Book. "Pride" read online
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Ranking:
#12 in Short stories
#31 in Inspiration romance


Complete 6 pages

Publication: 17.07.2019 — 20.07.2019


Description of book "Pride"

Sarah and Sean are a loving married couple, one could say they are perfect but they have only one problem, they both have pride.
When the other does something, both will pick offense and non will apologize or seek for peace but neither of them know that one day that same pride will not only destroy their marriage but will leave one of them seriously heartbroken with regrets and a lot of had I knowns.

A short story with moral lesson

A must read

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Maureen Mutahi
16.06.2021, 20:03:59

Beautifully written with good moral lesson

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deadrey chikengezha
08.02.2021, 01:32:47

Thnx a lot for the lesson

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lomcebo mbatha
12.11.2020, 22:25:33

true indeed

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lomcebo mbatha
12.11.2020, 22:23:52

what a price to pay. This is a lesson never to be forgotten

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lomcebo mbatha
12.11.2020, 22:19:40

oh my God

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lomcebo mbatha
12.11.2020, 22:14:08

who is suppose to apologize. between the two?

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Syeda Noorah
31.10.2020, 12:46:17

Harsh reality of life....
Pride..
But we have to se aside our pride for our loved oness..

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Bing Alba
05.10.2020, 12:52:13

Truly, PRIDE kills. But if you really love the person won't you set aside your pride?

Goodness Shadrach
05.10.2020, 12:48:06

Bing Alba, Indeed :)

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Shalom Njiru
02.09.2020, 19:31:13

shadrach u are just my favoritw writer so far

Goodness Shadrach
05.10.2020, 12:47:41

Shalom Njiru, Aww, thank you dear :)

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Cheeru Chikku
14.07.2020, 20:37:41

Good author

Goodness Shadrach
15.07.2020, 10:13:07

thank you :)

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Cheeru Chikku
14.07.2020, 20:37:55

Good author

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ZARA
09.06.2020, 13:05:22

That was a beautiful story, shook me, but definitely passes the message..

Goodness Shadrach
09.06.2020, 11:30:12

I'm happy you got the message :)

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Laisa Tikomaimaleya
01.11.2019, 08:51:19

What a sad ending! There we will be lots of "only ifs" in our lives if we alloe pride to rule us

Goodness Shadrach
01.11.2019, 09:22:19

Laisa Tikomaimaleya, honestly

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Sandra Obas
01.09.2019, 12:09:44

interesting and a great lesson

Goodness Shadrach
02.09.2019, 16:10:55

Sandra Obas, yes dear

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HypGothic
28.07.2019, 13:06:09

Interesting beginning. I am engaged from the first chapter

Goodness Shadrach
28.07.2019, 14:43:18

HypGothic, I'm glad you are, thanks

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HypGothic
28.07.2019, 13:40:55

Oh I have just finished this to the end. It is sad but a very important lesson. This makes me think of the old Mike and the Mechanics song "The Living Years" where his father died whilst they were still in the middle of an unresolved argument.

Goodness Shadrach
28.07.2019, 14:41:50

HypGothic, I'm really glad you enjoyed it

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Ruechari guru
23.07.2019, 01:09:57

A hard lesson to learn, but one couples would do well to remember.

Ruechari guru
22.07.2019, 23:27:59

Goodness, They are definitely words to live by.

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