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Log inDear writer, there are lots of problems with your punctuation.
You should know good writing entails quite a lot of things and one of them include good punctuation.
The story is has a good look and I know good punctuation will give it a better look.
Also, always try to tell us whose POV you are writing from.
Woah! Big paragraph at the end of the chapter called "I love play rehersal".
why don't you update more frequently?
oh thats because i usually work on chapters for about a week but then i go to school 24/7 im sorry ill try harder.
be yourself, that's the most important thing
I need more
Like the story. Please continue writting and more updates.
Updates. Please
waiting for more chapters
can you publish more?
hey! i need someone to dm me on instagram so i can start with the 3rd update!!
Thanks for a new update, but can you update with more pages?
hope to read a continuation
Grace, thanks for the feedback! please DM me on instagram for suggestions, my account is called beamxller1999
enjoyable
Linsey Smith, thanks for the feedback! please DM me on instagram for suggestions, my account is called beamxller1999
Guys befire yalk ask its supposed to be bumping
Tiffany Kole, hey! i just published a new chapter
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