
please why is d book on hold
Hope Momoh, I'm still writing it... I'm not done yet
this story is like drama full of foolishness.this kind drama I used to watch on indian channel s.thanks god I stop watching these kind of evilness.how could she wins and other party lose every time.i am sorry for hurtful comment but it's the reality.please spread positive thinking.
Hina Shahid, yes please... I'll do that.. thank you so much
this story is just drawn out!
Mary Tapia, yes please.. thank you so much
OMG.
Heavenly, yeah ( startled)
oh my so much happening. why isn't she in jail
Heavenly, she will most definitely go to jail..
aah I think it's Chris who is hostage
D Sapphire, yes please.... his the one...
She holding Chris hostage
Tabitha Mutashi, yes please
whaaat
Heavenly, (yeahhh)
no worries my dear well every thing fine in there with you na all the best well of what age are you I am 17
D Sapphire, oh... thank you so much
please update
Ofemetse Matlale, yes please.... am sorry for the delay
why did he locked her
Archi Stewart, no no.... Fedrick... dragged Sophia into the kitchen... and locked the door, so Rina wouldn't hear his conversation with her..
what was the story?
Archi Stewart, exactly.... that's right..
Author, I am enjoying the story but it is now becoming bit long and drawn out.
ann-marie Harbansingh, ohh.... I understand now....
rina exposed herself poor fredrick left his loving wife n choose this bitch
Archi Stewart, yes please.... his so shocked...
is rina is pregnant or not some one clear this point?
Shruti Singh, yes please....
the next chapter, tomorrow, will clarify everything
does fedrick knows about chris n shopia slept together n what will be his reaction in future when they will be together? he will die surely
Archi Stewart, exactly... he will surly die...
hmm waiting for new love story yeah and that garbage of ex husband I want him to regret taking rina in nd loss of soph but it's to late to regret now
D Sapphire, yeah.. too late to say sorry
what Chris girlfriend shittt
Archi Stewart, oh yeahh
omg this is what I want for Sophia and Chris but it is for love not lust...and same time I also want fredrick to understand the importance of Sophia.
Shruti Singh, yes please.... thank you so much
Author, maybe try to combine your intended 2 updates in a day into one long update. I think 3pages per update is too short.
Tan Jacque, yes please..
that's the plan... am less busy now and I'll pick up the pace..
I don't understand for the life of me why these chapters are continuously ridiculously short.
it doesn't give me the encouragement to want to read this
ann-marie Harbansingh, ok.. no problem... I'll pick up the pace...
my apologies please..
For that her FIL can kick out Fredrick, then automatically Rina's reality will be exposed.
mounica kakarla, yes please.....
you're right.. I believe it's time to get exposed....
How many chapters left
geethika chowdary, it's not much left... let's say 20...
omg ! what a twist ....brilliant job author. wait for the next
Shruti Singh, thank you so much
Sophia let Rina do whatever she wants to do, let Frederick fly high, only then his fall will be more painful. Make sure divorce is approved, then you can start a NEW LIFE, without any disturbances.
mounica kakarla, yes please....
but Sophia will have to save her father in law,, from Rina's evil eyes
iam waiting for the day when fredrick will recive his punishment n Discover the true face of that bitch
Archi Stewart, yes please.... he will get what he deserves..
waiting for updates here please update daily I am eagerly waiting for updates thank you
D Sapphire, thank you, I'll pick up with the update please, thank you so much
Author, I am enjoying the story but its rather disturbing that these chapters are so short!!!!
ann-marie Harbansingh, oops.... I figured.. I have quite lengthy ... but I'll extend it.. am sorry
Fierce Sophia I love it go girl...
Juliet Cedro, yes please, (smiles)
whoaaa, I am loving the update,thanks dear author.
Marites Salimbangon, thank you also! for reading
nice one.please update fast.thanks n God bless
Biodun Kole Sheriff-Azeez, thank you so much..I will
hey , I really love that u keep updating soon, and the story is amaziiiinnngg !! thanks and all the best for the upcoming chapters. love u !! I will be with you throughout this book ...
Harmeet Kaur, thank you so much (smiles) it means a lot to me.
an honest comment... i loved the plot but when i read the story ,no offense it was shit except for the plot nothing else kept me reading till here and there was no twist and turns or spice to make the story read worthy
Harshita Sharma, thank you so much... but don't count! your eggs before it hatches ... the story is still ongoing.... (smiles)
an honest comment... i loved the plot but when i read the story ,no offense it was shit except for the plot nothing else kept me reading till here and there was no twist and turns or spice to make the story read worthy
an honest comment... i loved the plot but when i read the story ,no offense it was shit except for the plot nothing else kept me reading till here and there was no twist and turns or spice to make the story read worthy
an honest comment... i loved the plot but when i read the story ,no offense it was shit except for the plot nothing else kept me reading till here and there was no twist and turns or spice to make the story read worthy
Fredrick is an idiot. I hate this type of man who do all wrong but blame others for their misery.
Dipika, yes,,, his going to loose everything because of his foolishness
plllllllleeeeeeaaaaaaassssssseeeeeeee uuppppdaaaateeee sssssssssoooooooooooooonnnnnnn dear author
Ananya Jain, yes please... (smiles)
no problem dear author thank you so much plllllllleeeeeeaaaaaaassssssseeeeeeee uuppppdaaaateeee sssssssssoooooooooooooonnnnnnn
Ananya Jain, yes please....
right away...
you have a great story line just it look a little rushed up just an opinion try to give space for incident happen to let them ppl feel it and then move to next you r doing great with story.
Yamini Joshi, thank you so much... I will
Nice storyline I will definitely love to read more of it.
Dipika, thank you so much.
exciting...
Herminia Bemignos, thank you (smiles)
waiting for update dear
D Sapphire, thank you so much
omg rina is bitch
and I mean it.
Shruti Singh, yes, you're right.. she needs a beat down
I really hope their plan works ...
Harmeet Kaur, yes please... (smiles)
You write a little chapter then you cut it. you only disappointed the person who read your novel...
RejEliz Rufazu, I am so sorry for the short chapters ma'am,,, Please don't forgive me... (frowns).. it won't happen again, please.
plllllllleeeeeeaaaaaaassssssseeeeeeee uuppppdaaaateeee sssssssssoooooooooooooonnnnnnn dear author
Ananya Jain, yes please..
right away.. am so sorry for the short chapters
Author, personally I think the updates are very short
ann-marie Harbansingh, oops.. am sorry.. I'll add up more..
thank you ( smiles)
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