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127 pages
08.12.2021 — 16.03.2022
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Log inthough the story is good. the translation is very very bad which makes us getting irritated
i cant make this story out ist you your and whatnot
To be honest author your book is great and tempting to read is just that I feel like someone is talking for Bella in the story other than that is great
I feel like the characters are not one talking there is someone narrating the story.
madam story is nice. I really enjoyed but there are few corrections the readers may get confusion like female lead name is YOU
Nice book had fun reading it...cant wait to read the next one...plz dnt rent the scnd book...
language is not fluent.....
Wow such an interesting storyline. I love your book Grey. I love to comment but at the end bcos thats where d thrills lies for me. I just wont b able to stop until i finish. Happy i came across your book and i hope d 2nd part is free.. Good work u av here n i pray you get so much comments n rewards for a job well done. Congratulations and more wins for u. Amen. Thank you for the book once again. See u in April
nic. cant waith for parts 2
and 3
waiting for your second book
Hello. Am sure ds is going to be interesting but instead of You, it would have bn better to use i for easy reading. Congratulations to you Grey. Thumps up
"You" as a name is kind of confusing.
why don't you change the name or change the spelling
Oladiti Grace, it's Yun and not you
Beautiful book, eagerly waiting for the 2nd part.
really what will the name be
ended with a good suspense,,,,though nyc book it was :))
thank you for this wonderful book author
Plz don't make me wait that long..........love the books BTW and thank u for make my day:)
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Ok, just hoping that l can continue reading your novel coz you really have a creative minds and most of all,you are one of my favorite.
Vits Ortega, oh that's means alot. thank you
Never mind those bashers ,Me...l love the way you express those motherly love ,maybe you are a mom too,hehe!Thanks.
l can relate to this chapter,as if my heart bleeds for all the sufferings she encountered,thai is what you call...Unconditional Love.
lm soo sad with this chapter coz as a mother ,l know that feeling.
OMG IS BAM YUN'S FATHER?!?!?!?!
OMG IS BAM YUN'S FATHER?!?!?!?!
OMG IS BAM YUN'S FATHER?!?!?!?!
OMG IS BAM YUN'S FATHER?!?!?!?!
Your novel makes an oldy lady to bear this pandemic times .
Vits Ortega, lmao
l love reading your novel,it helps me fight my boredom coz being senior l always stay at home,thanks.
Vits Ortega, thank you^_^ i am glad:-)
awnn, so cute.
the pic melted my heart;; such a sweet n innocent gesture but it is soo beautiful:)
well, waiting for the update
Sabrin Sultana Aishorjo, today!
why'd someone say that? that's rude, even if the story is not her thing then she/he should just skip it, it's not a easy task to write a story, it needs a lot of time and hard work.
and it really is a good story with a hear touching plot, so keep it up
Oh I don't like love triangle. and now I can't put any of the Kim. both are special, hope everything will be better
i read all the chapters in one day..... cant believe i have to wait
The baby namjoon met before
just starting reading yesterday, as much as i love reading this story, this "you and your" confusing me a lot.. like i thought this "you" is a name but then its not capitalize. pls make it right. the story is very interesting though. waiting for the next update
Karen BayRu, exactly.. i though only me get confuse after reading it.. "you and your" should be refer as "she and her" instead.. really make my brain confuse despite the storyline was quite ok...
OMG suspence.. I'm afraid. I hope What Tae will tell won't be a negative thing specially r/T Yun. If he confess he loves Bella to namjoon, wow.... That will be another story. ❤️
Whoever said the book was cliche must think first b4 dropping comments like that. U can read and if u dint like don't continue then. This is a free book. We must be thankful atleast.
Let's be ki D and appreciative of each other. Don't have to be mean. Life is so short.
And author u did great. Always remeber that all your loyal readers will love your work no matter, what. ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Grey V, Xoxo ❤️❤️❤️ we ❤️ u author.
can he just adopt kids?
Pls do hurry, finish the book. l am excited to know the ending. Thank you.
hey author, here are all kind of people and some are really stupid and full of hate. I do realise how critics are also important for someone's growth but you shouldn't let the hate comments get to you, this book has comforting and sweet vibes to it and I always wait for it to be updated since the day I found this^^ so please don't get disheartened... you're doing great
Dibyani Prusty, now that I read my comment again, I think I wasn't clear with my words but nevertheless I was trying to say the same and you shouldn't give your attention to the hate as I can understand how difficult it can get to write something out of your own creativity when you keep these things in mind...so please relax and we love your work
wiil you make the 2nd chapter paid??plzz author dont
zainah zahara priota, yes!
cuteeee chap it was:)
hey author you had replied a comment by saying that this book was previously published in wattpad ...may i know the name of it in wattpad??
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Pls publish the next chapter.
I am addicted to this novel....
I am eagerly waiting for your update
Hey author,
We are waiting for your update.....
I love this novel need it up
Don't worry, I LOVE THE STORY. I am looking forward to read the following chapters of your book. Continue to write beautiful story to make people happy like me.
go ahead with the book, it's good :)
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