Book. "Beautiful Beast" read online
Rating:
139
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Ranking:
#41 in Young adult
#25 in Supernaturals


Complete 106 pages

Publication: 07.02.2021 — 11.11.2021
Contests: Beauty and the Beast


Description of book "Beautiful Beast"

A Royal Werewolf family stays at the beautiful abandoned castle. No one really cares to pay attention to the ruined castle at the outskirts of their town, it is a rather scary-looking place at night and a pack of dangerous wild wolves has taken over the place. Well, that is what it appears to the human eye but if you are brave enough to step into the gate, that is always open by-the-way, the castle will reveal its true beauty. But not so fast, before you enter the gates, know this, anyone that has ever entered, ended up dead.
Belle an ordinary human girl learns to love a supernatural beast-looking guy.
Adam, mated with Belle, a human girl, conceived a Werewolf but due to a Vampire attack and an angry Enchantress, turned him into a supernatural Beast, half-vampire, and half-werewolf,

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A Pamela Carlisle-Calix
27.07.2021, 19:25:33

I really enjoyed this book it was very nice

A Pamela Carlisle-Calix
26.02.2022, 00:07:41

Mari AA, What story? This one?

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Gaddam LakshmiPriya
15.12.2021, 16:04:41

Is it the conclusion is Adam's pack really dead this is so sad he should fight for his family very bad not at all like a werewolf nature where there are so possesive about their family

Mari AA
25.02.2022, 19:11:47

Gaddam LakshmiPriya, Check out my story Alpha or Slave

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Jennifer Zeigler
14.02.2022, 19:42:05

Thank you for writing this story. I enjoyed reading it❤️

Mari AA
25.02.2022, 19:12:23

Jennifer Zeigler, Check out my story Alpha or Slave

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SonamChokigfdghfdfj
11.11.2021, 18:32:21

hope you won't make this paid one.... I have just started reading

Mari AA
25.02.2022, 19:12:48

SonamChokigfdghfdfj, Check out my story Alpha or Slave

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Maureen Mutahi
05.08.2021, 15:53:51

Beautifully written :):)

Mari AA
25.02.2022, 19:13:07

Maureen Mutahi, Check out my story Alpha or Slave

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Urvi Katira
09.07.2021, 22:29:13

Wow... Very beautifully written...
Completed the book in couple of hours itself

Mari AA
25.02.2022, 19:13:39

Urvi Katira, Check out my story Alpha or Slave

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Lakhan Sav
30.06.2021, 06:43:17

beautiful story.

Mari AA
25.02.2022, 19:13:55

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Anna Hunk
14.05.2021, 08:17:42

beautiful story thanks author

Mari AA
25.02.2022, 19:14:19

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Terry Odhiambo
04.05.2021, 20:17:47

Good book ended so soon.....

Mari AA
25.02.2022, 19:14:36

Terry Odhiambo, Check out my story Alpha or Slave

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Lucyabdullah
02.05.2021, 02:35:19

Omg awesome, love the book, good work author keep it up!

Mari AA
25.02.2022, 19:14:51

9Lucyabdullah, Check out my story Alpha or Slave

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Mari AA
13.11.2021, 00:50:05

Thank you for all your LIKES, I see the notifications and it means the world to me that you like my story. I have several other stories I hope you guys will check them out; Yours Forever. Broken Angel. The Devil is a Woman.

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Mari AA
05.09.2021, 20:46:02

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Sabmoha
07.07.2021, 13:50:18

Why isn’t it working from chp eight

Mari AA
07.07.2021, 15:31:16

Sabmoha, I am not sure, I don't have ownership of the book anymore, try sending an email to Booknet.

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Syeda Noorah
27.05.2021, 17:10:58

Nice story...

Mari AA
27.05.2021, 18:22:51

Syeda Noorah, Thank you

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Amie Massey
24.05.2021, 23:07:59

Just finished the first chapter, adding it to my library for when I have time.

Mari AA
25.05.2021, 00:04:24

Amie Massey, Great

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Miriam Hale
24.05.2021, 23:36:05

Looks good

Mari AA
25.05.2021, 00:04:15

Miriam Hale, thank you

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Miriam Hale
24.05.2021, 23:36:49

Fantastic twist and modernizing the story.

Mari AA
25.05.2021, 00:04:08

Miriam Hale, thank you

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Miriam Hale
24.05.2021, 23:49:06

I checked out the other stories in the competition and have to say by far this one is the best. I hope you win

Mari AA
25.05.2021, 00:03:58

Miriam Hale, Thank you

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Andre Bear
24.05.2021, 02:24:24

Ah, what a nice story. I totally did not expect it to end the way it did. Well done on a great book. I do feel that in some parts more body could have been added but still a great book.

Mari AA
24.05.2021, 03:36:15

Andre Bear, Thank you for the compliment. I did have to cut it short as I ran out of time but I feel the story comes across clearly.

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Cyethemba Nokwanda
21.05.2021, 17:17:26

Xhosa....m from South Africa

Mari AA
21.05.2021, 19:46:28

Cyethemba Nokwanda, Hi, Cyethemba, hope you enjoyed my story, don't forget to click that like button if you enjoyed it and to follow me if you want to get updates on future stories.

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Shaun Robert Bianchina
12.05.2021, 12:24:32

My wife is forcing me to read this book. I have to say I didn't think I would like it as much as I do.

Mari AA
12.05.2021, 12:37:42

Shaun Robert Bianchina, LOL.

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Shaun Robert Bianchina
12.05.2021, 12:25:05

Great job

Mari AA
12.05.2021, 12:37:31

Shaun Robert Bianchina, Thank you.

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Mari AA
08.05.2021, 13:42:56

Check out my book Forever if you liked this story.

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Mari AA
08.05.2021, 13:42:20

Don't forget to leave a comment and tell me what you think about the book.

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G A Rosell
02.04.2021, 19:41:36

Hello, I love your story. I have added you to my list of authors to follow, can you do the same for me? So we can build a community of writers and we can follow each other in our literary career.
I hope to read more of your story.

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Lezanne Bianchina
23.02.2021, 10:27:42

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Plume Alter
21.02.2021, 03:26:02

Woah! I've read from Chapter 1 until 6. I was amazed how you managed to pull this through by using some of the characters in the fairytale "Beauty and the Beast". And the idea that Belle's mate (the Beast) was the one who killed her own mother would be a devastating news in the future. I cannot imagine what will happen when things get complicated even more as the story progresses.

It was a good read and I have already put it on my library so I could be updated for your new posts. And I have also followed you back (I saw your comment on my profile so thank you xoxo).

And oh, please be consistent with your tenses. It was just the minor things I saw that should be improved. But I like your writing so Good job!

Plume Alter
21.02.2021, 12:04:10

Anonymous Author, You're most welcome

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SESaunders
09.02.2021, 21:59:59

This is really good, I read straight to Chapter 3 before stopping to come back to comment. If you are going to enter it into the Beauty and the Beast contest later, check the rules, last time I looked at them it appeared as though the author couldn't have multiple species?

I use a VR world called Second Life, and there is an in-world 'game' that centers around vampires, demons, angels, hybrids etc. Bloodlines is the name of it, and this book/writing, for some reason I could totally see it as a story arc for that kind of a game.

I was a little concerned at the beginning of the book when I saw you were using all the Disney character names (Maurice, Belle and Gaston) but then I realized it was to help set the tone of the story, and then introduce werewolves, or the Beast as a werewolf. But then bam there were vampires too!

All interesting. Okay, shutting up now, I've left a novel as a comment LOL. Going to read some more.

Mari AA
09.02.2021, 22:51:48

SESaunders, Thank you for your good review and input, I can see you are an author and know you must be super busy yourself, so really appreciate the time you took.

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