The Infinite

rubiya sulthana 25.02.2021, 05:18:28

already read this ..I don't know how many times...can't wait for updates;))

rubiya sulthana 23.02.2021, 07:22:36

awesome now that is so romantic

rubiya sulthana 19.02.2021, 03:38:11

that was so heart touching letter ....il love reading your book first thing in morning....maybe not first thing there's other stuff and you update late soooooo....but I love to do

rubiya sulthana 15.02.2021, 15:00:30

I kinda like your thoughts you're very mature than your age keep it up :)))

Jungoo Toe 17.02.2021, 11:27:54

finally i was able to login but bro you get me whipped for your writings everytime???

rubiya sulthana 13.02.2021, 03:32:11

if you don't mind may I ask how old are you??its ok if you don't wanna answer

rubiya sulthana 13.02.2021, 03:30:53

wow...the description of moon is soo incredible and when I see moon now ...it will be different ...that so deep and I you do

Maryam Asif 12.02.2021, 16:07:08

She is such....a sad...person.... I'm glad that she doesn't feel as sad anymore...

Maryam Asif 12.02.2021, 16:02:58

Awwwww a HUG I love hugsssss

Maryam Asif 12.02.2021, 15:54:05

I feel like crying now...this feeling where u cannot do anything about something actually feels like shit

Maryam Asif 12.02.2021, 16:00:23

But that's a good idea!

Maryam Asif 12.02.2021, 15:57:11

Ok that dream is creepy

Maryam Asif 12.02.2021, 15:50:28

Ok this is getting serious
It means....she had to kill someone...
Aaaaah I can't with this

rubiya sulthana 12.02.2021, 05:04:27

this is going to be my favourite part...

rubiya sulthana 11.02.2021, 03:44:22

that's so sad ...I thought she will take her....but I made sense ..okay at least this is going somewhere...but honestly do u have to update only one chapter daily??

rubiya sulthana 10.02.2021, 18:19:59

I thought of that kaoru would say that...but I didn't expect that from akari...are you updating tomorrow I'm waiting

rubiya sulthana 08.02.2021, 23:36:36

I'm so in love this please update soon

rubiya sulthana 06.02.2021, 07:59:25

I love you book

rubiya sulthana 03.02.2021, 03:34:53

I hope kaoru soon realizes wat she feeling for akari and akari should be stop ignoring kaoru....come on can't wait for next update

rubiya sulthana 03.02.2021, 06:52:29

oh....that was a great akari is great but kaoru shouldn't get caught I hope....thanks for update

Maryam Asif 02.02.2021, 15:42:23

Oh myyyy gaaaaawd that's sooooo interesting

Maryam Asif 02.02.2021, 15:55:58

I-
*Speechless*
*Starts crying*

That Dad would be killed by me today-

Maryam Asif 02.02.2021, 15:45:56

I will go and cry now

Maryam Asif 02.02.2021, 15:39:06

Yayyyy kaoru
This is so ROMANTIC

Maryam Asif 02.02.2021, 15:35:47

Please accept her kaoruuuuuu~

Maryam Asif 02.02.2021, 15:32:13

Now that's deep kaoru
Why are you thinking that all of a sudden?

Maryam Asif 02.02.2021, 15:52:36

Aaaaaw she's so sweet

Maryam Asif 02.02.2021, 15:49:18

Yayyyyyyy this is beautiful ❤️

rubiya sulthana 28.01.2021, 04:21:01

wow....this queen is just great....she's need no one to do her work or don't give a shit about wat others think or say about her...but this suspense is killing me please update soon

rubiya sulthana 28.01.2021, 08:34:37

I love this

rubiya sulthana 27.01.2021, 11:10:58

wow....this is a another level of romance...cant wait for more...I want to keep reading this

rubiya sulthana 25.01.2021, 08:52:19

it's good...but I was hoping she had listened to all conversation but it's a suspense but I'm want more of karoun and demon queen can't wait to know them

Maryam Asif 25.01.2021, 11:06:25

Im glad she's not that hurt...
But whyyyy would a QUEEN go for the search of food...like literally?!?

Maryam Asif 25.01.2021, 15:43:14

I don't trust the guards lmao :') but okay

rubiya sulthana 24.01.2021, 16:07:34

I'm fell in love with this devil queen.....please update more ...I wanna know where this lead them

Maryam Asif 24.01.2021, 15:28:57

I hope this albus gets anxiety and depression :')

Maryam Asif 24.01.2021, 15:25:17

I'm glad she didn't kill him :'') bit at the same time I'm not

Maryam Asif 24.01.2021, 14:32:51

This albus, I want him to die...but again kaoru will feel sad so... I don't think she should kill him :')

Maryam Asif 24.01.2021, 14:20:44

Jshssjsg this is so good this devil queen i love

Maryam Asif 24.01.2021, 14:24:32

Well... that's shocking

Maryam Asif 24.01.2021, 14:17:07

This devil queen is so bad ass i love her

Maryam Asif 24.01.2021, 14:14:03

I hate this general commander :')

Maryam Asif 24.01.2021, 14:10:00

I hope she travel safely
I really loved the intro-
It was mysterious and made me curious of alot of things looking forward to the next chapter

Nyssa Quadros 24.01.2021, 11:02:43

Hey Masuyo,

I loved the mystical elements to your book. It's been long since I came across a book of the fantasy/supernatural genre ... I loved the novelty and freshness of your ideas here. It isn't necessarily a theme I have come across in books so this breath of fresh air is definitely a gem.

One way I think you could improve is using names (instead of pronouns where necessary) and putting a tad more detail into your book. Given the fantasy setting, by incorporating the latter the readers could have a more indulging experience with more focus on aesthetics and imagery. This might also help you to better contrast the role reversals you seem to be going for. Besides this, I did spot a couple of grammar /typos but nothing that can't be fixed with a good proof read

That being said, please do check out my book if you can. I am not sure if something from the cliche romance trope would interest you but I would love to hear your views regardless, if that isn't too much trouble. Either way, loved the imagination at play here and can't wait to see a bit more of the world you've created. All the very best!

Maryam Asif 23.01.2021, 19:54:26

I love it this is the bestest thing ever omg

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Angelic Emman 20.01.2021, 23:51:45

Yaaas!! I'm so proud of you jagiyaa!!
Keep going ^^ Best of luckk!!