Description of book "More Beautiful Than U Think"
Brynn Parker. Head Cheerleader. HBIC (head bitch in charge). Classic mean girl. Queen Bee at Northside High. Rich Bitch
Brooks Anderson. Gang Member. Transferee from Jones High. Born on the wrong side of the tracks. Classic Bad Boy with a heart of gold.
At Northside High School, two acquaintancesface each other each day. Worse when Brooks Anderson Transfers. Its going to be a loong year for them. Ugh.
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Tina John 29.11.2019, 11:01:52
Dear writer, there are lots of problems with your punctuation.
You should know good writing entails quite a lot of things and one of them include good punctuation.
The story is has a good look and I know good punctuation will give it a better look.
Also, always try to tell us whose POV you are writing from.
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storm coulson 21.11.2019, 05:00:07
Woah! Big paragraph at the end of the chapter called "I love play rehersal".
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Kat Moon 26.10.2019, 20:34:20
why don't you update more frequently?
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Deniella Atlas 31.10.2019, 17:00:01
oh thats because i usually work on chapters for about a week but then i go to school 24/7 im sorry ill try harder.
Monica Spener 28.10.2019, 22:21:52
be yourself, that's the most important thing
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Good girl 27.10.2019, 19:36:13
I need more
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Laisa Tikomaimaleya 22.10.2019, 21:19:37
Like the story. Please continue writting and more updates.
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Laisa Tikomaimaleya 17.10.2019, 14:01:09
Updates. Please
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True Match 14.04.2019, 14:19:36
waiting for more chapters
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Kerry Ward 06.04.2019, 15:40:33
can you publish more?
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Deniella Atlas 06.04.2019, 15:08:11
hey! i need someone to dm me on instagram so i can start with the 3rd update!!
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Catsoline Grace 05.04.2019, 18:49:05
Thanks for a new update, but can you update with more pages?
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Grace 24.03.2019, 17:28:25
hope to read a continuation
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Deniella Atlas 05.04.2019, 07:47:26
Grace, thanks for the feedback! please DM me on instagram for suggestions, my account is called beamxller1999
Linsey Smith 26.03.2019, 12:55:06
enjoyable
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Deniella Atlas 05.04.2019, 07:47:13
Linsey Smith, thanks for the feedback! please DM me on instagram for suggestions, my account is called beamxller1999
Deniella Atlas 22.03.2019, 15:06:49
Guys befire yalk ask its supposed to be bumping
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Deniella Atlas 05.04.2019, 07:34:52
Tiffany Kole, hey! i just published a new chapter