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Story about:love marriage turns into hate
#65 in Romance#42 in Billionaires
15.04.2021 — ...
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no worries my dear well every thing fine in there with you na all the best well of what age are you I am 17
this story is just drawn out!
why did he locked her
Archi Stewart, no no.... Fedrick... dragged Sophia into the kitchen... and locked the door, so Rina wouldn't hear his conversation with her..
what was the story?
Archi Stewart, exactly.... that's right..
Author, I am enjoying the story but it is now becoming bit long and drawn out.
ann-marie Harbansingh, ohh.... I understand now....
rina exposed herself poor fredrick left his loving wife n choose this bitch
Archi Stewart, yes please.... his so shocked...
is rina is pregnant or not some one clear this point?
Shruti Singh, yes please....
the next chapter, tomorrow, will clarify everything
does fedrick knows about chris n shopia slept together n what will be his reaction in future when they will be together? he will die surely
Archi Stewart, exactly... he will surly die...
hmm waiting for new love story yeah and that garbage of ex husband I want him to regret taking rina in nd loss of soph but it's to late to regret now
D Sapphire, yeah.. too late to say sorry
what Chris girlfriend shittt
Archi Stewart, oh yeahh
omg this is what I want for Sophia and Chris but it is for love not lust...and same time I also want fredrick to understand the importance of Sophia.
Shruti Singh, yes please.... thank you so much
Author, maybe try to combine your intended 2 updates in a day into one long update. I think 3pages per update is too short.
Tan Jacque, yes please..
that's the plan... am less busy now and I'll pick up the pace..
I don't understand for the life of me why these chapters are continuously ridiculously short.
it doesn't give me the encouragement to want to read this
ann-marie Harbansingh, ok.. no problem... I'll pick up the pace...
my apologies please..
For that her FIL can kick out Fredrick, then automatically Rina's reality will be exposed.
mounica kakarla, yes please.....
you're right.. I believe it's time to get exposed....
How many chapters left
geethika chowdary, it's not much left... let's say 20...
omg ! what a twist ....brilliant job author. wait for the next
Shruti Singh, thank you so much
Sophia let Rina do whatever she wants to do, let Frederick fly high, only then his fall will be more painful. Make sure divorce is approved, then you can start a NEW LIFE, without any disturbances.
mounica kakarla, yes please....
but Sophia will have to save her father in law,, from Rina's evil eyes
iam waiting for the day when fredrick will recive his punishment n Discover the true face of that bitch
Archi Stewart, yes please.... he will get what he deserves..
waiting for updates here please update daily I am eagerly waiting for updates thank you
D Sapphire, thank you, I'll pick up with the update please, thank you so much
Author, I am enjoying the story but its rather disturbing that these chapters are so short!!!!
ann-marie Harbansingh, oops.... I figured.. I have quite lengthy ... but I'll extend it.. am sorry
Fierce Sophia I love it go girl...
Juliet Cedro, yes please, (smiles)
whoaaa, I am loving the update,thanks dear author.
Marites Salimbangon, thank you also! for reading
nice one.please update fast.thanks n God bless
Biodun Kole Sheriff-Azeez, thank you so much..I will
hey , I really love that u keep updating soon, and the story is amaziiiinnngg !! thanks and all the best for the upcoming chapters. love u !! I will be with you throughout this book ...
Harmeet Kaur, thank you so much (smiles) it means a lot to me.
an honest comment... i loved the plot but when i read the story ,no offense it was shit except for the plot nothing else kept me reading till here and there was no twist and turns or spice to make the story read worthy
Harshita Sharma, thank you so much... but don't count! your eggs before it hatches ... the story is still ongoing.... (smiles)
Fredrick is an idiot. I hate this type of man who do all wrong but blame others for their misery.
Dipika, yes,,, his going to loose everything because of his foolishness
plllllllleeeeeeaaaaaaassssssseeeeeeee uuppppdaaaateeee sssssssssoooooooooooooonnnnnnn dear author
Ananya Jain, yes please... (smiles)
no problem dear author thank you so much plllllllleeeeeeaaaaaaassssssseeeeeeee uuppppdaaaateeee sssssssssoooooooooooooonnnnnnn
Ananya Jain, yes please....
you have a great story line just it look a little rushed up just an opinion try to give space for incident happen to let them ppl feel it and then move to next you r doing great with story.
Yamini Joshi, thank you so much... I will
Nice storyline I will definitely love to read more of it.
Dipika, thank you so much.
Herminia Bemignos, thank you (smiles)
waiting for update dear
D Sapphire, thank you so much
omg rina is bitch
and I mean it.
Shruti Singh, yes, you're right.. she needs a beat down
I really hope their plan works ...
Harmeet Kaur, yes please... (smiles)
You write a little chapter then you cut it. you only disappointed the person who read your novel...
RejEliz Rufazu, I am so sorry for the short chapters ma'am,,, Please don't forgive me... (frowns).. it won't happen again, please.
Ananya Jain, yes please..
right away.. am so sorry for the short chapters
Author, personally I think the updates are very short
ann-marie Harbansingh, oops.. am sorry.. I'll add up more..
thank you ( smiles)
I want Sophia ended with Chris
Although it can't happens but I hope somehow it's possible
Shruti Singh, yes please... I know how much it hurts after being betrayed by the one we love..
if your married love can run through ups and downs you should sit and talk with your partner. marriage is a relation between two people based on their personal intimacy..Two people who come from other worlds thinks different or they may have other desires, so understanding is very importance and most importance is conversation.
Tabitha Mutashi, thank you so much... (smiles)
The plot is good and your way of writing is also good. I have a suggestion for you though. Your English is good when you write in normal conversational way. when you try and incorporate some fancy words or phrases it looks forced and becomes a little ambiguous so as to know what you are trying to convey. I would like to suggest that stick to simpler words and sentences until you gain more experience and English proficiency. I'm saying all this in good spirit. If in anyway you find this insulting then I apologize.
Sonita, thank you. I appreciate you took it positively. I said that to you because when I was in 8th grade I also tried to use whatever vocabulary I had into writing an essay. This was the advice my teacher gave me. I simplified my language then gained more expertise on the language and now I can comfortably incorporate fancy vocab in my work.
Let Rina succeed in her plans to destroy Frederick as he deserves it. Hope Sophia will become a successful independent woman where everyone worships the path she walks on, hopefully Chris and his Father stand by Sophia in her journey to success.
Shruti Singh, yea... I am sure Fedrick will and it will be too late for him.
yeah...but Sophia shouldn't become an emotional fool and get back with Frederick, let him die alone...
mounica kakarla, The way he made her suffer, fedrick must suffer has well .
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good plot, but it's not just Sophia's responsibility to care about her family and her married life but her husband's too. When he doesn't love and respect her anymore, then she must divorce that piece of sh*t Fredrick for her own good, and focus on self development.
mounica kakarla, yes please....
more chapters coming up...
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