Well, grammar could use some work, and there's too much exposition in the beginning. But, I'm intrigued by the premise, and Violet has the potential to be an interesting character, as well as her relationship with her families. I look forward to seeing where this goes...
Hey AP I wish sometimes that we had a way to privately message someone but because I can't I wanted to let you know before I get into this story. Your title is misspelled. It's spelled Recipes...You may want to change that. I'll get back to reading your story soon. Take care.
Looking forward to seeing what's this story about. I added it to my library and followed you. Would you please consider following back and checking out my stories in return? Thanks.
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Well, grammar could use some work, and there's too much exposition in the beginning. But, I'm intrigued by the premise, and Violet has the potential to be an interesting character, as well as her relationship with her families. I look forward to seeing where this goes...
Hi Part 7 is available
Hey AP I wish sometimes that we had a way to privately message someone but because I can't I wanted to let you know before I get into this story. Your title is misspelled. It's spelled Recipes...You may want to change that. I'll get back to reading your story soon. Take care.
TheAPwrites, Thank you AP I'll be sure to comment when I get started.
Just read all of it. It looks to have good potential. Plus I followed you. It will be really appreciated if you follow me back as well.
Hi Part 4 available
Wow! It's great Ap.. you mustn't waste your talent!
Thanks Ankit
Nice one apex. Waiting for the next part
Thanks Moni
Looking forward to seeing what's this story about. I added it to my library and followed you. Would you please consider following back and checking out my stories in return? Thanks.
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