Description of book "Beautiful Beast"
A Royal Werewolf family stays at the beautiful abandoned castle. No one really cares to pay attention to the ruined castle at the outskirts of their town, it is a rather scary-looking place at night and a pack of dangerous wild wolves has taken over the place. Well, that is what it appears to the human eye but if you are brave enough to step into the gate, that is always open by-the-way, the castle will reveal its true beauty. But not so fast, before you enter the gates, know this, anyone that has ever entered, ended up dead.
Belle an ordinary human girl learns to love a supernatural beast-looking guy.
Adam, mated with Belle, a human girl, conceived a Werewolf but due to a Vampire attack and an angry Enchantress, turned him into a supernatural Beast, half-vampire, and half-werewolf,
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Lezanne Bianchina 23.02.2021, 10:27:42
Ps. Where do you get the time to write 3 books at once?
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Anonymous Author 23.02.2021, 18:21:54
Lezanne Bianchina, 3 books are nothing, I am also working on another book, 'Forever'. A book about Vampires, Werewolves, and the whole supernatural world with a variety of species but it is not available on BookNet yet. You can check it out on Novel Cat or on my own app that you can download from the Google play store. The app name AnonymousAuthor. You will see the image I use on Booklet as an app image. On my app, you will also find a story that is not available anywhere else but on my own app, and that story is called 'Family Tree,' it is a fictional soapie based on a truly historical timeline. (No fantasy)
Lezanne Bianchina 23.02.2021, 10:27:11
Just done with chapter 7! I love it. Great job writing the original dinner scene as a breakfast scene. Please update soon.
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Anonymous Author 23.02.2021, 18:16:30
Lezanne Bianchina, Will do my best to update daily but not making any promises.
Lezanne Bianchina 23.02.2021, 10:26:00
Chapter 5, I feel so sorry for Belle.
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Anonymous Author 23.02.2021, 18:16:01
Lezanne Bianchina, Don't we all.
Lezanne Bianchina 23.02.2021, 10:25:08
I am at chapter 3 and I just love how it is based on Beauty and the Beast but not Beauty and the Beast. Great story! Keep up the good work. Like your other stories I have rewarded you for this story as well.
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Anonymous Author 23.02.2021, 18:15:44
Lezanne Bianchina, Thank you
Plume Alter 21.02.2021, 03:26:02
Woah! I've read from Chapter 1 until 6. I was amazed how you managed to pull this through by using some of the characters in the fairytale "Beauty and the Beast". And the idea that Belle's mate (the Beast) was the one who killed her own mother would be a devastating news in the future. I cannot imagine what will happen when things get complicated even more as the story progresses.
It was a good read and I have already put it on my library so I could be updated for your new posts. And I have also followed you back (I saw your comment on my profile so thank you xoxo).
And oh, please be consistent with your tenses. It was just the minor things I saw that should be improved. But I like your writing so Good job!
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Plume Alter 21.02.2021, 12:04:10
Anonymous Author, You're most welcome
SESaunders 09.02.2021, 21:59:59
This is really good, I read straight to Chapter 3 before stopping to come back to comment. If you are going to enter it into the Beauty and the Beast contest later, check the rules, last time I looked at them it appeared as though the author couldn't have multiple species?
I use a VR world called Second Life, and there is an in-world 'game' that centers around vampires, demons, angels, hybrids etc. Bloodlines is the name of it, and this book/writing, for some reason I could totally see it as a story arc for that kind of a game.
I was a little concerned at the beginning of the book when I saw you were using all the Disney character names (Maurice, Belle and Gaston) but then I realized it was to help set the tone of the story, and then introduce werewolves, or the Beast as a werewolf. But then bam there were vampires too!
All interesting. Okay, shutting up now, I've left a novel as a comment LOL. Going to read some more.
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Anonymous Author 09.02.2021, 22:51:48
SESaunders, Thank you for your good review and input, I can see you are an author and know you must be super busy yourself, so really appreciate the time you took.