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When God Intervenes

Marilyn Lucero

Story about:a guillane barre syndrome story

Rating:
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Ranking:
#850 in Short stories


Complete 5 pages

Publication: 20.05.2019 — 23.05.2019


Description of book "When God Intervenes"

How would you prepare for your coming death? How would you accept it?

Initially diagnosed with Guillane - Barre Syndrome, I did everything to prepare myself, only to realize that I would never be ready enough...

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Josie joe
29.03.2022, 09:12:54

nice short and inspiration touching story.

Marilyn Lucero
29.03.2022, 09:50:32

Josie joe, I' feel so awed that you read my stories.

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SESaunders
14.03.2021, 04:24:03

Beautiful book. Thank you for sharing your experience.

Marilyn Lucero
14.03.2021, 03:27:11

SESaunders, Oh, I'm so honored that you read this. Thank you so much.

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Ryo Francis
13.07.2020, 14:04:26

Wow — simple yet so touching :)

Marilyn Lucero
17.07.2020, 01:35:32

Ryo Francis, thank you so much for reading.❤

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Jessa Bensulan Meting
16.07.2020, 12:49:40

Please update

Marilyn Lucero
17.07.2020, 01:34:39

Jessa Bensulan Meting, I will. Thank you.

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Plume Alter
16.07.2020, 21:12:53

Hey ate Marilyn! I'm really sorry if karun pa ko naka update regarding the review nga plano unta naho for this book of yours. Something came up and I had to deactivate my FB account that's why it took me quite a while to drop my comments about the book.

Well, I know it's super duper laaaaate but I still wanna share my thoughts about it kasi it's actually one of the best books I've read so far.

Upon reading the book, a lot of questions were running on my mind because I really felt that everything that you wrote was based on a real experience (considering that you are a nurse hehe). I just don't know if you were the one how experienced it or maybe one of your patients.
The whole concept was amazing and the choice of words were carefully woven thus creating a very heart felt work of art.

You have a good command of language and the narration is good, making the actions or movements in the story become vivid in the reader's mind.

I super liked the book Ate. It deserves to be published not just for literary entertainment but pwede pod sija for textbooks and other educational references. Congratulations on this!

Marilyn Lucero
17.07.2020, 01:33:21

Plume Alter, thank you so much for this heartwarming review. This was me last 2017.

Please, please write this review on our FB page for the short story review.❤

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Juanito Mangubat
15.07.2020, 05:01:08

So touching!

Marilyn Lucero
15.07.2020, 08:06:55

Juanito Mangubat, thank you, Lev.❤

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Plume Alter
09.07.2020, 20:48:11

i'm about to cry :(

Marilyn Lucero
10.07.2020, 03:28:14

Plume Alter, Ay, salamat, hahaha! Nakuyawan pa kaayo ko this morning kay as I reread, I feel this is horribly -written.

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Angela Omozojie (Sky Angel)
09.07.2020, 11:15:23

A lovely author you are. You've captured the power and loved God in this book. More wisdom I pray for you

Marilyn Lucero
09.07.2020, 12:23:30

Sky Angel, thank you sooo much for reading

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Shiza Naeem
20.05.2020, 03:09:37

Truly a wonderful story...I hope it happens to all those suffering ...I myself treated the patient of GBS it feel’s heartbroken to see how they are struggling a little bit..and here we are always complaining and so ungrateful towards this blessing called life...

Shiza Naeem
20.05.2020, 11:38:20

I can...i know how they just wish to do everything at once cause they running out of time

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Victoria Innocenty
17.05.2020, 09:54:56

What a wonderful God we serve!!

Marilyn Lucero
17.05.2020, 11:09:25

Victoria Innocenty, indeed! Thank you so much for reading. More about inspirational stories in the book titled, "My Heart Speaks".

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Red Heart
08.04.2020, 17:06:02

This is inspiring.

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Roza Csergo
01.09.2019, 18:26:33

Dear God, such honest emotions.
I felt every word. Dear lady, you have a wonderful talent. A true gift.

Marilyn Lucero
28.01.2020, 11:24:10

thank you so much for the inspiring words.

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Martins peter
12.12.2019, 00:31:00

glory be to God that is why is good to be a child of God He always care for us may His holy name be praise forever

Marilyn Lucero
12.12.2019, 18:33:35

Amen. Thank you so much for reading

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Goodness Shadrach
23.10.2019, 18:55:10

you are perfectly okay now aren't you?

Marilyn Lucero
23.10.2019, 22:36:09

I am by God's grace. Thank you so much for reading

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Kayalicia
17.10.2019, 06:46:24

Such a beautiful story, right from the start it grips your heart. Though short is the kind of story that lingers on in the mind and heart.

Marilyn Lucero
17.10.2019, 07:05:47

I am hoping that this could inspire you now that you are in emotional trouble. Thanks for reading.

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Celeste I.
05.10.2019, 05:29:04

Wow, what an emotional rollercoaster. It was short, but it hit me like a ton of bricks. I wouldn't know what to do if I was dying or about to go to the afterlife. Props to this lady for taking it like a champ.

Marilyn Lucero
05.10.2019, 15:59:07

thank you so much for reading. I hope this story will serve as an inspiration to many:-)

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Verna Villanueva
04.10.2019, 18:51:26

Thanks for sharing your story ate! Looking forward to reading more of your work. :)

Marilyn Lucero
05.10.2019, 00:51:19

thank you so much for reading. Now I'm nervous about the tons of error in my works:-)

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Akins Ayomi
28.09.2019, 12:16:41

God is a great God

Marilyn Lucero
30.09.2019, 12:07:14

Akins Ayomi, Amen

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Marie Thomas
24.05.2019, 14:40:32

well, I don´t know what would I do in this case, it´s complicated

Marilyn Lucero
26.05.2019, 00:41:33

Marie Thomas, It's a great fulfillment to be read

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