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#114 in Billionaires
#49 in Contemporary Romance
Ongoing: 26 Mar
48 pages
22.08.2022 — ...
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Log inHe forbidden her to make frnds, and then realised tht it's love...forbidding someone to make frnds is not love at all...I hope this guy get on the right track at the right time..and he is already can't forgiven! good update author keep going!
Roseline Zone, ikr
This is so wrong! Advay's hatred doesn't give him the right to rape her.. yes it is a rape! She chooses someone else over him, so what? many people do! but that doesn't justify this behavior... he married her without her will.. treated her like a slave, but who gave him the right to rape her.. he is supposed to be a husband not a rapist.. I don't get it! why man find rape as a only punishment for a woman? it's not a punishment, it's a crime.. And i will never ship Aday and kashish.. he is wrong and he will in my eyes..
Roseline Zone, ikr
good update author... please update frequently at least thrice in week
Roseline Zone, thank you but it's weekly update Book
now he will realise that she wasn't experienced... and she may married to another man but she wasn't in any type of physical activities with her former dead husband. This marriage will be the result of reunion of their hearts..
nice story author.. just some suggestions... umm put some scenes too... like expression, body movement, background... and take it slow don't rush things...and try to change the way you write your paragraphs like name and what does that person say... as a reader I really like ur story and just wants to give you some suggestions so you can make it more better..
lots of love... and thnks for the update
Roseline Zone, ok I'm new in writting will definitely try to improve
really good update author..
Roseline Zone, thank you
Nice annotation author... gonna read it tonight...
Roseline Zone, thank you
update please
Laranya Patil, Sunday dear
when r u going to update??
Amrita Koul, very soon I'm little bit busy in personal life, as I said from September onwards then definitely I will start updating from September month
ok will wait.
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