Age restriction 14+
Story about:love, billionaire, newadult
#3 in ChickLit#6 in Contemporary Romance
07.09.2019 — 15.02.2020
Total number of threads: 184
Wow such a good book. Been following the story faithfully. Love your writting style.
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I'm relieved that he told her. I really didn't think he would.
I want them to be very happy together.
Ok, I hope you don't mind if I put out a review here. I've only read up to chapter 4 (including the prologue), so some things might change, but I feel I wanted to get this out of my chest.
The exposition on the narrations is good, and they do a nice job of explaining character motivations and behaviors, making them seem more human. The dialogue can be forced when they talk about character goals and such. The conversation is varied and well done otherwise.
I like the character of Isabelle, so full of life, but so fragile. It seems like her development will be gradual, and I feel sorry for her troubles. I understand why she behaves and does certain actions. She has the spunk and energy; you feel happy alongside her when she's at peace, and feel sorry for Belle in her darkest moments.
Billy doesn't seem so bad for someone that's pushed to marry Belle, like a genuine person that cares for her (so far, it could change). Most of the other residents in the ranch are also lovely, considerate, and have great chemistry with one another. They have their flaws and have defining character traits, but still are still sweet deep down and appreciate Isabelle for who she is.
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Emma Swan, You're welcome; I was worried I came across as too mean there. I'm not sure where and how you find my comment accurate, but I appreciate it nonetheless.
I got to say; you do a great job at writing and getting the intended emotions invoked across the chapters. Some of the scenes hit me hard, in many different ways, pretty early on.
I'm also shocked you find this review illuminating. I'll be sure to post it in our group for others to see. However, considering some of my points will change as the story goes on, I'm not sure if my review will be accurate, though. As I said, I only read up to chapter 4 (including prologue) out of a potential 18 so far.
This is intensely accurate.
Saratoga1776, Thanks!!!! Good luck with your writing!
This is so addictive. I love the way you write. It's truly inspiring.
Saratoga1776, Thank you so much for your kind words.
Lester Meliza Galano
tear jerker,, pls update soon, thank u
Lester Meliza Galano, awwww... I promise you a good chapter 18... The next update would be Friday or Saturday at the latest. Thank you
oh thank you dear for this new next chapter .. I love the poems of Belle..how lovely..so get deep into my heart and cant stop to read it again and again...my dear Emma..you are.indeed a genius writer ..bless you..and take care...awaiting for the next lovely ones of this amazing touchy story..
Ashley Queen, email@example.com, as always, your comment is uplifting. The poem is part of my Italian poems (something over 200) that I'm trying to translate in English. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for your sweet, kind words.
wow em so much excited for the next update
Samar Sam, well... I'll "see" you next Friday. Thanks again for reading "Take A Chance On Me".
thank you for the update. I'm still mad at Shawn but he is much improved x
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Emma Swan, push him please, give him a big push so we can relax xo
Thank you for the update
Valerie Duffis, Thank you so much for this great feedback. I've become addicted to my readers' feedback. I'm writing this story bit blindfolded (No plan, no notes), so every single comment or feedback like yours is absolutely vital for me.
Shiza Naeem, Thanks. :))))))
I like the side Shawn has taken. Am liking this chapter by chapter thanks
Coreen Campbell, I like it too. Let's see what fate has in store for Shawn.
Thanks for the update
sadaf, the same day, next week.
CLAUDIA LORENA CORREA RAMIREZ
Me encantan tus libros, son historias que no quieres dejar de leer, que cautivan y te dejan soñando con el amor.
Espero te compadezcas y no me hagas esperar otros 8 días por otro capítulo.
CLAUDIA LORENA CORREA RAMIREZ, Lo siento hacerte esperar una semana con los updates... pero estoy escribiendo esta historia simultaneamente en Italiano también.
Muchas gracias por tus palabras e porque estas leyendo mi historia. Haré todo lo que pueda para que no esperes demasiado.
I am finally able to breath! And btw, I love those four things that lovers should know:-)
Marilyn Lucero, I'm sorry for keeping you waiting for the updates, but my Italian readers are waiting also... so... I'm so happy you liked the chapter and the 4 little rules...
Please update further.....
Shweta, I will.
Great story. Keep it up.
Victoria Egbunu, Thank you, I'll try my best.
great story. I love it to bit. Shawn and Belle's character are intriguing
can't wait to read what happens next
elizabeth, I'm already working on it... one more day left to wait.
I like your sense of mental regression.
Saratoga1776, uhm... thanks...
I enjoy the novel
Esther Ufoma, I'm glad you do. Thanks
Nice story......please update further............
Shweta, Thanks. I will, as soon as possible.
loving the complexities. Great work. The pitcher was a nice touch :)
HypGothic, Thanks, sis. I had it in mind since 10 chapters ago... :))))
Eagerly waiting for further updates :)
Sakshi Nandini, By the end of the week, you'll have my next update.
Very sweet,, now am beginning to love Isabelle.. I need more of her threat to shawn
Kenneth Callista, Be careful what you wish for... :)))))))
Nice update. You write well
Emilia Chimex, Thank you so much. I'm glad that you are reading my novel.
Amazing turns em so much curious for more updates
thanks... next week you'll find out more
I love New Isabels characters...thats not aggressive...thats perfect attitude to deal with man name Shawn..
Ashley Queen, Well, it's time for Isabelle to show everybody (Shawn included), what she's made of. It's time for Shawn to take a step back and brace himself in front of Hurricane "Belle"... Girl power!
Wow... you write so well and update on time every week! Incredible! Love your work so much!
Izzy, Well, I have to update every week... To tell the truth, I'm not good at keeping secrets, so when a chapter is ready, I have to tell you all about it... On a serious note, updating regularly is something that I feel I must do. For me, this means a form of respect for you and show how much I value the time you're spending on my work. Thank you again!
Worth waiting for an update like this...❤️
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Than you very very much for your update. Looking forward for the next chapters..Thank you
you're welcome. I will do my best to update as soon as possible.
love the story
thank you so much
, Love this story I hope the author will make belle a strong woman not like in the previous chapter a bullied woman.
Emma Swan, Looking forward for Belle's transformation.
Good evening, thank you very much for you great work, waiting patiently for you update..
Emma Swan, oh sure, I like your writing.. going to search the first ones..
I think that soon the romance will start up between belle and Shawn... And once they will start to get close... Then i guess the whole memory thing will surface... Hahaha... Its just prediction... While here making myself with preoccupied with what will happen next... Btw you writings touches my soul. Thank you for giving me that feeling.
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Emma Swan, Oh wow.. Congratulations I'm happy for you... I'll keep your words in my heart.. Inshallah i hope one day it will come true for me too
Please I need the continuation of
Take chance on me.when is it going to be ready
Rose Mary, I will update next week, Friday or Saturday. I'm still writing this story, so keep reading.
Thanks for the update. Waiting for the next
Marilyn Lucero, Thank you for reading my story. The next update will be this Friday
oh I am so happy to read this new chapter..it is precious, thank you..and I can feel the situationof it so real..bless your talent dear Emma...awaiting for another new chapters ..soon..☺
Emma Swan, Morning dear Emma...thank you for your wonderful words too...and this lovely story is indeed a kind of my therapy to see things differently..happy Monday and new week...keep up your spirit and idea to write this amazing story till the end..
I want to read more..plz update soon!
Emma Swan, *^-^*
Wow loving it I really hope Shawn ends up with Belle. I do believe that he loves her but he has to come to grips over his pass and move on. Can't wait to read the next chapter
Coreen Campbell, Thank you so much for your words and your patience. Well... who knows if Shawn will surprise everybody... we'll see. The next chapter will be published Friday or Saturday
awww am soo feeling for Shawn, I wish he could confront Isabelle and tell her the truth before her memory will come back.
Emma Swan, can't wait
Oh my god! Love the update so much! Can’t wait for more! Maybe Isabelle will get close to billy and Shawn will have to fight for her back? Or maybe there will be this super intense love triangle between billy, Shawn and dr Jones? Please update soon! ❤️
Izzy, Thank you so much!!!!!! Next week, same day you'll have the new chapter. Maybe... maybe... who knows? :))))))
extremely marvellous twist... keep us on our toes... will wait till next week but sweetheart it's gonna be to difficult
thank you o much. I am glad you've enjoyed it. I know that will be hard. believe me, I wish I could write faster, but someone should clone me... :)))
enjoyed reading cant wait for the next chapters
I am already starting chapter 16 in Italian, so next week, Friday or Saturday you'll have a new chapter to read. thank you so much for reading my story and for the patience.
When will you update? Am so waiting...?
already did. there will be an update once a week, around Friday or Saturday. please, read my last 2 blogs and you'll understand why.
wonderful....the way you write has made me get involved in this story deeper...I cant stop my tears flowing...thank you..and please come back to continue it. firstname.lastname@example.org
Emma Swan, yaaay..ok...dear Emma thanks a lot
So nice, will wait for updates
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