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Log inAmazing story, excellent lesson! Pride is one of the greatest enemies that ruins so many families and couples. Forgiving and apologizing is not easier, but we need to learn to do this to be happy with someone we love.
such a short story but it has strong impact loved it.
Glade to read this beautifully written book ❤️I love the story nd the concept love the way u put all the related emotions in this .....I was crying in the 2nd page . I can feel the emotions ☺️?keep it up ❤️
very nice story, home my partner would read this too :)
Beautifully written with good moral lesson
Thnx a lot for the lesson
true indeed
what a price to pay. This is a lesson never to be forgotten
oh my God
who is suppose to apologize. between the two?
Harsh reality of life....
Pride..
But we have to se aside our pride for our loved oness..
Truly, PRIDE kills. But if you really love the person won't you set aside your pride?
Bing Alba, Indeed :)
shadrach u are just my favoritw writer so far
Shalom Njiru, Aww, thank you dear :)
Good author
thank you :)
Good author
That was a beautiful story, shook me, but definitely passes the message..
I'm happy you got the message :)
What a sad ending! There we will be lots of "only ifs" in our lives if we alloe pride to rule us
Laisa Tikomaimaleya, honestly
interesting and a great lesson
Sandra Obas, yes dear
Interesting beginning. I am engaged from the first chapter
HypGothic, I'm glad you are, thanks
Oh I have just finished this to the end. It is sad but a very important lesson. This makes me think of the old Mike and the Mechanics song "The Living Years" where his father died whilst they were still in the middle of an unresolved argument.
HypGothic, I'm really glad you enjoyed it
A hard lesson to learn, but one couples would do well to remember.
Goodness, They are definitely words to live by.
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