The Billionaire's Ex
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#512 in Billionaires
#408 in Erotic
Ongoing: 09 Feb 147 pages
23.09.2022 — ...
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Beautiful storyline. But I am unhappy that Andrew died while saving Thea
Seriously she can’t blame him. How come women always endup blaming men? Here Ashton was not wrong. What would a man do when the woman he loves tell him that child she cares not hers ?
I will love this story if author can develop some authenticity of this story. Like when she said the child is Ashton’s he didn’t say anything. At least not to ask about the DNA. It’s a surprise because she was the one he loved so when she said something like that a guy would definitely ask for a DNA at least. Or ask where’s the child.
On the other hand she would not lie about the child during the wedding day. It could have been some other way around..
Elizabeth doesn’t like lies but she’s lying to Ashton so much too
Thank you for the update. I've been waiting for it a long time. pls could you update more frequently? I really do love the book. more grace.
nice update but takes ages
Update please author
How do I do that?
Yes Ashton , go after Thea your true love .Don’t let her slip off your fingers this time . Good job Ashton .
and if I may ask where is the kid??
NelisaGold, okay following up
When the wedding stop and Thea woke up she was okay with that. When Ashton said we can get married anytime and he replied was “okay”. Women doesn’t react like that. Also she found out she’s pregnant. The emotions are not really described properly.
Also Ashton asking whether it’s his child shows that he doesn’t trust her.
Yeah, he does not trust her but still loves her alot . Sad to hear she lost her pregnancy because Ashton would have realized he was the father in the first place
I love this book. I feel there’s a great story hidden in this book. But also feel like author needs to be little organize with the story maybe this is what author wants to do. Make us all confused.
But few points I see that needs to be improve, the emotions of Ash when he heard his sister died. It was never mentioned. He should be shocked and should reach his home immediately. It was his own sister. But he consider it was as a business deal. No matter what a brother would have some sort of feelings.
Also if both of they were in so much love, she should have definitely would have asked money from him rather asked money from a third party because that also means she sold her dignity for money no matter what’s the circumstances is.. So I think if author can changed the fact why Ashton and they broke up this would have been better. It’s just my opinion.
Also there are many characters and we all get confused because there’s no proper direction but maybe at the end everything will be get connected..
However good luck author, waiting for a wonderful story.. ❤️
Pageluv, Thanks for the contribution though. I really liked that you took time to read my book. This book was written well when I was a bit younger and still undergoing editing. if anything needs to be edited I will do that.
Ashtons reaction to Freya's death takes a little turn to the fact that, the story has a little more secrets that would be revealed in the later chapters. it's almost coming to an end just a little patience.
thank you once more for the observation, I really appreciate it.
why are you repeating yourself author ? anyway the story is awesome can't wait for the updates
This update had repeated lines
Edith Ogbuwawa Kelvin, sorry for the mistakes.......
I feel bad for Thea.
Whats your updating schedule ?
today I came across this book and I really enjoyed it
SurenderKumar, Thank you so much.
are we going to get an update today?
what happened to the pregnancy ??am curious
Rachael Macharia, just hold on a bit...I'm almost at that part
Why she couldn't borrow money from fiance? Was it so awkward? Why would she be blamed as a gold digger?
kate isakova, it happens though.....I've heard some stories tho. the problem won't come from the fiance but his family most times because the man is too in love to say no. Most times, they say things like you're not even married and you are demanding money.......it happens tho.
please when will be the next update come ??
bisma khan, I'll post one up now....thankS for the read. Please do follow and share
Good storyline. Hope Thea can remain this strong and not get bullied by Claire or anyone else.
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