Age restriction 14+
Story about:romance, abduction, mafia
#199 in Romantic suspense#15 in Action thriller
24.11.2020 — 30.01.2021
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You are right when you mention that many people are not shy to vote and everything else.
English is my second language, and this is the first story I read as such.
I loved it very much, but the million dollar question is ...
Will there be a second part?
Dariel Claire, when will this second version with happy ending with Massimo come??
although its a happy ending....but i feel deeply sad for Massimo he was so soft hearted person he loved her so much she should be with her....
Amna Aslam, exactly what I'm feeling! and than that ring with his name at the end!
The sequel supposed to be Hidden Vendetta right, but if i put the name, that book is not there....?
your talking maby about a sequel....so what about it? i dont see any more info about but you left us readers with half a clifhanger:(
and to be honest i was hoping she would end up with Massimo
Hello dear author..can you please tell how to get promo codes so that I can buy other books...it is really difficult for me... please help me if possible... please don't consider it offending.. thank you
Dariel Claire, no problem
It is a good novel
Nidhi Sharma, Thank you! ❤️
is there is a sequel of the book??
Devika Pranavi, Heyy thanks! Do click the follow button for more updates if you enjoyed the book. I really appreciate it :)
Oh, gosh, my heart is beating so fast.... the story is getting thrilling...so...anxious Melina!!!
Maria Alba, Heyy glad you're enjoying the story!
Very Happy eagerly waiting for the sequel
Pratiksha, Glad you enjoyed the story!
mmmh...welcome back ...post prologue soon
Risper wanja, =)
Just read the first few chapters of your book. Really liked the lovely characters you have and the thought you have put into each of them. The language is simple and easy to read but still expressive, which I believe is not an easy feat to accomplish! Also loved the visuals you have and the care you put into each of your chapters...
If there is one aspect I think you could improve it would be to show rather than tell (I have been mentioning this a lot lately, but I think it could really help here!). For instance, introducing the characters by their interactions with the world would serve both to engross your readers as well as help develop an attachment for them. Apart from this, I think you have done a exceptional job on most fronts, especially with keep those pesky typos away, so kudos to you on that!
That being said, please check out my book if you can. I would love to hear your thoughts if that isn't too much trouble (although I cannot give you the amazing visuals you have here, I try to put in my effort with the writing and that has my hands full at the moment.Which is again why I still can't wrap my head around how you do it!). Either way, all the very best !!
Dariel Claire, Oh damn! XD
I loved the story so much!!! I still am interested in knowing that will you be writing the sequence to this or not... it's like so good... and even at last you left us at suspense
When is the sequel coming
Dariel Claire, Oh ok
I don't know whether to be sad or happy with an ending.
I officially consider myself team Massimo. Fuck!!!! If Melina didn't want it, I would have accepted it for her.
They didn't have to kill him !!! My poor heart can't handle that much.
Karla Canizales, Sorry for that but I always knew Melina's supposed to be with Leo.. hehe a fan of childhood love LOL
because I have good ...
I wanted him to stay with both of them.
I love You!!!
Karla Canizales, Since you like Massimo so much, check this out ;D
I love your edits !!!
Karla Canizales, Thank you!
with just the introduction I'm sighing for Massimo
Karla Canizales, Haha he's a heart breaker, isn't he?
Why did you leave Leonard? you have broken my heart.
suspense???my darling massimo is back ...he should destroy those bastards who betrayed him
Dariel Claire, okay
Dear author is there a sequel of this story ??? if yes then I would love to read that .....
Priyanka Das, Not really having any idea of a sequel, but if I'm able to develop a good plot, then maybe :)
BTW thanks for reading my book, love ya !
No, it's not boring at all.
ITUMELENG NKONYANE, Thank you, that means a lot ! ❤
Apaarna Sharma, Thank you ! ❤
Will Massimo come back ever?
Arundhati Sengupta, He isn't dead, and it's a cliffhanger I'm gonna leave you on :P
When will the sequel be published?
Lili Vr, I'm not planning for a sequel YET.
When I get a really good plot for the sequel, I'll surely Publish that :)
Nice job girl , great book
Sanchi Prajapati, Thank you so much ! ❤️
Good job ...next update
Dariel Claire, Anytime ...take care too
cant believe this book is completed... still waiting for massimo to come back..
Jyothi Chinnabathuni, It is finally :)
Im hoping to read more books coming from you if that was possible pls.I really enjoy your books a lot and thank you so much..
Joane Catarata, Weclome !
And take care sis :)
please unite melina and massimo at the end
Risper wanja, If you want, you can check out Massimo's character intro on my youtube channel ( Dariel Claire)
I think you'll like it :)
I will dear
love you too....keep up ...good work
Risper wanja, Sure, keep supporting ! :)
I love it
Risper wanja, Thanks !
This books is really amazing im really hoping to read more books coming from you.
Joane Catarata, Thank you ! Will surely do :)
The aesthetics, damn girl !
And the story is so interesting ! Update soon please !
Donald Trump, Thanks a bunch ! Love ya :)
I read the entire story on Wattpad because I saw it on the trailer.....I wished that Massimo ended with Melina....will there be another ending too....or a sequel???.....anyways it was one of the best book I have ever read.
Ananya Jain, It's a cliff hanger.
I love to leave my readers on a cliff hanger haha :P
please update soon....can't wait
Ananya Jain, Next chap coming tomorrow :)
the trailer is thrilling....if only it could be made in to a thrilling movie
Dariel Claire, no problem ☺️☺️
so they have past. eagerly waiting for their past
Jyothi Chinnabathuni, Haha soon to come :)
amazing chapter.... fantastic storyline.... waiting for your next update soon.... please update soon
Ananya Jain, Aww thank you ! Will surely update soon :)
Each chapter are very interesting im hoping you update daily pls.
Joane Catarata, Aww thank you ! Will surely update daily love :)
please continue giving updates this novel is so good
Anju Sharma, Thanks a bunch ! Will surely do :)
must be massimo
Jyothi Chinnabathuni, Gotta wait and see I guess :)
Jyothi Chinnabathuni, Haha you're welcome :)
thank you so much ,i really like this kind of books and im looking forward to read more books coming from you.be safe always
Joane Catarata, You're welcome, and stay safe :)
im looking forward to read it again and again pls do update.
Joane Catarata, Thanks ! Will do surely :)
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