Vampire king's mate.
vampirelove, vampire and human, erotic explicit mature sex scenes
04.05.2022 — ...
#8 in Erotic Supernatural
#27 in Romantic mystery
On Hold: 23 Jan 187 pages
04.05.2022 — ...
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Thank you for the update, I really like your story. I would want to point something about your writing style, I mean, you write a lot but I think that you stretch some scenes uselessly and it makes your chapter long but with almost no real interaction. We understand character pov but majority of time we are in theirs heads and we see small interaction between the main characters. And the fact that even when you narrate the story you keep writing her name"Valentina looks the child, Valentina eat the food, Valentina play with the kid" it makes your book looks amateur. Again it is just my opinion, after all you are the author.
Fourier Karen, Thanks for such an honest review , i really really appreciate it ,i would keep this in mind !
amazing as always, update soon
wow., amazingly long chapter it is! it has raised so many curious butterflies inside my heart to know more about their past life ,plz update soon
Happy new year dear author
too good , too amazing it was.i love it
Very good chapter please try to update more often.
awesome update so valentina also has powers can we get another update
Next update plz
hmmm amazingly described, beautiful
waiting for next exciting update as she won't know who kissed her keep up the good work author and guys vote comment and like as story is worth reading
please I want to ask is it that she does not know who kissed her or what?
author sylvie, ok
beautifully written, wonderful chapter , lovely plz, update next soon
finally story is getting interesting from here keep up the good work author
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Hana Liaqat, i was out of town since four days ,you will get an update soon !
wow, it was really wonderful and a lengthy chapter, perfect
story is getting interesting with every update keep up the good work author
without understanding him ,she should ponder before submitting to him so soon
superb, wonderful & nice turn
nice update was worth reading waiting for ambroz pov
Very short update ending with cliffhanger hope so we can get another update
Hana Liaqat, yes ,the new chapter will be a long one ,and a satisfactory one
it was quite a short chapter,wanted to read more of it, update soon plz
Amazon as always, superrrbly presented his view. I want to read about Valentina perspective too in next.update soon plz
what has happen in this year's in ambroz life that changed him for the worst. will wait for it
Will be waiting for frequent updates and please silent readers do follow and comment for fast updates and like
So ambroz is afraid of her mate and does not want to accept her
she is really amazing & intelligent, & a filial daughter of her mom.her father is really a dirtbag dad.i m excited to know further story after they met.plz update soon
Nice update finally they meet ambroz and valentina
nice but short chapter, i m very excited to know the answer, from my guess, i think it must be her father, who took the lead in that situation.
Please silent readers follow and comment for fast updates
Excited for next update when she will meet ambroz how he will react
Amazing, finally she has reached there, what will happen next, i' m very excited , plz update soon
Very short update and will be excited to see how ambroz will react after meeting valentina and his ideas will change or not about his mate
just started reading your book & I love it
Wonderful and thrilling as always .
ambroz has changed a lot
and he thinks so low of valentina
curious to know what happens ahead
Valentina has. become so hard to tackle now
I'm so excited to read more of this novel
very very very fantastic update
Kindly support our author by comment and like and also by following and to all silent readers please comment and like for fast updates as story is worth reading
The update was interesting giving us a sneak peak of how valentina knew about her parents especially her vampire mother and now it will be interesting to know how she forgives her father and meet ambroz
Hope so valentina will show her worth to him
Thanks author we appreciate your hard work as story is worth waiting for reading and how drastically has ambroz changed having no respect for mate just by considering her weak human he cannot justify his actions hope so valentina will give her tough time and will show her some self respect
Kindly try to update more frequently
Waiting for next update to see how ambroz life has changed in these past two years as we got a glimpse of valentine life now
The chapter was really good but i dont like the way he criticized his own mate he should love her, cherish her he should be only fascinated by her there should be only her in his mind and he should be like whatever fault she has but she is the most beautiful think alive on this earth or world and most importantly she is mine. And here he is criticizing her that she has little fault and she won't keep me intrested in her for long time. Like really bruhhhhhh whatever i know there something extremely hazardous going in you mind author would wait for update lot's of ❤
techno mehak sharma, surely
Ambroz wants to judge her mate on basis of beauty not other characters
Hana Liaqat, Hi ,author sylvie this side
I won't be able to update for 2-3 days because a problem has suddenly came up with my laptop,its repairing may take some time,kindly wait for the next chapter ,it may take some days
I think ambroz will take revenge for his father's death and i think he will bring valentina with him soon that destined time
author sylvie, Or his revenge might be based on prologue where she dies
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