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Behind The Bars of Your Heart

Marilyn Lucero

Story about:heartbreak, freedom, love and betrayal

Rating:
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227 6040

Ranking:
#21 in Short stories
#209 in Contemporary Romance


Complete 24 pages

Publication: 23.08.2020 — 21.04.2021


Description of book "Behind The Bars of Your Heart"

I stepped out of the prison doors towards the road of freedom. I should be happy because I had been here for five wretched years. All the pieces of evidence that my fiancee's lover set up to drive me out of her life pointed to me as the murderer.

Little did I know that behind those bars inside the cell, my heart remained trapped.

I stopped and turned to take a final glimpse of the building that had been my home for a long time. My lips twisted into a bitter smile, mocking at life's irony. All because of the truth that I no longer wanted to be free.

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Olayemi Ariwoola Oyelude
14.05.2021, 19:42:11

lovely. hope he will accept his son

Marilyn Lucero
15.05.2021, 07:35:17

Olayemi Ariwoola Oyelude, Thank you so mich for reading

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Mahamotha Khatun
23.04.2021, 19:41:57

this short story is really nice , author has wonderfully make us see that sometimes we need to let go our dears to let them be happy like what Charles did , I am so impressed with it , the whole concept is beautifully written & well arranged , author , I would like to thank u for writing such a wonderful story , love u

Mahamotha Khatun
24.04.2021, 13:26:29

Marilyn Lucero, love u more

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Belle Alvarez
15.01.2021, 23:06:18

Thank you for a wonderful story “Behind the Bars of Your Heart” i am following your stories now.❤️

Marilyn Lucero
16.01.2021, 09:04:30

Belle Alvarez, Thank you so much for reading this and for following my stories. Knowing this inspires me a lot.

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LeiLa Leviste
24.12.2020, 01:48:20

you hit it again. nice story

Marilyn Lucero
24.12.2020, 16:00:40

LeiLa Leviste, Thank you so much, ma'am. You are such an inspiration.

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DreamerM
25.11.2020, 09:58:51

i loved thiss story.....and what happened to reyes and charles?????....they got married???

Marilyn Lucero
23.12.2020, 14:52:57

Manjot Kaur, yes. Thank you so much for reading.

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Alda Alda
25.10.2020, 22:44:22

And what happened to Alexa during this 15 years ?

Marilyn Lucero
25.10.2020, 20:59:08

Alda Alda, This is the part that I no longer elaborated on except for the fact that she remained Jaime's wife. Thank you so much for reading.

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Shiza Naeem
01.10.2020, 00:33:35

Another lovely piece of your artwork just loved this one also u are just and amazing writer...❤️U never seize to amaze me dear with your writing skills

Shiza Naeem
02.10.2020, 13:21:22

Marilyn Lucero, Yeah that will be a great idea

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Emelia Doot
21.09.2020, 17:02:00

An inspiring short story....
I love it.... Thanks Mar

Marilyn Lucero
30.09.2020, 21:52:01

Emelia Doot, thank you soooo much for reading this one, too!

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Plume Alter
20.09.2020, 13:19:24

Ateee, you never failed to amaze me. This is an amazing story. It really shows reality especially in the justice system. This is one brave work. Congratulations!

Plume Alter
20.09.2020, 10:21:03

Plume Alter, But I honestly don't like the part where the main character , who have became a judge already, gave pardon to Cortez. hehehe. If I were him, I will never do that.

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Ayushi Gupta
07.09.2020, 16:30:33

Jamie Reyes or cortez ?? are they two different people or same

Marilyn Lucero
19.09.2020, 21:16:53

Ayushi Gupta, The ending shows that 10 years later, Charles Mejares becomes a judge. He grants pardon to Jaime Cortez, and thus, he was released from prison, instead of serving 20 to 30 years.

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Elyn Balio Kampilan
10.09.2020, 12:49:33

Thank you Author for this very nice story, but it is too short, I think there are more things/ scenes that have to be brought out or wrote.

Marilyn Lucero
10.09.2020, 10:10:08

Elyn Balio Kampilan, thank you so much for reading. I was almost tempted to elaborate this because I am used to writing long novels, even 300 chapters a book.

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Anastasia Musa
08.09.2020, 12:44:04

It’s such a nice short story.

Marilyn Lucero
09.09.2020, 00:15:24

Anastasia Musa, that's wonderful to know. I'll check your books.:-)

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Genda Barbero
08.09.2020, 04:33:32

Congrats. Love it.

Marilyn Lucero
08.09.2020, 02:06:57

Genda Barbero, thank you so much.

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HypGothic
24.08.2020, 11:57:29

oh I'm loving it. You are such a wonderful writer. So descriptive. I'm fascinated to read what comes next.

HypGothic
08.09.2020, 01:48:49

Marilyn Lucero, xo

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Rosita Carvajal
04.09.2020, 13:02:22

added to my library..

Marilyn Lucero
05.09.2020, 11:45:23

Rosita Carvajal, please message me on Facebook.

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Ayushi Gupta
25.08.2020, 13:51:53

update plz

Marilyn Lucero
03.09.2020, 12:42:59

Ayushi Gupta, it's okay. Wildflower is also a wonderful story.

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Jed
03.09.2020, 10:56:10

Very good!

Marilyn Lucero
03.09.2020, 07:57:03

Jed, Thank you so much, Jed.

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Roza Csergo
25.08.2020, 13:00:16

This piece shows how talented you are. Truly fantastic ♥

Marilyn Lucero
25.08.2020, 10:28:14

Roza Csergo, thank you. To receive a such inspiring compliment from an excellent writer is truly heartwarming.

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HypGothic
24.08.2020, 09:23:27

is it this one?

HypGothic
24.08.2020, 08:55:25

Marilyn Lucero, ohhhhhhhhhhhh yes!! :)

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Laisa Tikomaimaleya
23.08.2020, 22:05:46

Awww!... new book!...looking forward to read this Marilynn.

Marilyn Lucero
23.08.2020, 20:41:51

Laisa Tikomaimaleya, excited to hear from you again:-)

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Izzy
23.08.2020, 09:13:02

Omg! A new story!! Yasssss! I’m so excited it sounds so interesting :))

Marilyn Lucero
23.08.2020, 06:36:00

Izzy, Thank you so much!

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Izzy
23.08.2020, 09:13:41

Added to my library :)

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Ayushi Gupta
23.08.2020, 08:18:43

love the story ❤️ I simply love ur books

Ayushi Gupta
23.08.2020, 06:01:24

Marilyn Lucero, ❤️❤️

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