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should have been more comment here only to praise your work author.
Heartfixer, Aww, thank you much dearest one! Your words mean a lot to me, & don't worry, I'll do justice to Pakhi & others... Justice is the very foundation of this book! :-)
I don't know whether I'll be able to read the next chap or not coz I know since it will have the entry of davidson then I'm sure the next chap will also contain Pakhi losing her virginity in the most brutal way by getting r@ped in the hands of that bl**dy disgusting piece of shit, a$$hole davidson.
I'm already dreading that chap, questioning myself that how many girls must have passed that terrible phase all over the world just to satisfy the dirty lust of those b@stards, it's like while I'm reading this chap or writing this comment, one girl is facing her nightmare and I can't even imagine her pain
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, Exactly dear, that's the whole point of this book, to sensitize people about their surroundings, which we often miss in our thoughtlessness... Even I'm clueless on how to write the next chapter, that's the reason I take long time in updating this book, that I get clueless every single time... :-/
for real you are a strong mind author to take the risk to write such an excellent story. I know that the plot is one of the hardest i have ever read till now. i feel your rebellious when you ask what women did so bad to men.to not generate problem here i speaki in private with you.
will be hard to read next one but i am here for you.
Heartfixer, Yes dear, we're side-by-side here... :-)
& I'll fight till the end, I promise! :-|
& thank you so so much for all your motivation & support dear...❤️
I don't how ill be able to handle the next chap, I know it will be extremely painful
I salute u dear author for writing the truth of pain & darkness of this society
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, Thank you so much dear...
I'm a person who lives more in dreams than in real life, keeping on laughing with my characters, enjoying their journey, but when I start writing Pakhi's story, which isn't a story as we all know it's a reality of many women out there, I feel my blood freezing... Sometimes I have to force myself to write her story out, to come out of my colorful rainbow dreams & narrate the truth... :-/
But I'll do it, for fiction isn't meant just for fiction, but also to highlight the truth, to delve into the depths unexplored by the common eyes... Hope I succeed in the business with the support & love of you all beautiful people! :-)
sometimes Darkness is too thick but there's always a tiny light that's hope
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, Yes darling! Light is always there, ahead & behind this dark! :-)
Author update please we are waiting (~￣³￣)~
Aditi aditi, Just updating dear... Actually wrote chapter a day back, but as you know I write late night, so dozed off before updating... Heehe...
hey dear author I don't know what happened to u buy always remember that it always with u not only as a reader but also as a friend
there r certain situations in our life when we will dead buy still we carry on coz we hope for that tiny light to light up our dark world & I hope that soon u will overcome ur problems like a TRUE WARRIOR
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, Aww, thank you so much darling!
You know your words made me smile, sometimes all that matters is someone standing by your side, & am really really glad to have you by my side!(❤️ ω ❤️)
Thank for being with me during thick & thins! Love you & may Goddess Durga bless you with all the happiness of the world!❤️
I have already listed a no of punishments for this davidson in the comment section of this book plzzzz dear author he deserves all of those plzzzzz apply those on him and plzzz don't let him near Moon coz she is still weak & traumatized the pain
if he ever comes near her I truly want Pakhi to show that disgusting a**hole that inside every woman MAA DURGA resides and Pakhi will show him the true nature of MAHISASURA MARDINI MAA DURGA
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, Yes dear, don't worry, his doom is approaching soon! & I'll make sure to give him all for he deserves! :-/
& I haven't forgotten your torture list! ;-)
Author make him dead -_- He is unbearable now ಠ︵ಠ
Aditi aditi, I'll try my best to do so Honey, for I stand with justice! :-)
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Gopinath Mohapatra, Thank you! Am glad you liked it, & will try to match your expectations! :-)
did I mention that I like your writing style dear author/friend?
I'm glad that Pakhi is fine and Max is too. loving their chemistry.
COMMON READERS YOU CAN DO MORE THAN JUST READ THIS INCREDIBLE STORY. PRESS THE STAR AND LET A COMMENT HERE!
Heartfixer, Awww, thank you so much my dearest friend!
You're indeed the Moon I seek in the darkest nights...
Love ya, & thank you so so much!❤️❤️
This story is completely different & it exactly matches with the DARK & CRUEL SIDE of our society
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, Thank you dear... Yes, it's very different even for me to write, for it's a fiction nowhere near fiction, but closer to the darker realities... When I started writing this, I didn't know where was I heading to, I didn't know I was openly challenging the whole society, but with time, my determination grew,& all thanks to you all beautiful people! :-)
Love you, & together, we'll lead this battle against the darkest sides of our civilization! :-|
Author, u know what this is one of the perfect story i ever read..... From the beginning till now it's worth reading nd if we compare it with our society harsh reality than its perfectly matched so keep it up man ...... Best of luck gurl.
Stanley, Thanks dear!❤️
SHE COULDN'T BE ALWAYS BRAVE AND ACCEPT ALL THE CRUELTY OF THIS WORLD.
DAVIDSON DEMON LIKE EXIST IN THIS WORLD AND YOU DEAR AUTHOR AREN'T WORST THAN HIM YOU ARE A STORY TELLER THAT HAS THE BRAVERY TO TOUCH THE PLAGUE OF OUR SOCIETY.
Heartfixer, Thank you so much dear, that's kind & so understanding of you! :-)
Yes, that's what I'm trying to do, delve in this dark, & find out how worse it can get, how much can it hurt... & seems like it's a never ending abyss... :-]
I felt THE PAIN literally
I can't speak any more
I can't write
may be somewhere I wished her to die before she got raped, I wished for her sufferings to end, may be this but ............
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, Me too... This is the 1st time I felt the most pain of Pakhi... I numb my senses before I write any scene, but this one hit me different, maybe my writings improved, or suddenly my inner emotions took over me... But I really felt this chapter a lot... :-(
Author your protagonists section has been worthy of appreciation and don't worry about your efforts they are definitely in the right direction. Just keep going cause I think people here got tired of slow updates that's why they are not responding. :-\
Aditi aditi, Thanks dear! :-)
well,I want terrible punishment for davidson,I truly want max to abduct davidson & punish him for days
few punishments that I would like to have on that manwh*re davidson
1. slowly peeling off his skin & pouring hot burning oil or acid on them with salt.
2. beating him regularly with whip having nails
3. breaking his bones
4. peeling off his nails & hair
5. giving him electric shock everyday etc
u may call me a sadist but for me this is what this bl**dy davidson & Rik deserve
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, No dear, this isn't sadism, this is your rage, & not just for Davidson & Rits, but for everyone out there like them! :-]
& being a female, your anger is correct! In fact I believe had Max been like you, Davidson would already be dead, lol, but Max needs to learn a lot at the time being... :-/
& yes, I'll keep in mind all of these when we punish both of these monsters, ok? ;-)
Whatever book you want you can write, we as readers just want to go through the past of our poor girl Pakhi. Just end her trauma filled life and give her all the happiness which she deserves. (◡‿◡)
Aditi aditi, Thanks for you support dear!(✿◠‿◠)
Yes, Pakhi will get the life she deserves, & the next chapter marks the last phase of her past.... I think it'd also be the darkest one...:-/
Pakhi was r*ped by jack or she was saved ? I truly hope Pakhi had died before coz what she faced after us worse than hell and being a woman I don't even want to imagine the cruelties and atrocities she faced coz I'm scared about this DARK WORLD
the world which pretends to be the best at daylight turns darker than DARKEST DEVIL at night and literally feeds upon the innocents
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, No she was saved by the guards, who kicked her abdomen as per he remembrance... Yes dear, DARK is worth fearing of, but can we exclude it from our lives when those creatures of dark are a part of our world, hidden within us, unknown to us, they might be talking & laughing, cheering with us, internally hiding that darkness???
I really wish that DARK was either no place or a different place, but this DARK is with in us all, amidst us as we continue to live in the myth of lights...
I know PAKHI suffer a lot, but yet dying is the last thing I ever wish for her, for I believe there is always lights after the dark, & Pakhi has started getting back to that light in the present, though her struggles are far from being over!
Love ya, take care, & be cautious of the darks dwelling out there! :-)
Raina story is the story of thousands of women that find them self trapped in the oldest profession in this world.
everyone thinks they do it for pleasure but that is the last thing they are doing that lowly life.
I KNOW THIS STORY MAY COME TO HARD TO YOU READERS BUT IS THE CRUELTY OF THIS WORLD. AUTHOR GIVES HIGHLIGHTS OF THOSE OLD THOUGHT WE HAVE FOR THOSE WOMEN GIVING US THE TRUTH BEHIND THE CURTAIN. AND MAY WORK LIKE AN ADVICE TOO. SHARE YOUR LOVE WITH THIS BOOK!
Heartfixer, Awww dear... Thank you so so much!❤️❤️
My eyes literally teared seeing your support...⊙﹏⊙∥
Usually I read & write to forget harsh realities, but this book is much more about realities, the realities we ignore or are unaware of, & so your support literally made my day, giving me more strength to write this story out, for I know it holds so much darkness that sometimes I feel myself dwelling in the darks of it...:-/
going through the chapters I understand all your inner thoughts and I share them with you.
pleading to almighty God that put an end to the suffer of many women that like Moon, Raina or Riya didn't choose their lives like many more that suffer in silence each day. Amen!
Yes dear, there are silent sufferers, who're unnoticed, unassured, who keep on struggling to meet ends... Hope world's a better place for everyone someday... :-)
great writing skills dear author! although I am at the start of this book I can feel the darkness that lures around Moon life.
Heartfixer, Awww, thank you so much dear! I'm really glad you liked it! :-)
as the story proceeds the chaps become painful and unbearable, but it clearly shows how fortunate we r and how we have been shielded from the Dark of the society
I don't know dear author how u know about all these and how much u have done research to write this book but let me tell u that u have done a remarkable job to show us the Naked Truth & the Reality of our so called good society
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, Thanks dear, & no, it's no research, for they just show data & never the hideous truth, except of a few movies & shows, so I'm using my very own brain, along with a few things I could find, to explore the truth as much as I can...
& yes, Pakhi's past is very dark, it'll darker as she approaches from India to the UK... Hope you'll not hate me for that... :-/
There's nothing to thank me dear author all credit goes to you for introducing us to such a dark and greedy section of our society and how a girl between us is forced to bear this much harassment and disgust that she needs therapy to recover that too god knows for how many days....this is something which normally people don't pay any attention nor they want to talk about this disease of our society. Auctioning girls is such a disguise that nobody could describe or feel the pain than the person who is bearing it...So I think everyone here especially girls should support you in this journey cuz this story is something rare... extremely rare.. ...
and yes the credit for the faces of the characters, yeah that I'll take for sure ;P and yes I love you too honey ❤️ keep smiling and updating us...( ˘ ³˘)
Aditi aditi, Thanks for understanding my perspective dear! Am really glad to have met you!❤️
& not just the credit of pics, but even the credit of the idea of doing something like that goes to you, for I'm too lazy & indecisive even for selecting covers to our novels! ;-)
We all are waiting.... updates are very slow.... please update soon
Aditi aditi, Ok dear! :-)
Yes, you're right, we should try at least! :-)
PAKHI is so BRAVE & STRONG she suffered so much yet standing strong and alive, its difficult to read such things and I can understand that its even more difficult for u to write all these dear author. These types of stories tell u the truth and also breaks u. Its painful to read but TRUTH IS BITTER and this is the UGLY REALITY of our SOCIETY
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, Yes dear!
Turning our face to the dark won't change it's existence, & our ignorance will only increase & give more space to the Dark!
I know as an individual, my contributions at this levels are really small, but I'll contribute as much as I can from here & from everywhere I can! :-)
It takes my all to write it, sometimes I feel like I'm myself getting into too much of dark, that I feel numb, like I'm the originator of this Dark myself, as I keep on writing, but I know I can't stop, not at least till we give justice to Pakhi! :-/
the chaps are getting intense & painful
Thanku dear author for showing the The DARK TRUTH of our society
I truly hope that Durga died before getting r@ped .
Max is changing but yet there is a long way to go, Pakhi & girls like her suffered too much yet suffering and those monsters r freely roaming around without any punishments
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, Yes dear, indeed realities are always painful, realities are the harsh slaps on our faces every morning we wake up from our deep slumber... I didn't emphasize much on Durga, to not make it darker, as even the outline I mentioned felt dark enough to me, & SHE DIED WHILE BEING RAPED, as per the description & my storyline... It's my pleasure to write this book full of harsh realities where dark keeps on winning until the light shows it's whole might...
Thanks for your sweet support dear, I'm glad to have you by my side!(✿◠‿◠)
Well i think max has changed and he love pakhi a lot he will do anything to save her from anyone even if its rits
Ava smith, Hey there! Yup I too think he has fallen deep for Pakhi... Let's see if he keeps his promises...
Hope you are enjoying reading the book! Keep reading, keep commenting!❤
Aditi aditi, It's gonna be a long update today, was preparing for it all these days dear! :-)
Did you got your notebook back?
SHRUTI DADHICH, ohh that's not good...yet we will be patient. Hope to see your updates soon ◉‿◉
why there's no update?
is everything ok?
Aditi aditi, Thanks dear!❤
Omg! I absolutely love this bloody book ? it’s got so many highs and lows you’ve really got an amazing talent!! I’ve only just figured out how to comment, but I hope you’ve been receiving all my 5 star ratings ? all the best ❤️
Megan Rowsell, Aww, thank u so much beautiful! Your comment made my day!
Yes, I get all the warmth u guys send me in every
way! & love u all & will keep writing for u guys!❤❤
Dear Author, please do not give up. Your book is enjoyed by many. Do not let the few negative commenters get to you. After all, if they do not like or can not handle reading your book instead of ruining it for everyone else they should just not read it. Look forward to reading more from you.
Tonie Marsett, Awww, thank you so much dearest!❤️❤️
Yes, indeed you are right! I must keep on writing it for my dearest readers like you, who actually like it!
I'm a thick headed girl with -ve comments, & a nostalgic one for all the smiles & support comments like yours bring to me!
I won't stop till it's done, & I assure you this! :-)
Keep reading, keep commenting, keep smiling, & making me smile by these beautiful comments of yours!(✿◠‿◠)(✿◠‿◠)
I'm stuck in this book. I hope Pakhi to cope with the trauma she was facing and Max to behave like a gentleman not like his father. Although I don't consider any male lead exactly there are only female leads in this book and this is something great ?? yet let's see whether Max could win the context of male lead or not.
Btw author you are really beautiful (｡♡‿♡｡)
Aditi aditi, ❤️❤️❤️
rits is an a graded disgusting asshole, but how come Riya is suffering again I think she has all the evidence to prove that bastard rits guilty, them what's all these defamation charge prostitution , her brother's business is down,
max is still a spinless coward who is still supporting his manwhore cousin instead of supporting Riya whom he called his sister which proves that for him blood relation is even above humanity and he never considered Rius as his sister
max is a disappointment, I HOPE RIYA COMES OUT AS A PHOENIX AND DESTROY that fucker ritz
This is a females book, by a female. about females, with only female Readers, for I see no guy commenting, plus I think they won't even like to see the reality of their own kind... :-/
What happened author why are u not updating
Such type of stories are always dark becoz this darkness is the reality of the society, this is the reality how much a woman face in her life
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, Yes dear, in all these fake lights lie those darkness, which we ignore, but our ignoring them don't let them seize to exist, that's what I'm trying to highlight through this book.
See even writing this book for me & reading this, for several people here is too difficult, then imagine the reality which is worser... Yes, we are too weak to fight such darkness, but being fellow humans, we can at least have some respect & humanity for the sufferers.
We just look at one side of the story, the side the world makes us look upon, the side society likes to highlight, but what about the realities, of those Darks?
this book isn't DARK it only shows the true life reality of a Girl who is forced by something in his life to become a WHORE
Rumesa Faheem, Thank you so so much for understanding darling! I'm glad you understood my view point!
Please KEEP SUPPROTING me!❤️
Finally moon is out of that filthy place! Hope she finds true love in Roy! great chapter
Amyra, Thanks dear, & even I hope so!
Finally we can see a ray of light for Moon in this bog of darkness...
I'm glad you liked it! ❤️❤️
Author in previous chapter while I read I cried so much .. how can some one be so animalistic...how can he treat her like that... is Davidson a human being??? Whore even though there business is that they are also human being... plz just end her sufferings... and where the he'll was Roy... I thought he will help her.. but he was late..so much late... atleast now give her all happiness plz author...
Hoorain, I'm so sorry for your tears dear...
Even I dared not read the whole chapter when I was editing it. I just read the first & last part, knowing though I myself wrote it, I won't be able to tolerate reading such things... :-/
But that's what the world hold for people as vulnerable as Moon. You can see her getting assaulted physically, sexually & mentally, but there are people who suffer even more, from around the world, whom we turn a blind eye at, or can't even see...
Will you believe me if I say I once saw an old man, nearly late 60s, wrapped up in nothing but rags in chilling winters, lying under the open sky, by the busy road & a noisy alcohol shop, lying down like waiting for his end, like he has no hope, no life. His sufferings could be seen upon by just a look at his sleeping self, even his sleep was so unpeaceful...
Reality is way harsher than fiction & so at least in this fiction, I PLEDGE to do justice to our Moon! I know the world might never give justice to anyone, let alone people like Moon, but at least we can do it, right?
Just wait, & yes, Moon will lead a life of her dreams a day, & we'll see her that way, I promise!(✿◠‿◠)
Light and shining for moon thanks
Juliet Merino, Aww, thank you for your best wishes to Moon, yes, I'll make sure Moon rise & shine!(★‿★)
I hate sad endings myself! Hell, I remember I once cried half the night when my one of favorite books ended sadly, & I couldn't help but curse everyone, lol!
So I'll make sure none of my Readers or me myself cry at the end... I hate crying!
Thanks for all your support!❤️❤️
So now we're friends OK? (story is as amazing as always.. Hoping best for our MOON)
Sakshi Sejal, Thanks dear! It really means a lot to me!!
& yes, FRIENDS!❤️❤️(✿◕‿◕✿)(❁´◡`❁)(✿◠‿◠)(★‿★)
This book broke my soul and I had to stop. Am mustering the strength to continue. The story line is very good
Mary Ekere Akor, I'm really sad to read this... I never meant any harm, but I see my writing has affected a lot of people, specially females, & I really APOLOGIZE for this...
But yes, now I ensure you the darker scenes will reduce, except for a few future scenes, plus telling Moon's past, & yeah a few bearable dark parts here-&-there...
I really appreciate your COURAGE dearest one, I mean you book affects you that much yet you read it's worst parts wow! You are indeed BRAVE! :-)
Thanks for your encouragement, & I'll try my best to never discourage or disappoint you!✍️(◔◡◔)
I'm excited for this new phase of Moon's life
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dear author plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz remember those brutal punishments that I have mentioned plzzzzzzz those monsters deserve those then only those women who were destroyed by them will get justice
I'm always so joyed to see your excitement of seeing them punished way worser than they abused Moon & others... You are really a JUSTICE-LOVING LADY, & I love you for that!
Don't worry justice will be served & for everyone! :-)
But we will just need some time, & I promise you, that the type of punishments you want will be given to the culprits! :-)
Thanks for your support dearest one!❤️
update dear ?
Akanksha Singh, I'll definitely update tonight dear!
I'm sorry for being late again, but I'm really busy & exhausted... :-(
Can you please stop turturing moon..... and will moon be free or scape that place???
Juliet Merino, Trust me dear, had it been in my hands, I would have never written any pain in Moon's life!
I'm a person in real life, who can't even slap someone, except of venting my anger by my long tongue at times, but there exist a world other than ours, & Moon moved from our normal world to that DARK WORLD...
I, being a PRAGMATIST, can't write that world in a fairytale way, the way it can never be... I have written a fragment of that world through Moon...
& OUR MOON WILL RISE! YES, SHE'LL COME OUT OF THIS & SOON!
I'd REQUEST your patience & support till then, for it's also WORST for me to hurt Moon...
Some nights I'm unable to sleep after I write the torture scenes, thinking how did I actually write it.
JUSTICE is what we need, & I assure you it'll be served to our Moon!
& from the next chapter which I'll try my best to publish by tomorrow, we'll see a BRIGHT LIGHT entering in Moon's life!
Hope you can wait for the next update, though it might not end all the pains, it'll surely change things, & then we'll move towards ending this world of the DARK! :-)
I BELIEVE IN OPTIMISM, & WON'T LET ANYTHING SNATCH THE LIGHT FROM MOON's LIFE! I PROMISE YOU THAT! :-)
Im done, now I cant take it anymore, as if I could feel all the pains of Moon through ur writing,
do u remember the tortures I mentioned in my comment, now I want to unleash my BEAST on those monsters specially that bloody davidson, he deserves brutal punishment
When the tortures , the sins became extreme then u know DEVI DURGA came to destroy that mahisasur, in every woman there is DEVI DURGA, and its just the time and situation that makes us powerful like her to punish the tormenters,
now for Moon, I think the time has come for her to realize that she now needs to pray to the GODDESS residing in her and show the DARK that the GODDESS of DARK is DEVI KALI
Even I'm done writing all these, I had a few more scenes, but after reading your words, I'm so done with all these... Hell, it's the 1st time I'm unable to read my own written up chapter... Now we'll move on, & Moon will get out of here!
Now will start the new phase of Moon's life!
Thanks for your words dear! & yes, we all have a shakti in us, all we need to do is to let it rise when the devils of the world rise too!❤️
My disgust and hatred for this davidson has reached ut peak and jow imonly wiauing for his extreme punishment and downfall
But I don't understand why cornelia is allowing this if she is getting less money than max?
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, Cause he is a POLITICIAN darling, a very powerful man, & can shake foundations of the whole place, Cornelia is too small in front of him...
I get your hate for him, & I really don't know how'll you react reading this latest chapter... Hoping to get your views soon! :-)
Thanks for all your support! :-)
please don't stop writing this book. It's concept everything is so intriguing I always wait for its new update
Rumesa Faheem, Really??? Thank you so much... & NO, I ain't gonna give up on my loyal dearest readers like you... It's just that my closest person stopped reading this book as it's too dark for her, along with a few others, & also that getting less responses I got disappointed, but I'll continue it for you, & for us all!
Thank you so so much for this much needed motivation! Love you!❤️
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