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The Heiress

Plume Alter

Story about:contemporary romance, billionaireromance, action and school

Age restriction: 18+

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#529 in Billionaires
#178 in Romantic suspense


Complete 118 pages

Publication: 03.09.2020 — 24.02.2021


Description of book "The Heiress"

At eighteen, Tiffany is accepted as a new Alpha member, and as part of her initiation, is sent to a place where she has to kill the notorious enemy of the Alphas, Lucio Hernandez; the head behind the Dragon Brotherhood. It would have been easy for her, but what if she falls in love with a teacher as she disguised herself as a Grade 11 student? Will she still succeed on her mission?

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Eva Sankar
20.09.2021, 02:50:30

I enjoyed reading this book. Thank you

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Eva Sankar
17.09.2021, 23:38:35

I am getting so engross in the book that I am finding it hard to put down

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noveltealover
26.01.2021, 04:25:04

Omg I finished reading!! The last several chapters were so intense and fast-paced, filled with tons of action. Some parts were a bit too graphic/gory for my taste, but this must be what it's like when you're a part of the mafia underworld lolol. There were some twists that surprised me like the truth about Yolo/Yuan (omg...) and Tiffany's real mom. Now I can finally say: screw the patriarchy system and all men in this story suck LOL. And sbjskalw omg yaaas Tiffany & Marie made it out alive and they're together starting a new life with new identities. I'm so glad my ship survived while everyone else didn't LOL. :') Great job in being able to write this novel within 4 months! Sending you all the good luck for the contest, Plume!!! :DD

Plume Alter
18.02.2021, 05:55:27

noveltealover, All the support that I get from you are treasured. I owe you big time, Nix.

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Maajida
04.02.2021, 14:46:47

short but nice plot ??

Plume Alter
18.02.2021, 05:54:48

Mj Lee, Thank you so much! Do you think I might be able to pull off a sequel for this?

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Mary Grace Gloria
12.02.2021, 17:34:01

√The heiress exceed my imagination
√The twists was so blind curves that I couldn't see what's coming
√Then it makes me ride with its rhythms, letting myself drown to it as it tour me to all the senses that I have
√I feel all the characters emotions and I feel like I am the protagonist herself
√I've really felt the SOUL of the book
√all that I might ask for is present and
√I love how you write the book, it suits my taste

Congratulations!
de excelente trabajo ?
P.s I love that you put spanish language in it.. it really add its beauty ❤
(it makes me like to learn Spanish ??)

Plume Alter
18.02.2021, 05:54:15

Mary Grace Gloria, Thank you, ma'am. I love you!

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Maricel Carsula-Salapi
17.01.2021, 05:12:37

A very good read indeed!?

Plume Alter
17.01.2021, 06:48:41

Maricel Carsula-Salapi, OMG!!!! thank you, ma'am ♥️ ... overwhelmed hehe...

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noveltealover
17.12.2020, 06:58:26

Ahh I caught up to all the chapters again! Okay, phew, thank god Yolo didn't take Marie to the principal's office and Steffy returned in time. But omg I take back my last comment that all guys suck. Yolo's back in my good books for real!! Mr. Seson finally got what was coming to him. And uhh, is it okay that I'm shipping Steffy & Marie now lolol? I love these two!! Plz make their friendship into something more even though Steffy prob will end up with Teacher Greg (aka Lucio Hernandez?) anyways :') Also, love your new cover btw! Until your next update(s)!

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Marilyn Lucero
10.12.2020, 09:34:36

Love the cover better!

Marilyn Lucero
13.12.2020, 19:44:58

Plume Alter, That was explicit? I don't think so.

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noveltealover
08.12.2020, 01:30:25

OMG noo, Yolo I will fight you if you take Marie to the principal's office. T_T But ugh, are all the authority figures in this school repulsive and corrupted? I hope one day all the evil doers gets what's coming to them. >:c Actually, forget it, screw all the guys in this story LOL. They all suck. I stan by Steffy and Marie's newly found friendship rn and I'm glad Steffy took Marie under her wing and is looking out for her. It looks like both girls are in need of a friend. :') Get yourself a friend like Steffy who will get everyone to leave the cafeteria just so you can eat lunch in peace not being surrounded by bullies haha. So this is what it's like to be caught up in a story. Looking forward to the next update! xD

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Roza Csergo
30.10.2020, 11:22:48

Dear author. Congratulations for this captivating story. Your first lines are very strong and gripping. I'm absolutely hooked.

Plume Alter
01.12.2020, 04:50:48

Roza Csergo, Hello Miss Roza. Thank you for reading this. I'm honored.

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noveltealover
30.11.2020, 02:09:51

Oof what a ton of action and chaos happening around for the brotherhood. I like how there's different POVs so we can see the story from different angles and learn more about the background of some of the characters that all have a role to play and are connected one way or another. I think Tiffany is an interesting anti-heroine and considering how the story revolves around mafias and revenge and stuff, there isn't room for kindness, especially as a young woman growing up in a cruel underworld of gangs dominated by men. I also like Yolo lool and hope we see more of him. I don't have anything nice to say about Teacher Greg LOL so I'll keep my mouth shut... Anyway, looking forward to seeing how the plot will unfold in the grand scheme of things. A unique take on the billionaire romance genre for sure >:D

Plume Alter
01.12.2020, 04:50:10

noveltealover, aweeeee thank you, Nix!!!!! So you don't like Teacher Greg lolssss. Honestly, me too. I d didn't know writers can develop these kinds of feelings towards their characters. This just makes it more interesting to write hehehe.

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noveltealover
22.09.2020, 04:12:05

Whoaa omg your plot for a billionaire romance is so interesting! :OO As always, your narrative draws me in whether it's in 1st person or 3rd person POV. I loved the prologue with us being introduced to Tiffany and her initiaton into becoming the next Alpha and following in her father's footsteps. And then her father giving her mission to eliminate a target by going undercover at a high school. Tiffany aka Steffy is intimidating as hell though LOL so Charlotte and her friends have messed with the wrong girl. I get a sort of crime mob/mafia vibes from Tiffany's family too. Looking forward to your next update! I hope more people will discover your story submission for the contest hehe. Keep it up!! ^_^

noveltealover
27.09.2020, 20:11:29

Plume Alter, Oh yes that'd definitely take research and it must've been interesting to learn about the workings of mafia and stuff too haha. I hope this story will keep you motivated as well. That's the best in writing when you have enthusiasm for it. ^_^ And no entry yet... if I come up with an idea to submit for the contest before the deadline, maybe I'll participate! :) It's outside my genre that I like to write, but it'd be neat to try writing a 3K word submission for fun to see if it gets accepted or not haha.

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Marilyn Lucero
21.09.2020, 01:42:50

OMG! This is sooo interesting.

Plume Alter
21.09.2020, 08:00:49

Marilyn Lucero, Thank you ateee.

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Plume Alter
11.09.2020, 11:03:30

just in! This work is already accepted, guys! Thank you Lord!

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Plume Alter
11.09.2020, 04:23:49

I submitted this already but it's still on pending. I hope and pray that this story will be approved! I'm just sooo excited for this. Thank you for those who have really read the prologue and have added this book in their libraries. God bless y'all!

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Marilyn Lucero
03.09.2020, 03:34:46

This is exciting. Is this an entry for the contest?

Marilyn Lucero
03.09.2020, 04:38:05

Plume Alter, That's good to know!

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