Book. "Secrets Kill" read online
Rating:
81
467 99 20226

Ranking:
#15 in Romantic suspense
#1 in Action thriller


Complete 62 pages

Publication: 24.11.2020 — 05.12.2020


Description of book "Secrets Kill"

One Throne,
Two Kings.

If there's something everyone knows
What Massimo wants, he gets and what Leonardo loves, he owns.

But what would happen when the love of Leonard becomes Massimo's passion ?

As love blooms, secrets unveil and betrayal burns all in the midst of a Mafia war for power, territory and love, what ends would one go to have it all ?

A tale of love, secrets and betrayal.


Feel free to comment and give advice ! Happy reading :)
WARNING : DO NOT READ THE COMMENTS, THEY'RE FULL OF SPOILERS !

Comments on book:

Total number of threads: 37

Nyssa Quadros 26.01.2021, 11:27:04

Hey Dariel!

Just read the first few chapters of your book. Really liked the lovely characters you have and the thought you have put into each of them. The language is simple and easy to read but still expressive, which I believe is not an easy feat to accomplish! Also loved the visuals you have and the care you put into each of your chapters...

If there is one aspect I think you could improve it would be to show rather than tell (I have been mentioning this a lot lately, but I think it could really help here!). For instance, introducing the characters by their interactions with the world would serve both to engross your readers as well as help develop an attachment for them. Apart from this, I think you have done a exceptional job on most fronts, especially with keep those pesky typos away, so kudos to you on that!

That being said, please check out my book if you can. I would love to hear your thoughts if that isn't too much trouble (although I cannot give you the amazing visuals you have here, I try to put in my effort with the writing and that has my hands full at the moment.Which is again why I still can't wrap my head around how you do it!). Either way, all the very best !!

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Nyssa Quadros 26.01.2021, 12:41:17

Dariel Claire, Oh damn! XD

Manvi 26.01.2021, 02:28:16

I loved the story so much!!! I still am interested in knowing that will you be writing the sequence to this or not... it's like so good... and even at last you left us at suspense

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Manvi 26.01.2021, 09:08:00

Dariel Claire,

KAVITA JAIN 25.01.2021, 17:15:37

When is the sequel coming

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KAVITA JAIN 26.01.2021, 07:15:33

Dariel Claire, Oh ok

Karla Canizales 24.01.2021, 15:28:13

You are right when you mention that many people are not shy to vote and everything else.
English is my second language, and this is the first story I read as such.
I loved it very much, but the million dollar question is ...

Will there be a second part?

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Dariel Claire 24.01.2021, 16:13:46

Karla Canizales, I'm planning on a second version of the same story with an alternate ending since MANY are team Massimo. I think you'll love the ending there. After that, if still readers want a sequel, I will write one :)

Karla Canizales 24.01.2021, 15:25:07

I don't know whether to be sad or happy with an ending.
I officially consider myself team Massimo. Fuck!!!! If Melina didn't want it, I would have accepted it for her.
They didn't have to kill him !!! My poor heart can't handle that much.

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Dariel Claire 24.01.2021, 16:12:45

Karla Canizales, Sorry for that but I always knew Melina's supposed to be with Leo.. hehe a fan of childhood love LOL

Karla Canizales 24.01.2021, 15:29:51

because I have good ...

I wanted him to stay with both of them.
Jajajajjaa

Karla Canizales 24.01.2021, 04:40:12

I love You!!!
Massimo

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Dariel Claire 24.01.2021, 05:02:55

Karla Canizales, Since you like Massimo so much, check this out ;D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XLjwBE38hUI

Karla Canizales 24.01.2021, 04:00:57

I love your edits !!!

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Dariel Claire 24.01.2021, 05:00:51

Karla Canizales, Thank you!

Karla Canizales 24.01.2021, 03:58:46

with just the introduction I'm sighing for Massimo

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Dariel Claire 24.01.2021, 05:00:43

Karla Canizales, Haha he's a heart breaker, isn't he?

Karla Canizales 24.01.2021, 04:08:01

Why did you leave Leonard? you have broken my heart.

Risper wanja 05.12.2020, 09:28:44

suspense???my darling massimo is back ...he should destroy those bastards who betrayed him

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Risper wanja 10.01.2021, 17:13:30

Dariel Claire, okay

Priyanka Das 09.01.2021, 09:03:09

Dear author is there a sequel of this story ??? if yes then I would love to read that .....

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Dariel Claire 09.01.2021, 09:06:36

Priyanka Das, Not really having any idea of a sequel, but if I'm able to develop a good plot, then maybe :)
BTW thanks for reading my book, love ya !

ITUMELENG NKONYANE 04.01.2021, 17:59:17

No, it's not boring at all.

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Dariel Claire 04.01.2021, 19:13:38

ITUMELENG NKONYANE, Thank you, that means a lot ! ❤

Apaarna Sharma 04.01.2021, 05:43:46

Nice book

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Dariel Claire 04.01.2021, 06:36:01

Apaarna Sharma, Thank you ! ❤

Arundhati Sengupta 31.12.2020, 20:39:29

Will Massimo come back ever?

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Dariel Claire 31.12.2020, 21:01:07

Arundhati Sengupta, He isn't dead, and it's a cliffhanger I'm gonna leave you on :P

Lili Vr 31.12.2020, 15:50:42

When will the sequel be published?

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Dariel Claire 31.12.2020, 17:02:29

Lili Vr, I'm not planning for a sequel YET.
When I get a really good plot for the sequel, I'll surely Publish that :)

Sanchi Prajapati 30.12.2020, 17:34:25

Nice job girl , great book

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Dariel Claire 31.12.2020, 12:37:52

Sanchi Prajapati, Thank you so much ! ❤️

Risper wanja 04.12.2020, 20:52:52

Good job ...next update

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Risper wanja 06.12.2020, 10:19:48

Dariel Claire, Anytime ...take care too

Jyothi Chinnabathuni 05.12.2020, 14:00:39

cant believe this book is completed... still waiting for massimo to come back..

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Dariel Claire 05.12.2020, 15:10:12

Jyothi Chinnabathuni, It is finally :)

Joane Catarata 05.12.2020, 09:14:03

Im hoping to read more books coming from you if that was possible pls.I really enjoy your books a lot and thank you so much..

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Dariel Claire 05.12.2020, 09:23:36

Joane Catarata, Weclome !
And take care sis :)

Risper wanja 03.12.2020, 11:07:56

please unite melina and massimo at the end
l

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Dariel Claire 03.12.2020, 18:53:58

Risper wanja, If you want, you can check out Massimo's character intro on my youtube channel ( Dariel Claire)
I think you'll like it :)

Risper wanja 03.12.2020, 11:06:45

I will dear

Risper wanja 03.12.2020, 11:05:35

love you too....keep up ...good work

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Dariel Claire 03.12.2020, 11:06:21

Risper wanja, Sure, keep supporting ! :)

Risper wanja 02.12.2020, 21:15:07

I love it

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Dariel Claire 03.12.2020, 03:44:19

Risper wanja, Thanks !

Joane Catarata 02.12.2020, 07:28:46

This books is really amazing im really hoping to read more books coming from you.

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Dariel Claire 02.12.2020, 07:29:31

Joane Catarata, Thank you ! Will surely do :)

Donald Trump 01.12.2020, 18:02:03

The aesthetics, damn girl !

And the story is so interesting ! Update soon please !

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Dariel Claire 01.12.2020, 18:07:01

Donald Trump, Thanks a bunch ! Love ya :)

Ananya Jain 01.12.2020, 16:59:19

I read the entire story on Wattpad because I saw it on the trailer.....I wished that Massimo ended with Melina....will there be another ending too....or a sequel???.....anyways it was one of the best book I have ever read.

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Dariel Claire 01.12.2020, 18:05:42

Ananya Jain, It's a cliff hanger.
I love to leave my readers on a cliff hanger haha :P

Ananya Jain 01.12.2020, 13:38:24

please update soon....can't wait

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Dariel Claire 01.12.2020, 14:34:10

Ananya Jain, Next chap coming tomorrow :)

Ananya Jain 01.12.2020, 07:21:41

the trailer is thrilling....if only it could be made in to a thrilling movie

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Ananya Jain 01.12.2020, 09:09:25

Dariel Claire, no problem ☺️☺️

Jyothi Chinnabathuni 01.12.2020, 07:04:46

so they have past. eagerly waiting for their past

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Dariel Claire 01.12.2020, 07:41:51

Jyothi Chinnabathuni, Haha soon to come :)

Ananya Jain 01.12.2020, 06:59:26

amazing chapter.... fantastic storyline.... waiting for your next update soon.... please update soon

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Dariel Claire 01.12.2020, 07:40:58

Ananya Jain, Aww thank you ! Will surely update soon :)

Joane Catarata 28.11.2020, 10:53:30

Each chapter are very interesting im hoping you update daily pls.

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Dariel Claire 28.11.2020, 10:59:22

Joane Catarata, Aww thank you ! Will surely update daily love :)

Anju Sharma 28.11.2020, 06:22:41

please continue giving updates this novel is so good

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Dariel Claire 28.11.2020, 07:51:36

Anju Sharma, Thanks a bunch ! Will surely do :)

Jyothi Chinnabathuni 27.11.2020, 15:14:34

must be massimo

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Dariel Claire 27.11.2020, 15:21:20

Jyothi Chinnabathuni, Gotta wait and see I guess :)

Jyothi Chinnabathuni 26.11.2020, 09:21:05

nice story

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Dariel Claire 26.11.2020, 20:01:08

Jyothi Chinnabathuni, Haha you're welcome :)

Joane Catarata 26.11.2020, 06:58:45

thank you so much ,i really like this kind of books and im looking forward to read more books coming from you.be safe always

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Dariel Claire 26.11.2020, 08:22:29

Joane Catarata, You're welcome, and stay safe :)

Joane Catarata 26.11.2020, 03:04:45

im looking forward to read it again and again pls do update.

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Dariel Claire 26.11.2020, 05:36:38

Joane Catarata, Thanks ! Will do surely :)

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