Age restriction 14+
Story about:firstlove, school romance, stranger
#373 in School#317 in LGBT
23.07.2019 — ...
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Hi. I don't want to sound rude but may I suggest dividing this one huge paragraph into smaller ones?
Also, would you consider starting the dialogue in a new line whenever the speaker changes?
These would make it easier for the reader to understand and to enjoy your story.
Happy writing :-)
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