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College\\ Last day of summer


Story about:firstlove, school romance, stranger

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#476 in School
#434 in LGBT

On Hold: 23 Jul 2 pages

Publication: 23.07.2019 — ...

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Description of book "College\\ Last day of summer"

:,,Weird, how can you miss someone so much when you´ve lived most of your life without them?"

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Roza Csergo
24.07.2019, 00:45:20

Hi. I don't want to sound rude but may I suggest dividing this one huge paragraph into smaller ones?
Also, would you consider starting the dialogue in a new line whenever the speaker changes?
These would make it easier for the reader to understand and to enjoy your story.
Happy writing :-)