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The First Chronicles Book I

Josie Campbell

Story about:sin, sisterhood

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Ranking:
#430 in Dark fantasy
#124 in Action thriller


On Hold: 18 Sep 12 pages

Publication: 27.07.2019 — ...


Description of book "The First Chronicles Book I"

Ariyanna is an ordinary girl that encounters an extraordinary life-changing twist. A chance meeting with a world of seduction, sin, and survival sends her on an unforgettable road traveled with four new companions. The ladies, bonded as sisters, venture far and wide holding strong to their sisterhood, taking on the road of unexpected people and places.

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Roza Csergo
27.07.2019, 12:18:28

Did I just read the words Carpathian and Transylvanian Alps?
Ok, I'm hooked.
Don't want to be rude but may I suggest dividing this one huge paragraph into a few smaller ones?
Also, would you consider starting each line of dialogue in a new sentence whenever the speaker changes?
These would make your story a much more enjoyable read.
Can't wait to see the direction this book is heading.
I added it to my library and followed you.
Would you please consider following back?

Josie Campbell
22.09.2020, 17:43:16

Roza Csergo, Thank you for the feedback it's what makes good transform into great.

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