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I will love u till my last breath

Jarvic

Story about:romance, billionaires love and revenge, misunderstanding and heartbreak

Rating:
35
106 25 1699

Ranking:
#5 in Crime fiction
#265 in Billionaires


Ongoing: 20 Apr 60 pages

Publication: 27.02.2021 — ...


Description of book "I will love u till my last breath "

I have never thought I would go through this in my life .
I have been crying since the last night , now my tears are all dried from my eyes or you can say tired of coming out of my eyes .
This is the second time in my life I have been crying like a mad person.
Till now I only cried for 2 person and both of them have changed my life, my life is currently enjoying a roller coaster ride.
"Ok so enough of crying now" I told myself and stand from bathroom floor ,wash my face _______
Now let's see what turn her life take will she leave it and love him one sided till her last breath?
Or
She will do something about it ?
For finding out read the book
' I love u till my last breath '
And ya remember don't go deep with the title.….........

Comments on book:

Total number of threads: 11

Miss J 08.04.2021, 14:57:24

Second chapter is really good. Kudos.
Please watch out for spelling, punctuation and tenses.

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Jarvic 08.04.2021, 16:25:40

Miss J, thanks for your precious comment

Miss J 08.04.2021, 14:43:51

Hey dear, I read your first chapter and it is really great. Good storyline and interesting plot.

I have a few observations to make.
I urge you to check your punctuations as you type, so that readers can properly understand your break in sentences.
Also, check the use of present and past tenses and find a balance between them.

In all it is a great story you got going. I love it.

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Miss J 08.04.2021, 16:08:31

Jarvic, U welcome. Just work on it dear.

Jarvic 08.04.2021, 13:00:36

hey readers there will be some delay in update because my grandfather have expired today so ....

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Miss J 08.04.2021, 14:24:23

Jarvic, My condolences dear. May his soul rest in peace.

Miss J 08.04.2021, 09:58:39

The description got me good and hooked. I have added it to my library and will read it in my free time. Keep it up girl.

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Jarvic 08.04.2021, 12:49:23

Miss J, thankyou so much .

A S 06.04.2021, 18:08:31

Hello, I read your story. It's so good. I added you on my list. Will you please do the same for me? and a like and comment? your story is too good. It didn’t seen to me that It's your first one.

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Jarvic 06.04.2021, 19:42:01

Jarvic, thankyou for your appreciation

G A Rosell 05.04.2021, 12:43:43

Hello, I love your story. I have added you to my list of authors to follow, can you do the same for me? So we can build a community of writers and we can follow each other in our literary career.
I read your story can you read mine as return? Thank U.
I hope to read more of your story.

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Jarvic 05.04.2021, 20:06:39

G A Rosell, and if you loved my story then give it a start and I hope I will see you in more comments .
Thankyou

Nishanka Nk 04.04.2021, 04:03:19

This story is lovely and fun to read author...I hope you don't freeze it

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Jarvic 04.04.2021, 07:14:22

Nishanka Nk, I don't want to but then sometimes it crosses my mind that if your story is not appreciated by your readers then there is no point of continuing the story ,maybe your readers are not liking it.

well I m not freezing it I just share my thought with you all.
thankyou for your precious comment

Hirdesh Parashar 21.03.2021, 20:28:17

Keep going, keep shine ❤❤❤❤

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Jarvic 21.03.2021, 20:33:53

Hirdesh Parashar, thankyou

Hirdesh Parashar 21.03.2021, 20:27:38

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Nishanka Nk 17.03.2021, 21:28:56

why is she dening his confession? Am doubtful maybe David is playing mind games...

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Nishanka Nk 18.03.2021, 01:48:13

Jarvic, Good luck then author

Nishanka Nk 17.03.2021, 21:27:24

Hiii author... This is an interesting one

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Jarvic 17.03.2021, 21:37:28

Nishanka Nk, thankyou

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