It was super fun reading all the chapters in one go but after the last one it felt like "kaash agee bhi hota"....i hope next chapter is coming so soooon!
Ohhh the whole chp was funny... but dear plz don't update in bold letters..it was really difficult to read...it gives strain to my eyes, hope u understand :)
Nahid Sheikh, To be honest, I wrote the whole chapter in normal font but I don't know how it turned out in bold letters. But I will make sure to check one more time before uploading the chapter.^-^ I didn't mind your comment at all^-^ and I am glad that you wrote the comment.
First of all, thank you for writing this story. When I first read a few lines of this story, I feel it's not as I was thinking for it, but after reading a few pages, I couldn't stop myself from finishing it. It's so realistic such as I can feel my self in the story, and at some point, I was just like freeze there. By this story, I can say your partner will be so lucky. I wish my friend would have like you. Waiting for the next part, I hope so ending will be suitable such as Bollywood movies.
Hey guys, I edited the characters chapter and, if you guys think that I should add some more things to make the characters interesting please feel free to tell me on my Instagram page.
Nahid Sheikh, No, I haven't removed it. I put that chapter in drafts for some edit. I was about to re-publish it very soon and I think today is the day. ;)
BHAI MERE !!!! ,,,,, Itna suspence mujhe " kattapa ne Bahubali ko ku maara" ke time pe nhi tha jitna abhi hora h .....btade mjhe "who was he"!???? Jldi paper ho jae tere jldi next chapter aajae ,,, wrna khin m suspence m na marr jau ?
Auuuurrrrr thhhhhhhaaaannnnkkkkk yooouuu surprise update ke liye ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.
interesting story dear writer keep up d good work. But Plz put conversation in double inverted comma nd naam bhi mention Kare k kisne kon sa dialogue bola hai, at some places only dialogue has been written but d name of person is missing who said that dialogue which made it lil difficult to understand otherwise d story concept is good... keep up d good work :)
Oh wow ma'am, you're an amazing writer , when is the next chapter coming please keep us updated. And I can't wait to read what's next . Lots of love and keep doing the great work ?
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Log inhey dear there is only one chp which shows characters description...what abt other chps ???
Nahid Sheikh, Rest of the chapters will be updated very soon.
It was super fun reading all the chapters in one go but after the last one it felt like "kaash agee bhi hota"....i hope next chapter is coming so soooon!
Deewanshi Gupta, thank you^-^
update will be up in few hours.
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Oh baby , it was such a nice episode ?❤️
Varnika Chhillar, ^-^
Bas itna hi ? Khtm ? Hmara package badhao bhai ,,,, apun ko aur mangta h ???
Varnika Chhillar, apka package badh jayega next update me^-^
Ohhh the whole chp was funny... but dear plz don't update in bold letters..it was really difficult to read...it gives strain to my eyes, hope u understand :)
Nahid Sheikh, To be honest, I wrote the whole chapter in normal font but I don't know how it turned out in bold letters. But I will make sure to check one more time before uploading the chapter.^-^ I didn't mind your comment at all^-^ and I am glad that you wrote the comment.
First of all, thank you for writing this story. When I first read a few lines of this story, I feel it's not as I was thinking for it, but after reading a few pages, I couldn't stop myself from finishing it. It's so realistic such as I can feel my self in the story, and at some point, I was just like freeze there. By this story, I can say your partner will be so lucky. I wish my friend would have like you. Waiting for the next part, I hope so ending will be suitable such as Bollywood movies.
jyoti maurya, My pleasure.☺️
Great work ❤ Keep it up?
Pankaj Maurya, Thanks:》
I am loving this story and waiting for the next chapters❤
poonam maurya, Thanks;)
I just loved it... eagerly waiting for the next one❤
Deewanshi, Thank you:)
who is main lead kartik singh or shourya Arora??
jyoti maurya, okkk :)
Hey guys, I edited the characters chapter and, if you guys think that I should add some more things to make the characters interesting please feel free to tell me on my Instagram page.
My Instagram username is- @i__m_authorjm
writer u hv given the intro of every character on the first page ???hv u removed it??
Nahid Sheikh, No, I haven't removed it. I put that chapter in drafts for some edit. I was about to re-publish it very soon and I think today is the day. ;)
BHAI MERE !!!! ,,,,, Itna suspence mujhe " kattapa ne Bahubali ko ku maara" ke time pe nhi tha jitna abhi hora h .....btade mjhe "who was he"!???? Jldi paper ho jae tere jldi next chapter aajae ,,, wrna khin m suspence m na marr jau ?
Auuuurrrrr thhhhhhhaaaannnnkkkkk yooouuu surprise update ke liye ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.
Varnika Chhillar, Thank you:)
interesting story dear writer keep up d good work. But Plz put conversation in double inverted comma nd naam bhi mention Kare k kisne kon sa dialogue bola hai, at some places only dialogue has been written but d name of person is missing who said that dialogue which made it lil difficult to understand otherwise d story concept is good... keep up d good work :)
Nahid Sheikh, I really appreciate your comment. I edited the chapter you can read it again. Thank you so much for your comment. :)
Interesting!! So much curious to know who's that guyyy.. cant wait for the next update ^_^
jyoti maurya, Waitinggg :-)
Will wait patientlyyy author
jyoti maurya, ❤
Loving this book ❤
Kashish Garg, Thank you:)
Nice .. waiting for next chp
Beautiful princess, Thank you :)
Amazing? it's just wao.. ❤
All the best for your future.. Keep writing ?
Khushi Nagar, Thank you :)
Waiting for ur next chapter.. :)
Oh wow ma'am, you're an amazing writer , when is the next chapter coming please keep us updated. And I can't wait to read what's next . Lots of love and keep doing the great work ?
Varnika Chhillar, Thank you so much dear and the next update will be very soon.
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So far your story is intriguing. Keep up the great work dear! All support 2 you and your book :)
Novels By Taylin, Thank you:)
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