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Log inOne thing is clear k Angelo usko deserve nahi karta... Aur brook ko prove karna padega k wo Elvira ko deserve karta hai
I think Brooke likes her from the start.
Ivory Smart, ok
yeh kya horhe h
author it's awesome but why Brooke not Angelo??
Ann Wambui, that's who remembered her first,broke is like a silent protector to her
I like the story
Romantic novels, thanks
isko aaj bhi heroine ki nhi padhi h
Ivory Smart, Jaldi update kijiye
Can't wait for next chapter (╥﹏╥)
Use (.) And(,)
if she goes back to Angelo her rapist she will be biggest fool
nice
update plz
I don't her to end up with Angelo. She needs a great, strong, and loving lead who worship her.
please update dear author?
Some few tips author, you need to do more research such as when a woman loses her virginity. If they didn’t use protection wouldn’t she have remnants of semen down there? A woman would also know straight away her virginity has been taken. 2. Identical twins can only be from the same sex. The siblings may look alike but never could be identical. Maybe English isn’t your first language but it’s needs to be proof read. But overall as I read the chapters you have made great improvement in your writing.
Just take this in a positive outlook and don’t be dishearten you will learn as you write more books. Im rooting for you.
Maz Ahmed, thanks for your enlightenment I will take notice
male lead is pathetic ...... make him regret what he have done
lovely Book dear,I love how interesting and fun the book is becoming kudas to you keep you turn good work and I promise you will scale high
Dear author, I like the story line and all that.... but as I started reading it I just lost interest after just reading first paragraph, I lost my interest. No matter how good your story is, no one is gonna read it until it's edited.
An edited story really attract attention of other readers and with that good story line you need to edit story to attract attention of the other readers.
You can use 'GOOGLE DOCS' to edit your work without much of the hard work.
And keep going on, no matter what!! KEEP GOING!!!
:)
saloniblue, thanks dear I will
day by day it is getting intresting
pls don't end her with Angelo... it will be glorifying rape...
Ann Wambui, right
so author Angelo never paid Elvi the pending salary meaning her friend paid for her ticket???
Ann Wambui, he did please go through it again
awesome author I love the book more it's turning hot
friends like julia r really precious. thanks for saving two lives
very good story, has captured attention. can't wait to catch with new chapters.
Veronica Paul, very good I appreciate and more chapters are coming
so scary hey!!!!!!
Ann Wambui, right
I just read ur book in one go. lovely. make evi strong and that jerk angelo he took her virginity and he has aducitiy to call her by her names and his own child a bast.... such a shame
Amrita Koul, best side of her you will see it in the future
wow the worst male lead of all times and subtitles read boss love , forgiveness, is it for real..how can such pathetic creature be forgiven
Satyadev, have done some little changes dear
nice one
mmasinachi MMADUNEME, thanks
please a longer update and I am starting to feel the pain of pregnancy and loneliness
Ann Wambui, no problem dear I will
author you want to say anglo raped elvil and she knows nothing about it
how kindly explain.. first in a hotel room and after in their room together with her friend..
Ivory Smart, oohh now I got it thanks author
the story line is awesome,but please author put out your commas,fullstops etc and who's pov is and such otherwise kudos I love the story already
Ann Wambui, thank you dear I will take notice of it
male lead is a rapist. and subtitles show forgiveness ...like seriously
Satyadev, there must be a sin committed for any one to forgive right
no guys it wasn't in a hotel it was his own mansion he held a party at his house remember guys
and also those that followed me up thank you all very much may God bless you
guys please help and comment and I will also like who is an editor to message me this is really my new works its not easy to be a writer its very difficult please appreciate by voting and commenting and can still follow me up thank you very much for those that have being being my books
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