Allowed. Double submission
18.06.2022 — 25.08.2022
#482 in Romantic erotica
#541 in Contemporary Romance
Complete 182 pages
18.06.2022 — 25.08.2022
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I have read forbidden and allowed in one go and I was totally addicted. Good job author and thanks for the nice story
Klein Prinsesje, Oh. I understood! There will be such stories of course) Thank you! By the way, new one is not erotic, but the story is very emotional with strong real man. Maybe you would like it, too)
Ok , at this point I am starting not to like Margarita, I mean her goal in life is just fuck too guys , one of them a cunning bastard and the other a cold arogant, Elena just happens to be right about her
Branisteanu Palade Oana, me too, i kinda think her life are all abt sex with the two guys. can't she even think to change her life for something btr.
I thought that she found a person (General) who will really care for her, but it didn’t turn that way. I hope that she can get away from General
Ema Noel, Thanks for clarification ❤️
Uhuu, already more intersting, love it, love it, love it......
Branisteanu Palade Oana, Thanks, there will be more and more surprises ;)
as soon as I have money i will buy :)
Zukey Cruz, Waiting, thank you ))))
Oh nooo! I sooo hate this two faced bich Elena and in this moment the only thing I can chose for Margot to be alright is to run straight to them. Also Ash did insisted in asking about the amount of cash that was stolen, is he on to somthing? Great story author, love it!
Branisteanu Palade Oana, Thank you. Margot is too afraid, besides, all the facts are against her.
Nice updates, how many more chapters, it’s exciting! ????
Lynn Austria, Thank you. The book is big enough.
Are they doing it wantedly wit her?
dsk 1605 (Kirti), You will have to wait for the continuation of the story to know that.
I wish there is someone who will help her escape from these two assholes and make plan for revenge.
Bel Espada, You think she can't handle herself? Have you ever thought that she is here with them not because she has no choice, but maybe because she convinced herself that she has no choice, and because she likes their attention?
wow I trusted Ash poor Margot
Bongeka Nonkanyiso, Margot trusted him, too (╯︵╰,)
I just know the girl is damn confusing... even if girlfriend is angry with boyfriend or wife from husband she doesn't feel attracted to him but here she always remain horny even if they tramp her dignity...
Satyadev, I'm not agree with you. These feelings may change each other every minute, especially if she doesn't know the reason for such behaviour of her man and is trying to understand it. I think later you will understand the reason of her confusion)
I feel she's so helpless, I mean she didn't even have an idea how to help herself. She has been played by these two men especially Ashton what she gonna do now?
Bel Espada, To get the answer to this question, you will have to wait for the continuation of the book ◉‿◉
I don’t know what she can do after knowing their conversation since she is stuck with them, and nowhere to go
Jennifer Zeigler, Girls might be very creative. Will see, who will be wiser.
Are they trapping her?
dsk 1605 (Kirti), Isn't she already trapped?
omg they did her so wrong. wtf. i hate them. i hope they fall in love with her and beg for forgiveness
Zukey Cruz, Everything is possible....
I might like them again later in the story, but not eight now.
Zukey Cruz, ❤️❤️❤️ Great!
Ha! Told'ya, very good wrigting dear author, she did feel amazing but the guilt after is expected, just hope they will get a good lesson for all this
Branisteanu Palade Oana, Oh, she`s not the kind of girl who forgives so easily.
What to do now? Pick youself up, dust yourself up and make them pay :) oh and don't forget to beat Elena up one more time please Can't wait for the next chapter
Branisteanu Palade Oana, Hah! Great plan! Thank youuu
Was she cheated?
dsk 1605 (Kirti), Hah! Who's to say? What about the intrigue?
Love this.you write exceptionally author
dsk 1605 (Kirti), Thanks so much)
Her drink was spiked and it was planed by bouth of them and Elena helped them.... she is being played, hope she ghets away from them soon
Margot is getting bold amazing(/^-^(^ ^*)/
Bongeka Nonkanyiso, It's because of good attitude, of course.
I think drink was spiked.
Bel Espada, Maybe. Or maybe she just got overexcited.
I am excited to see how this decision will lead to the path of her happiness and happy ending
Jennifer Zeigler, ❤️❤️❤️
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