Description of book "Broken?"
“Why?”, I grabbed his photo frame and stopped in between looking at his smiling face and holding me in his arms.
I hugged it and fell on the floor asking none, “Why can’t I be his bride?”
“How does it fair with me that you chose a random girl over me?”, I asked his photograph begging for an explanation, “How does it fair that I mean nothing to you and all the rituals which you were supposed to do with me will be doing with someone else?
“I deserve that wedding lehenga which they bought for your wife.”, I cried and hugged his picture close to my heart hiding my face on my knees.
“I deserve you.”, I murmured.
“I deserve your surname to be mine.”, I told his picture and asked wiping my tears, “How does it possible that afer giving my nine years into a relationship, I am nothing to you."
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Log init was awesome book
Tammy Heccker, Thank you, Tammy.
wow that's great
mmasinachi MMADUNEME, Thank you :)
Wow....it couldn't have been more better ❤️
Strange Hooman, Thank you :)
We never saw them intimate .....we want a bonus chapter.
Strange Hooman, Sure dear :)
Yay!!
Strange Hooman, Finally, it's happening.
atleast now go and tell your parents about geet zain
Strange Hooman, Yeah, at least now tell them :)
What a turn of event, but still, I wish the break up came from Zain, now its gonna look like he’s now free to get back with Geet because his fiancee stood him up. I was waiting for the time when he is going to man up and tell his parents about him and Geet, but Sanjeeda had more guts than him. Women, really are incredible, they go for what they really want... inspiring I may say!
Magdalena Mendoza, I totally agree with you. As I said in the story women always know what they want. Let's see what happens now. Fingers crossed.
feel happy to read that geet block zain.... it's very needed to give him a reality check....
Akash Hosen Akash, Right, let's hope things go as planned and they will be united in the end.
now Zain is thinking like human
mmasinachi MMADUNEME, Yeah, he needed a reality check.
Zain you idiot ..wud. You let her go so easily at last...if yor can't think of anything just let sanjeeda know , she might help you.
Lovely Mishra, Yes, Sanjeeda could be a help but they are stupid and especially Zain. I wish someone give him brain to think.
Now l don't know wwhere this is going..
Lovely Mishra, It's the way to their destination. Hope so we will bid a good bye with a happy ending to Geet and Zain.
then she should accept the proposal of adwait to show Zain how he humiliated her feeling
Lakshmi Suri, Let's wait, what Geet has in her mind.
this is so wrong..they both are doing wrong with sanjeeda...morals and values should be considered
Satyadev, Thank you, I will try best to keep it as good as possible.
Awesome update.
Mini Gopakumar, Thank you, dear.
I think zain keep geet as mistress the way she love him she will accept that
Lakshmi Suri, I am not going to deny the fact that it does seems like that. But looking at the circumstances and what Geet is going through, she knows the pain of getting betrayed by your loved ones, so I don't think she will ever want to be the reason for someone's broken relationship.
so sad for geet!
Tammy Heccker, Yeah, right. But who knows something good is waiting for them behind everything. Fingers crossed
Dear author , when will you update next chapter?
Geeta Kagra, But you didn't update till now... please update quickly....the story is really very nice.
finally his pov... thanks for the update
Jyothi Chinnabathuni, Welcome dear
I want zain come back to her life but not before he can suffer equal just like geet suffer.... in a relationship partner should respect each other....ples update next chapter soon author I know ur busy with ur work load it's just a request...
Akash Hosen Akash, I am trying to update is ASAP.
Is there HEA FOR THEM TOGETHER author? Cause l cannot continue to read the story if there's not.... l 'm just too much attached to these
two that l can't see them separating...it hurts... I know it wud be practical if geet moves on with someone but we read stories to escape real world....here Zain has truly won my heart today by that promise ,but l never want that to be fullfilled honestly.....btw l said what l felt , really nothing against the story if it sounded like that.
Lovely Mishra, I can understand your concern. But when I started this book I had free and now suddenly my work load has increased drastically. Still, I am trying to give it regular update as I want to end this book by December end.
Dear Author, this chapter is awesome, you are awesome!!
Magdalena Mendoza, Thank you :)
how can zain be so selfish... in one go he want that promise just like that...doesn't he feel anything the love feet show him..... so much upsetting chapter.... please author give us update regularly...
Akash Hosen Akash, Thank you, Akash.
l wonder if they'll actually get married O_o
Lovely Mishra, Let's cross finger for them and upcoming episodes :)
wow prophecy...no suspence.. they will get married
Satyadev, Fingers crossed :)
by the way i like ur story.. its dufferent... whatever ever u decide its ur wish i wont quit reading.. i like it
Satyadev, Thank you: )
he doesnt value her and if he respects her he would have convinced her to move on...he is raking advantage of her.,. wish someone who helps.her to move on... shr is loosing het selfrepect by pinning on.him
Satyadev, Somehow, I believe you are right. But right now we are reading from Geet's point of view and for her Zain is her world. Let's wait to know Zain's part as well.
I also don’t agree having a new male lead, after all, this is mainly between Zain and Geet, i believe that, eventually they’ll end up together. Just a matter on how our dear author is going to spin the story to keep us wondering how they gonna make it. I like your story author, it shows that a wonan can also put up a fight for her man in a most subtle way and thats why i adore Geet.
Magdalena Mendoza, Thank you so much.
pls pls new male lead
Geeta Kagra, please don't Author, the story is going in its best way ....one of the best plots l have ever seen...I don't find there any reason to change Zain. Besides it wud really be bad for readers like me who have rooted Zain and Geet. And believe me You can find such readers everywhere ,like in every book , they'll always ask for new ML. This has became a new trend on booknet , please don't disturb the story plot due to them cause Zain is not even sadistic or evil
wow ,In love with these two.
Okay! ....I get that what was the surprise.
Geeta Kagra, ok...that was direct insult...lol
Small update T_T.....After such a long time
Lovely Mishra, Don't worry. I will update tomorrow with a surprise: )
wonderful update
Lovely Mishra, Glad you liked it.
Just wow ! Wonderful. You never fail to amaze me author.
Lovely Mishra, Thanks dear :)
wow ...just wonderful.Nicely done author.
Geeta Kagra, Arre! Anything for untill you keep gifting us such beautiful Updates
lot's of love to zain and Geet
:))
Author you update so late these days that I'm literally loosing interest .Though this book has a very different concept making it intergruing and one of a kind but late updates ruin the fun. I used to love the book so much .Plzz try to update frequently.
Lovely Mishra, I am working on it. I will update it today.
i really love Geet and zain
Radhika Radhika, Thank you :)
wow ....nice update author
Lovely Mishra, Thanx :)
no update today also?
Lovely Mishra, Tomorrow for sure.
I feel so bad for Geet, couldn't stop crying. this book reminded me of movie ijazat
Renuka Kisan Kusalkar, Thank you :)
Thank you ma'am...iam eagerly waiting for the next episode
Radhika Radhika, Welcome :)
ma'am baki ki story kab aygi?
Radhika Radhika, Hope so by today or tomorrow, I will update.
what a complicated relations author I really want new male lead Zain is confused.his love is not strong....make him suffer.....she deserves better a lot better
Lovely Mishra, I will try to update tomorrow but I am not sure about it. TBH writing an emotional story takes a toll on me and I feel everything what I write so I want to take my time making it as good as possible.
i feel bad for Geet...
Radhika Radhika, Me too :)
Author whether Zain the male lead or u will introduce new character as male lead Author?
Ahsi Abi, mine too.
okok Author Thank u so much for u r reply Author
Ahsi Abi, Welcome :)
Author I have a doubt Zayn is the male lead or u will someone as male lead Author?
Ahsi Abi, I am not getting it. Please clear.
plz clear my doubt Author?
wow ! Yes that's like my Geet .Make him understand how valuable are you? Just don't agree to everything that he says, have courage to speak where he's wrong . Thanks for this update author.
Lovely Mishra, :)
really Zain does not care about geet feeling .wish he suffer more and get a heartbreak in his life for what he did to geet and about geet pls make her strong after that and make sure that she will not roam around Zain she deserves better and i think adwait is amazing..best chapter and ya be a
Neha Khemka, Thank you :)
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