I just read the first 3 chapters. This is one of the best stories on here.
You write well. The dialogues sound very realistic.
I added your story to my library and I followed you.
Keep the chapters coming.
Roza Csergo, Thanks a lot for the feedback Roza !
I like to act out the scenes I write, that helps a lot x)
If you wanna talk more about the book, don't hesitate to mail me ;)
I'm adding them gradually, one or two each week.
I got delayed because of my finals so I'll make up for it by putting a few chapters together in one week.
Sorry if that was unclear...
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Ted Charlton 04.08.2019, 19:31:51
Lana ia a good name
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Roza Csergo 06.07.2019, 11:24:48
I just read the first 3 chapters. This is one of the best stories on here.
You write well. The dialogues sound very realistic.
I added your story to my library and I followed you.
Keep the chapters coming.
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Leev 06.07.2019, 19:01:51
Roza Csergo, Thanks a lot for the feedback Roza !
I like to act out the scenes I write, that helps a lot x)
If you wanna talk more about the book, don't hesitate to mail me ;)
John Mitchell 26.06.2019, 20:13:50
when can I read it complete?
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Leev 30.06.2019, 18:01:24
John Mitchell, Thanks for the love
Clayton Terrel 24.06.2019, 15:03:14
weren´t you supposed to add the first 10 chapters?
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Leev 26.06.2019, 23:58:11
I'm adding them gradually, one or two each week.
I got delayed because of my finals so I'll make up for it by putting a few chapters together in one week.
Sorry if that was unclear...
Cathy Evans 02.06.2019, 13:32:13
waiting for the next 10 chapters
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Cathy Evans 23.06.2019, 14:40:29
Leev, why not