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Between 16 and 60

Ashleh Queen

Story about:teenagers, youngadult, brokenheart

Rating:
80
600 56 9607

Ranking:
#49 in Romantic suspense
#9 in Short stories


Complete 21 pages

Publication: 10.08.2019 — 10.08.2019


Description of book "Between 16 and 60"

She was right at that place where she was then. In the very same highlighter orange overall having the company's monogram and distributing flyers... maybe. I don't know because I was at some distance. But it was easy to recognize her. She still looked beautiful. Face huh? She was always nothing but a face. And I can see her interest in makeup was still young as she had her makeup on. I couldn't recall her name but I remember the incident. It was the same place where I broke her heart. Somebody needed to show her the reality. It was sad that it has to be me. Everything was same. But the building was more upgraded now and the road was wide. But I remember it was raining that day. But today it was bright.

This story is dedicated to every person who ever had their hearts broken.

Comments on book:

Total number of threads: 25

Annie Lee 01.09.2020, 05:49:42

I really love this story, it's amazing. I enjoyed the plot twist.

Mansi Jain 26.08.2020, 05:02:32

Beautiful story!!! You never fail to amaza me...

Jathryn Samuel (LostpuppyJS) 23.08.2020, 18:51:27

1000/100... superb! OMG! How can you write so amazing!

Madiha Yusuf 07.08.2020, 14:46:53

is this gonna continue??

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Ashleh Queen 07.08.2020, 15:07:28

Madiha Yusuf, No, it was a short story and it is complete.

bs shruthi 25.07.2020, 10:17:18

Don't regret in life. Just wait for god's plan. He has planned something more beautiful for all of us.
Loved the story and I know what it feels to be left

IxoraRosada 16.07.2020, 16:23:57

Hey, I would appreciate your feedback on a short love story I just posted on here. I am a new author, and I am just trying to improve my work. It's a fated love story with some steamy passion. It's complete.so feel free to check it out and leave your feedback.

David Suprize 03.02.2020, 07:28:52

Thank you

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Ashleh Queen 13.07.2020, 22:38:23

David Suprize, You are welcome,

Punita Punita 26.06.2020, 21:36:25

Wow. No words to describe the story. Sorry but I m very emotional and speechless at this time.

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Ashleh Queen 13.07.2020, 22:33:40

Punita Punita, Thank you so much, Punita, I will be giving out more stories like that,

Waghu mashu 27.06.2020, 13:14:44

amazing :)

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Ashleh Queen 13.07.2020, 22:31:16

Waghu mashu, Thank you,

vandana gupta 13.07.2020, 22:20:54

how do you manage to make someone as tough as me cry without fail? be it shattered, contract marraige, needs or this one. Brilliant writing again!!

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Ashleh Queen 13.07.2020, 22:31:04

vandana gupta, Thank you so much, Vandana. I hope it was entertaining enough.

Averyn Dev 31.05.2020, 18:03:36

Short and sweet heart touching story. love it

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Ashleh Queen 01.06.2020, 00:35:30

Thank you so much

Geetha Sree Chinnagari 21.04.2020, 20:13:30

Is this the end...!!!!

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Ashleh Queen 21.04.2020, 20:14:07

Geetha Sree Chinnagari, Yup, It was a short story,

Beata Gos 30.03.2020, 15:26:44

Nice story, and, the turn of events, a lesson for those who are judgmental

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Beata Gos 31.03.2020, 09:54:23

De nada ma'm

Izzy 18.02.2020, 04:41:47

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Dorothy Godi 18.01.2020, 01:08:10

Ashley Queen, your stories are always entertaining, educative, romantic and above all lots of suspense, keep it up...
I'm actually gonna send u friend request on facebook and follow u as well.
Really love your books ❤

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Dorothy Godi 18.01.2020, 14:16:38

Ashleh Queen, welcome

ngozi akuma 20.12.2019, 08:00:08

Short but great. With an interesting moral lesson.

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Ashleh Queen 20.12.2019, 10:42:08

ngozi akuma, Thank you,

Samar Sam 21.10.2019, 22:50:38

its have a moral lesson as well.......anyways nice story ashleh

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Ashleh Queen 15.11.2019, 09:53:00

Samar Sam, Thank you, love.

Akua Tintin 15.11.2019, 09:18:15

Ashleh you a great writer.Thank you so much.I really enjoyed reading it.

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Ashleh Queen 15.11.2019, 09:50:16

Akua Tintin, Thank you so much, darling.

Mahnoor Khan 13.08.2019, 18:07:09

thats a lovely story. would you please read my first story ever too? i have added your story to my library and followed you

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Mahnoor Khan 30.08.2019, 22:41:36

Ashleh Queen, OMG THANK YOU SO MUCHHHH !! THATS MEANS ALOT.

ZARA 29.08.2019, 13:34:31

I would never have guessed the turn the story took afterwards. That was indeed a very beautiful story and lesson. People tend to look down upon others and criticize when they could actually do something instead which would help that person stand up again.

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Ashleh Queen 30.08.2019, 22:35:10

ZARA, I am so happy to find your comment here on my story. So, glad that you liked it.

Akins Ayomi 28.08.2019, 13:21:41

No one should be underestimated or written off in life, because a person is here today doesn't mean he can't be there. The only difference between here and there is 'T' which is time.

To the heart broken, you can love again, just forgive that person because if you don't, it can weigh you can. Forgive and move on. Don't take their rejection personal because if you do, you will be limiting yourself and it will cause fear and you will always be hurt.

Sorry the comment is much.

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Ashleh Queen 30.08.2019, 22:34:39

Akins Ayomi, Wow! You really get all the hidden meanings I was trying to convey. No worries, I live for the long comments.

Goodness Shadrach 15.08.2019, 10:06:58

wow this is interesting Ashleh, thumps up. I love it

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Ashleh Queen 30.08.2019, 22:33:01

Goodness, Thank you so much.

AmandaDaroga d 12.08.2019, 19:22:59

Ashleh - You have not completed " Contract Marriage " and " Shattered " , but you you have 21 pages book "NEWLY" completed???? Does it makes sense to follow you or keep checking to see if you may complete these two outstanding books??? This is unethical of a book writer or short store writer.

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Ashleh Queen 30.08.2019, 22:24:45

Veraldine Dike, Hey, I update on many sites like Wattpad, Inkitt and Webnovels and many others but I always update on Litnet first. So, its better that you check this site first. And I am sorry for replying you so late. But I just updated shattered a few minutes ago. I hope you will like it.

cherry kisses 13.08.2019, 22:09:59

people tend to forget that these writers have a life outside of this. I don't mind waiting for your stories because they are really good. take your time just don't leave us hanging.. to me the more the merrier. ppl need to relax

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Ashleh Queen 13.08.2019, 22:16:12

cherry kisses, Its totally fine. Actually there are many authors who start writing stories but after that leaves it unfinished. So, readers being anxious and a little on the edge is pretty normal. You have no idea how much I have messaged to people who left there work like two or three years ago. I have only started writing less than a year ago and I still have to earn the trust that I will finish my work.
But thank you so much for being understanding. Your support means a world to me. Stay blessed and have a great day ahead.

Dora Kellner 11.08.2019, 14:18:49

I'm touched, you always make fabulous stories

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Ashleh Queen 11.08.2019, 15:43:23

Dora Kellner, Thank you so much.

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