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#1102 in Thrillers & Suspense
#322 in Romantic mystery
On Hold: 22 Aug
83 pages
02.08.2019 — ...
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Log inPretty good!
This is really great so far. The plot is compelling and your descriptions of Lilah and Noah really make them come alive!
Captivating and fantastic start. Seems so realistic. Dont agree with armed robbery :) but I'm assuming some character development for the good is on the horizon.
Your story surprised me in a good way
Oh, I thought the author was a man, you surprise me every day ?
I was like that kid three seconds from pissing himself three seconds into reading this book.
Its really intense!
what an awesome story! You showed everything through the thoughts of your main character
The story held my attention and I am eager to find out what happens next to the pov and Noha
the whole novel continues on two separate timelines, alternating between past and present every other chapter. Dual timelines and POVs.
your book looks so interesting, it's in my library!
C. N. DELO, I honestly am, you write so well
Great stuff. Dialogues are really gripping. Noah looks to be an interesting character. One of the best reads I have found here.
Followed you. It would be very kind of you if you also follow me back.
K.R Webber, Followed back! Thanks for your kind words.
This is excellent and engaging. I’m in for the long haul...
Brad Emshwiller, Thanks for checking it out!
Added this to my library based on synopsis alone. Haven’t had a chance to dive in yet but hope to soon
The cover is so inviting
Jess Conibear, Thank you! I went through a few covers before I finally settled on this one. I think it captures the mood I was going for.
What an intense beginning.
I enjoyed it very much.
Added your story to my library and I'm waiting for updates. I also followed you. Would you please consider following back?
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