Book. "My Lovely New Project (re uploaded)" read online
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#12 in Humor
#30 in Inspiration romance


Ongoing: 09 Jul 388 pages

Publication: 20.08.2020 — ...


Description of book "My Lovely New Project (re uploaded)"

Alana is independent and daring. Her life has not been easy, she is a woman who knows what she wants and does not hesitate to go find it or at least try it. Realistic to the bone, does not believe in princes or fairy tales, hates that men see the female sex as fragile and defenseless

Brian, a spectacular, handsome, and vain blond. Billionaire, successful architect, tireless, competitive, and with great social skills. The enchanted prince that many ladies long for, although he is ashamed of his past. He is in search of changes: in his affections, in his habits, and even in his dreams

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Suhail rizvi
19.05.2021, 01:33:46

hi! are u going to update the book dear author?

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Suhail rizvi
24.05.2021, 05:19:03

MarilynF, but i am not getting any updates!!!

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Lisa Sodias
28.03.2021, 00:46:39

Please, when will you release the sequel for my lovely new project????

MarilynF
15.05.2021, 13:48:08

Lisa Sodias, Hello. The next book will tell the story of the unfriendly and classist Jazmin Smith. Very soon we will be uploading chapters. Happy day and thanks for the support.

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Nancy Bagot
25.02.2021, 04:53:25

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?❤️❤️???❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ wow this is really wow, lovely, amazing book that captured me. I did not stop reading it until Im done. Thanks you so much author. You really one of amazing writer. Thanks for keeping it free. This book really put me in so many emotion.. Good for more good book. You really have imagination that put into wow story. Thanks again and be safe.

MarilynF
25.02.2021, 18:43:14

Nancy Bagot, Hi friend. Wow! Thanks for your comment, you don't know how good it made me feel, especially in this month of February, which has been quite complicated on a personal level. Thank you for the support and inspiration to continue. Happy day!

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Nyssa Quadros
06.02.2021, 07:25:24

Hi Marilyn,

Thanks for introducing me to your book! I really loved the way you are carrying the story along. The flow, the suspense and the details are on point...The dialogues also seem quite natural. Besides this, the story line itself seems to be quite busy and rife with mystery and intrigue so kudos to you on that!

Without getting into the details of your writing style which seems quite good ( also because I have little experience in writing in first person particularly), one place I think you could improve would be the grammar (or the typos?). While typos are unavoidable (especially when you are both the author and the editor) I think a second eye to proof read could definitely help ...

That being said, please do check out my book if you get the chance. I would love to hear your thoughts if that's not too much trouble. Either way, all the very best! Would love to read more from you..


MarilynF
25.02.2021, 18:43:46

Nyssa Quadros, Hi friend. Thank you for your review and for taking the time to read my story. Due to personal problems, I have been absent most of the month, but soon I will dedicate myself to reading your story and giving you my opinion. You are very right with the grammar part, as English is not my native language I have had some complications that I hope to solve very soon and be able to offer all my readers quality work. A big hug and have a happy day.

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Nishanka Nk
02.02.2021, 08:49:34

hey author this story is going amazing

MarilynF
03.02.2021, 11:36:48

Nishanka Nk, Welcome Friend and thanks for the support.

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
24.01.2021, 09:29:42

my gosh, what did the writer mean when brian started to think "if only i met her a couple of years ago?" did it mean that brian was just putting on a facade that he has changed from being a player but is sliding back to his old ways? what about his declaration of his feelings for alana? were they just fake?

MarilynF
26.01.2021, 10:55:06

Milagros Hernandez-Lee, Brian hates his old life, so he changed his entire environment by moving to another place. That was only a "spicy" comment from the mischievous author LOL.
Something like when Alana "rates" the men she meets. For example, Frederick and the "gentle" man from the bar.

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
23.01.2021, 23:59:15

i understand why brian adopted or tried to adopt santi. but from my experience the court does not allow a single person to adopt a child on the premise that the single person won't be able to give the child the love, care and support a couple could give. there would be a sort of balance. from what i can conclude, brian only adopted santi because he pitied him. besides, if he was single, could brian be assured that if he falls in love with a woman, would this woman want to have a ready-made child? not everyone wants to have a child out of his/her own flesh and blood. it seems to be very idealistic.

MarilynF
26.01.2021, 10:51:21

Milagros Hernandez-Lee, Indeed, single people can adopt, but they must meet many requirements (more than being a couple). Which is why Brian complained about "so many endless interviews and questionnaires." At first, it was about humanity, but over time the parental bond between them was created.

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
24.01.2021, 20:40:11

i find the story very interesting, full of suspense, and also amusing. for one, it's only here in thie story where the writer described the main male character, brian, through the main female character, alana, as blondie instead of his name or any kind of endearment which a reader usually finds in stories or alana, being referred to by brian as whirlwind, instead of honey or sweatheart.
the writer was able to bring about suspense too, especially in that scene where santiago suddenly calls alana for help and the heart-stopping race to santi's house. the writer was able to depict clearly the character of alana who was never at a loss for rebut anyone who dared to look down on her or defy her, except when violett humiliated her, she was at a loss for words to defy her.
i like the way the writer wrote about the 2 gays, daniel and stephano, the way they came up with plans like bring alana to the bar, and later telling brian what to do since brian seemed not to know anything, to bring alana and brian together in their funny, ridiculous "gay ways. hence, the writer was able to bring out that the third sex should be accepted by society and not ostracized.
the writer should continue writing some more stories which will tickle the imagination of her readers and come up with themes that will point out some realities of life. however, the writer should pay more attention to grammatical errors, sometimes coming up with vague and confusing sentences, which can easily be improved if accompanied with hard work and a passionate desire to produce good and extraordinary stories. i eagerly anticipate some more stories from this writer. good luck!

MarilynF
26.01.2021, 10:36:29

Milagros Hernandez-Lee, Good day, friend.
Grateful for your review and dedication to my story.
I think I was also a bit on hold waiting for your next opinion LOL.
In one of the comments, you asked if there was a previous book ... Well yes, it is a series called APPEARANCES where Book No. 1 "Bar Mont'blank" tells the story of Carlos and Sara.
Book No. 2 "He loves me but She needs me," tells the story of Parker and Alice, Alana's sister ... and of course this is Book No. 3 "My Lovely New Project", where I mix the co-protagonists of the two previous books.
You're right about the spelling mistakes, it's something I'm working hard on since my native language is Spanish, but I'll be uploading the corrected story soon.
I always try to include real issues of our society in my stories to (somehow) try to create awareness of it in each of my readers.
Thank you very much again. Happy day!

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
24.01.2021, 11:30:22

the writer was very successful in creating the suspenseful situation which started when alana received a call for help from santi. the panic felt by alana when she heard santi describing what was happening, her rushing to the meeting room to call for brian and the tense moment when they were going through the traffic, alana screaming that they allow them to pass..... all these can really make the reader sit on the edge of the chair anticipating that nothing bad will happen to santi but at the same time admitting that something bad may happen to him. the writer came up with the right words to use.

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
24.01.2021, 10:49:26

i find it very amusing that the writer described stephano as being very sincered and too eager to help alana sort of take revenge on brian, i just am afraid that what he told alana about his face will soon happen in the next chapter.

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
24.01.2021, 10:00:39

i just can't wait to read the next chapters. i can't bear the suspense the writer has created. will alana decide to leave brian? in the first chapter, she was described as being resolute in not going into a relationship because she was truly hurt with her relationship with daniel.

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
24.01.2021, 09:44:58

alana's situation was so heartbreaking. the writer had described her in situations wherein she can respond quickly, just like when brian's sister was berating her and looking down on her. but how come, she couldn't come up with the right words to clear the situation?

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
24.01.2021, 09:39:21

if brian truly loved alana, why did he not give her a chance to clarify what happened. she even followed him back to his house to clarify. then why was he so judgemental about a single incident while alana didn't even bring out the fact about his being with so many women before. and that was one of the reasons why the judge did not let him get custody of santi. if i were alana, i can just walk out of his life. he's not worth it.

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
24.01.2021, 08:27:43

the writer described what i was also thinking - that mrs. aimer had evil plans regarding the house and perhaps even the car for santi. even if brian was rich, couldn't he just have rented a house and provided one of his own cars with a driver so mrs. aimer couldn't do anything with it, by selling it, getting the money and even taking santi with her, away from the city? i feel like brian, clouded by his love for santi wasn't thinking right.

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
24.01.2021, 08:27:43

the writer described what i was also thinking - that mrs. aimer had evil plans regarding the house and perhaps even the car for santi. even if brian was rich, couldn't he just have rented a house and provided one of his own cars with a driver so mrs. aimer couldn't do anything with it, by selling it, getting the money and even taking santi with her, away from the city? i feel like brian, clouded by his love for santi wasn't thinking right.

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
24.01.2021, 08:27:43

the writer described what i was also thinking - that mrs. aimer had evil plans regarding the house and perhaps even the car for santi. even if brian was rich, couldn't he just have rented a house and provided one of his own cars with a driver so mrs. aimer couldn't do anything with it, by selling it, getting the money and even taking santi with her, away from the city? i feel like brian, clouded by his love for santi wasn't thinking right.

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
24.01.2021, 08:06:18

the writer's description of brian showed that he wasn't thinking straight. couldn't he sense that mrs. aimer was trying to squeeze him of his money on the pretext that she doesn't have the same amount of money to provide santi what he provided before? brian was so involved in santi's welfare and well being that he couldn't see through the trap mrs. aimer laid out for him, probably with her lawyer. couldn't the writer just depict brian as following what the judge ordered to see how mrs. aimer can take care of santi on her own. wasn't the reason why she suddenly claimed santi after 4 yrs was because she knew that brian would continue to provide santi well so she also gets such treatment?

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
24.01.2021, 07:26:41

the writer was able to describe vividly the dialogue and thoughts that went on in the courtroom, it made me feel in the same way that brian felt, wanting to charge the lawyer for pointing out the past life of brian. i guess, that fact pointed out also made brian regret having lived a carefree life. the judge described here seemed to have had a bitter past with a man who may have hurt her or she is biased about guys who are players.

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
23.01.2021, 22:14:36

i'm confused by your last paragraph. you were referring to renata and brian as being acquainted in the past. was there another story before this

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
23.01.2021, 21:57:45

i guess my previous comment in the previous chapter was answered here, about sara.

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
23.01.2021, 21:46:46

since you described jazmin as mentioning sara, whom she looked down upon because she was poor and not belonging to their class, it makes me curious about how brian broke away from her?

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
23.01.2021, 21:13:47

and i thought, here was finally a story where the main male actor was described as NOT being a player, changing women as fast as he changes his clothes. i have read so many stories in several sites and as always, disappointed that the main male character was always described as such. i really hoped that this time, the writer has written something different from "normal" oh well....

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
23.01.2021, 19:54:45

i like the way you described how alana tried to release her frustration with everything that happened to her life so far. you were able to point out subtly that brian must have felt relief after learning from alana, while she was drunk, that she discovered her ex to be gay and played with her emotions to discover who he really is. i'm just eager to read the future chapters to know how the plot develops.

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
23.01.2021, 18:58:22

as to what you mentioned, being bz it's just a matter of time management. i also had similar problems before.
what was wrong with alana? why was you describe her feeling as if the floor was shaking?

MarilynF
23.01.2021, 17:04:56

Milagros Hernandez-Lee, Due to her recklessness she is terribly dizzy, so she feels that the floor is shaking

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
23.01.2021, 18:27:20

now it was alana's cellphone that kept ringing and brian immediately shows annoyance or disgust by rushing santin into the elevator. didn't he realize that the ringing of his cellphone the whole afternoon also was annoying and disturbing alana at worK? double standard.

MarilynF
23.01.2021, 16:57:26

Milagros Hernandez-Lee, That's the problem with these lovebirds, they don't realize how entangled they are ... LOL

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
23.01.2021, 18:23:40

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23.01.2021, 18:23:38

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
23.01.2021, 18:23:37

started to sit on the edge of my chair after you revealed the mysterious caller - nina who was repeatedly disturbing alana who was trying to focus on her work. i also am curious about her identity, who was nina?

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
23.01.2021, 17:56:19

i find this thought wave of brian, "apparently my appetite had been on vacation for several days, and apparently, it had no expected return date" very amusing.

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
23.01.2021, 07:41:01

well, for one thing, the writer was able to describe realistically the feelings and what is going on in alana's mind. she is described as a woman who is not afraid to speak out her mind but at the same time jumps to conclusion and overthinks. as to brian, what he thinks is only pictured in santiago's innocent and childlike questions, very mature though, not like what is expected of a young child.

Milagros Hernandez-Lee
23.01.2021, 15:01:14

MarilynF, good luck to your entry,
is it completed? have you posted it? can i read it?

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Milagros Hernandez-Lee
23.01.2021, 16:50:14

i like the way you created the tension between alana and brian and the daughter of the company's partner. why did brian seem to be so tense in making alana stay in her seat all the time while the daughter was there?

MarilynF
23.01.2021, 14:57:36

Milagros Hernandez-Lee, LOL, I will not deny that I had a lot of fun with this novel, especially since it came from two previous ones that had a certain load of drama ... but now comes a new series that deals with strong themes ... and some violence, although it's not my favorite subject but ...

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Scarlet Rojo
17.01.2021, 22:11:31

Excellent final chapter. I congratulate u.
Your story has a lot of funny scenes and I love how you use irony. I love Brian's character just as I liked Carlos in the other novel.

MarilynF
18.01.2021, 21:34:12

Scarlet Rojo, Thankful for your support. Happy Day!

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Mavis Yeboah
16.01.2021, 20:37:48

Nice book well done keep it up.

MarilynF
16.01.2021, 19:18:57

Mavis Yeboah, Thanks a lot. Happy afternoon.

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MarilynF
16.01.2021, 17:49:30

I'll take a little time to fine-tune the details of my new stories and 'mostly' to correct the spelling and grammar errors in my current stories ... well, you've probably already realized that English is not my mother tongue. LOL ... but we will have news very soon, meanwhile follow my profile:
https://booknet.com/en/marilynf-u2807499

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Gloria Negosa
16.01.2021, 12:32:00

Lovely and exciting esp. D twist...it so inspiring how you use satire words to impress n challenge my imagination..i just happy to read more ur stories. Congratulations.!!! Impressive..love happyyy ending. More starsss.

MarilynF
16.01.2021, 15:48:55

Gloria Negosa, Thankful for your support. Irony and sarcasm are part of my daily life, that's why I love to spice up the scenes a bit LOL.

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Marilyn Calderon
16.01.2021, 10:53:48

thank you

MarilynF
16.01.2021, 15:48:31

Marilyn Calderon, Thanks to you for reading my stories and supporting me.

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Leslie Villablanca Herrera
16.01.2021, 03:49:22

thanks to another wonderful and a happpy ending love story

MarilynF
16.01.2021, 15:48:23

Leslie Villablanca Herrera, Thanks to you for reading my stories and supporting me.

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Mavis Yeboah
08.01.2021, 17:32:07

Oh Brian sorry

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Mavis Yeboah
04.01.2021, 19:23:08

Oh no, I cant wait for update

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Leslie Villablanca Herrera
04.01.2021, 08:39:56

happy new year,welcoming new year,nrw beginning and new you

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Mavis Yeboah
04.01.2021, 08:32:09

Happy new year to you too

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Mavis Yeboah
31.12.2020, 12:29:56

Happy new year to you too

MarilynF
31.12.2020, 10:53:46

Mavis Yeboah, Thank you very much Mavis. Have a great time next to your loved ones.

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Mavis Yeboah
31.12.2020, 00:24:32

Same to you

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Mavis Yeboah
27.12.2020, 23:20:47

This book is getting interesting

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MarilynF
26.12.2020, 16:52:25

My beloved readers, the end of the contest is near: My love, My billionaire ... And I know I am a rookie competing against pure "heavyweights" ... pure "Olympic medalists" ... but dreaming is free LOL.
Those who want to support me can do so through their likes or by sharing the story with their friends ... or on their social networks. Thank you very much in advance.

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Mavis Yeboah
26.12.2020, 15:37:56

This relationship is something.

MarilynF
26.12.2020, 14:45:00

Mavis Yeboah, They are definitely ... not normal. LOL

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Violy Villafuerte Chan
26.12.2020, 06:27:22

I love your books

MarilynF
26.12.2020, 14:43:54

Violy Villafuerte Chan, And I love writing it for all my readers. Thank you very much for your support!

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MarilynF
24.12.2020, 06:46:24

Merry Christmas to all my dear readers. 2020 has been a very difficult year, but as I always say ... you have to try to see the positive side even at the atomic bomb ... So to raise those spirits and have a happy family time. A hug!

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Mavis Yeboah
21.12.2020, 16:25:51

Oh today the story is short

MarilynF
23.12.2020, 22:28:47

Mavis Yeboah, We are already approaching the final chapter

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Mavis Yeboah
20.12.2020, 17:38:50

That woman is troublesome

MarilynF
23.12.2020, 22:27:14

Mavis Yeboah, Too Much!! I'm sorry I haven't been active these last two days ... you know, putting the final touches to receive Christmas ... humbly, but thank God in family.

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