Age restriction 14+
Story about:superhumans, anotherworld, dark past
#71 in Supernaturals#147 in Romantic fantasy
04.12.2020 — ...
Total number of threads: 1
Olivia Gordon Reid
Hey, friend! Just read the prologue. I loved the quote you used, it went really well with the story. There are grammar/spelling mistakes here and there, so if you want something to help you with that, I suggest using Grammarly or another program. I think it would help readers understand a little better. I like, however, how you described how the nightmare has an impact on the main character, but I felt like it was a bit vague. Unless you planned it to be like that, I was a bit confused about what the nightmare was and why it scared them so much. Other than that, color me intrigued, and I'm excited about your next update.
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