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Beata Gos 05.11.2020, 11:41:59
Very, very tragic story
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Elizabeth Moses 06.01.2021, 09:17:58
Beata Gos, Thanks for the comment:)
Simple Pruny Spire 06.01.2021, 01:08:35
This was a very nice read, however very sad. The description of events were very precise, I could imagine Hannah's body as her dad threw her across the room, I could imagine Susan throwing Hannah's lunch in the box.
The only thing that confused me was Hannah's death.
For a nice written book, the end is very sad. Too much death.
Over all I loved it.
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Elizabeth Moses 06.01.2021, 09:17:33
Simple Pruny Spire, Thank you.
A lot of kids are going through this and can't speak out. it is sad because I am trying to pass a message... I really appreciate your comment.
Beata Gos 05.11.2020, 11:26:31
Why are there silly people, hurting others, they are devil's advocate
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morganthewriter 08.06.2020, 19:11:52
omg it's such a good book I wish I could stop crying so I can see the words lol
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Elizabeth Moses 09.06.2020, 02:02:54
lol thanks for the comment dear
Ryo Francis 05.06.2020, 06:11:08
(1). Your narrative is written well — easy to read. I love short chapters
(2). Such a tragedy but many lessons to be learn from your MC, her stupid mom & doctor, her best friend :(
(3). Minor complaint — some spelling errors, Susan/Sofia as the bully? I assume MsJupiter was the house guest and why was she visiting? And SPOILER (offscreen/off the narrative death of her only friend)
I will check your other works soon. Thanks for the good read :)
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Elizabeth Moses 09.06.2020, 02:02:24
Thank you for the review.. I really appreciate. I will work on this
Odun Ayo Godon 29.05.2020, 22:16:36
it was nice
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Elizabeth Moses 29.05.2020, 22:22:50
thanks you:)
Odun Ayo Godon 29.05.2020, 22:16:23
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setare bp 20.05.2020, 09:57:24
its cool
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Elizabeth Moses 20.05.2020, 13:55:13
thank you:)
Luna 19.05.2020, 22:11:29
Hannah didn't deserve to die, but that makes the story all the more real.
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Elizabeth Moses 20.05.2020, 02:35:38
thanks for reading:)
that's actually the point
Eloho Ajagba 19.05.2020, 00:51:45
Interesting, but Hannah don't suppose to die
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Elizabeth Moses 19.05.2020, 02:50:22
thanks for commenting.. I believe her death will pass a lot of lessons to parents out there...:)
Favour Chiamaka 16.05.2020, 14:57:50
Comment text: hmmm, all death but interesting too
thanks author
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Elizabeth Moses 16.05.2020, 17:57:41
you are welcome... thanks for reading my short book.. you are the best