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Chrome 2968

Ryo Francis

Story about:comedy, time travel, superheroes

Rating:
26
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Ranking:
#134 in Science fiction
#789 in Young adult


Complete 63 pages

Publication: 17.08.2019 — 24.03.2021


Description of book "Chrome 2968"

Get ready for a wild ride in this crazy action-packed adventure with a team led by a kick@ss girl from the future, an idealistic teenage boy, and a debonair billionaire scientist as they battle evil forces on land, water, and in space to save Earth.

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Angel
04.03.2021, 12:19:20

when will the rest of the chapter be out pls

Ryo Francis
24.03.2021, 04:50:05

Angel, Very soon - thank u for reading
I'm doing my second edit of this story - my target is to finish everything within this month :)

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muhammed ameen
01.10.2020, 13:30:37

nice story

Ryo Francis
08.10.2020, 00:59:39

muhammed ameen, Thank u for reading. I still need to do some revision. Hoping u can stick to the end. :)

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Marilyn Lucero
10.04.2020, 07:10:14

Found your books at last! :-)

Ryo Francis
14.04.2020, 08:59:00

Marilyn Lucero, thanks :)

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Joel Divina
03.04.2020, 14:53:52

#4 in sci-fi.

following your next book ?

Ryo Francis
14.04.2020, 08:58:36

Joel Divina, thank u so much :)

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Izzy
17.02.2020, 15:42:43

interesting story

Ryo Francis
17.02.2020, 15:49:32

Izzy, thanks so much :)

even though my first story is marked complete — it still needs lots of editing, so i will be doing them very soon

hope u can stick around until the very end and its sequel

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Noa Clark
30.08.2019, 10:57:09

good story

Ryo Francis
05.02.2020, 05:32:53

Noa Clark, Thank u for reading my first book Chrome 2968.
Hope u can find some time to read my second book — Mystic the Gathering. This new story is a mystery / suspense thriller with a more serious / darker theme compared to my first story, which is more of a sci-fi action & fun adventure.
Hoping for your support. Thank u again :)

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Clayton Terrel
27.12.2019, 13:48:09

your story is good, your updates are slow

Ryo Francis
05.02.2020, 05:32:23

Clayton Terrel, Thank u for reading my first book Chrome 2968.
Hope u can find some more of your time to read my new book — Mystic the Gathering. This new story is a mystery / suspense thriller with a more serious / darker theme compared to my first story, which is more of a sci-fi action & fun adventure.
I appreciate your support so much. Thank u again :)

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Peter Bishop
18.01.2020, 00:53:06

that's a good story and I don't know why I haven't seen it before

Ryo Francis
05.02.2020, 05:30:05

Peter Bishop, Thank u for reading my first book Chrome 2968.
Hope u can find some time to read my second book — Mystic the Gathering. This new story is a mystery / suspense thriller with a more serious / darker theme compared to my first story, which is more of a sci-fi action & fun adventure.
I appreciate your support so much. Thank u again :)

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Shay Punzalan
07.02.2020, 03:19:22

Waiting for this to be a Movie.

Ryo Francis
07.02.2020, 01:49:34

Shay Punzalan, i wish = money money money

come on hollywood... universal... paramount... sony... anybody?

there's likable leads, unlikable villains and action sequences on land, water and space and quite a diverse characters... plus sequels... :)

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Andy Rose
12.01.2020, 03:43:06

great

Ryo Francis
05.02.2020, 05:31:49

Andy Rose, Thank u for reading my first book Chrome 2968.
Hope u can give some more of your time to read my new book — Mystic the Gathering. This new story is a mystery / suspense thriller with a more serious / darker theme compared to my first story, which is more of a sci-fi action & fun adventure.
Appreciate your support so much. Thank u again :)

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Angel Lederhouse
23.11.2019, 18:14:28

what happened that you didn't update for so long?

Ryo Francis
05.02.2020, 05:32:40

Angel Lederhouse, Thank u for reading my first book Chrome 2968.
Hope u can give some of your time to read my second book — Mystic the Gathering. This new story is a mystery / suspense thriller with a more serious / darker theme compared to my first story, which is more of a sci-fi action & fun adventure.
I appreciate your support so much. Thank u again :)

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Kim Miller
10.09.2019, 18:25:22

interesting kind of storytelling

Ryo Francis
05.02.2020, 05:33:13

Kim Miller, Thank u for reading my first book Chrome 2968.
Hope u can give some more of your time to read my new book — Mystic the Gathering. This new story is a mystery / suspense thriller with a more serious / darker theme compared to my first story, which is more of a sci-fi action & fun adventure.
I appreciate your support so much. Thank u again :)

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Ted Charlton
24.08.2019, 20:00:40

and what about the cover?

Ryo Francis
05.02.2020, 05:33:44

Ted Charlton, Thank u for reading my first book Chrome 2968.
Hope u can give some of your time to read my second book — Mystic the Gathering. This new story is a mystery / suspense thriller with a more serious / darker theme compared to my first story, which is more of a sci-fi fun action adventure.
I would appreciate your support. Thank u again :)

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S. N. Nina Arthur
22.01.2020, 12:24:36

That was cool story , can you look at my story Mixed feelings and give a review about it ❤️

S. N. Nina Arthur
22.01.2020, 12:47:03

Ryo Francis, ❤️

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Josie A.
16.01.2020, 13:06:24

Just wanted to stop by and say this is a great read. Thank you. :-)

Josie A.
16.01.2020, 13:32:02

Ryo Francis, Followed. Thank you

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Junior Batley
19.11.2019, 19:21:05

Unique style of writing, you must have put quite a lot of time in coming up with the plot. Great job!

Ryo Francis
19.11.2019, 22:26:53

Thank you very much :)

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Angel Lederhouse
09.09.2019, 12:19:39

is it a script of some piece?

Ryo Francis
11.09.2019, 04:38:11

Angel Lederhouse, My writing style is like a script. I am still learning to write better but I make sure I write something that is easy to read. Hope you enjoy my story. Thanks

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Celeste I.
06.09.2019, 09:51:55

Well, this is an interesting premise. It's also interesting that the dialogue and narrations are in the form of a play and not a novel(?) The sci-fi technology does sound fascinating, minus all the technobabble of course. The story, while unpredictable so far, and I don't know where it's going, seems to be going all over the place with its pacing. The characters and story have some time to change, develop, and be okay (Especially Joanne, cause I want to know more about her, James because he's underutilized, and Joshua, because I can't stand him as a character). But man, the exposition and dialogue is real clunky and could use some work in that department.

I don't know where this will go, and why the characters are doing what they're doing. And by that, I mean, the ones that don't have their backstories explained through exposition and then shown in a flashback immediately after that. What's up with that? I know it furthers the story, but the exposition is not needed when you show it in a flashback later on).

And will we get an idea on who this disembodied voice is, what they want, and why the main characters go along with what she says immediately? Just wondering.

Celeste I.
07.09.2019, 02:50:57

Ryo Francis, You're welcome; hopefully the criticism wasn't hurtful and could be beneficial.

Ah, that does explain it. I had a strange feeling that was the case considering some of the lines 'We cut to,' lack of dialogue tags, and the present tense. This has been an interesting read so far, so no need to worry about that.

Also a fact, the first story I wrote, also had a screenplay format, I thought it was atrocious, but that's just me.

I don't know if Litnet is okay with that format or not, and that'll be a lot to re-edit and work on regardless.

I didn't know this is your first time writing; hope you're enjoying writing so far. Also, it's good to recognize if your story has flaws (and not ignore criticism, as long as it's not destructive criticism) and improve on them for the future.

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Shay Punzalan
30.08.2019, 17:52:30

Nice story ???

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Ted Charlton
22.08.2019, 15:05:55

interesting idea, keep it up

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Ted Charlton
23.08.2019, 17:54:53

Ryo Francis, hope it will remain original

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Roza Csergo
17.08.2019, 17:06:35

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Ryo Francis
18.08.2019, 05:35:29

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