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Don't Belong

Riya Sarkar

Story about:billionare, steamy romance, humor

Age restriction: 18+

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#895 in Romance
#423 in Billionaires


Complete 165 pages

Publication: 24.08.2020 — 20.04.2021
Contests: My love, my billionaire


Description of book "Don't Belong"

- A story of an aspiring author who has been hiding from the world and creates her own imagination into fiction fulfilling her fantasies until the arrogantly sinister Aiden Hyde the infamous billionaire bastard comes into her life and from then changes everything from ordinary to something more ecstatic. Fulfilling her dreams she only imagined. Will Aiden be able to make her wishes true or will he show her more dreams which can't be fulfilled by him?

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Kitti
10.06.2021, 07:07:46

I like the story very much. The characters of Ayden and Emma are well developed. And the writing style is beautiful

Riya Sarkar
10.06.2021, 08:05:33

Kitti, Thank you so much ^_^

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Mahamotha Khatun
15.05.2021, 12:43:17

I just finished reading this story & I am feeling like read it again , I will read it again , it's an amazing story with awesome characters , & fantastic scene , it's content is very nice & has a well written quality , author u r just awesome , ur skill is very impressive , those who read it , they have to say that ur stories r really worthy of reading & thank u for writing such an amazing story , loved it so much

Mahamotha Khatun
15.05.2021, 19:30:06

Riya Sarkar, welcome , I really love it

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anthony ijeoma
20.04.2021, 12:34:32

nice

Riya Sarkar
08.05.2021, 11:47:31

anthony ijeoma, Thank you so much

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missy t
20.04.2021, 08:49:48

The female lead is stupid to the point I would like to blow up the universe. Her logic and actions frustrates me as a reader. Nothing in her thought process makes sense. I feel sorry for the male lead character. His instant obsession is weirdly covered with a longing for love.

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Mahamotha Khatun
18.04.2021, 20:22:34

Emma is really stubborn , good luck Aiden

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Grace Grayson
18.03.2021, 10:00:12

The spacing of your narration and the format was also good (I'm using mobile). The italics were a great way to punctuate whatever you want readers to remember, and as someone with poor eyesight, the spacing is appreciated.

I would add though, that it would look more organized if new/added dialogues get their own paragraph.
There's also a few choice words you used that may not be appropriate because of how its used and the stigma around it, like "bipolar". I know that what our characters say/do don't wholly reflect our opinions, but it helps to be socially aware as writers (so that not only can we write better, but so we can also stop perpetuating harmful stereotypes).


Lastly, thank you for checking out my book :)

Grace Grayson
18.03.2021, 10:22:59

Riya Sarkar, ( •͈ᴗ•͈)

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Grace Grayson
18.03.2021, 09:59:45

Late to the party but hey! Congrats on getting a commercial account.
I've only read up to the fifth chapter so my review is very limited.
I agree with everyone, your cover suits the book well.
There's the established tension right from the get go that only increased as I read through the chapters.
Steamy :)
The fifth chapter ended with some conflict between Emma and the billionaire, which I think would help convince more potential buyers.

The banter is a great opening and sets the tone for the rest of the book; I like how her friends are impulsive but not totally reckless. They knew the dangers and so did Emma (tho Em overlooked a few things). The importance of consent was also a good add, I've come across way too many that romanticize really questionable stuff.
You have a reader that said something about characters being relatable and realistic. I think so too. Your characters aren't that one dimensional (I'm yet to see more from the Billionaire but that's understandable since I haven't read the whole book), and I really like Molly. Women who are drunk and tipsy that can still knock some sense into you are bad-ass *-*

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Наталия Арчер
26.02.2021, 12:18:47

Hi! I've read only the free part yet. But want to share some of my thoughts :-)
The last chapter (the fifth) ended interestingly. I am curious to know how he will find her and explain his behavior. :-) I feel that the story will be engrossing. Though it's too much cursing for my taste.)
The cover is nice. Beautiful fonts for the title.
Thank you!

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Ayushi Jain
20.02.2021, 22:11:19

WOW, such a beautiful cover! And Riya, I always knew you can do this. I'm so happy for you. One of the most amazing writers I've ever seen. This book is a masterpiece and I'd advice everyone to read this! ❤❤

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Shruti Kurup
19.02.2021, 21:08:27

Trailer is fab and the cover is brilliant. I can’t wait to binge into this

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Bella Lost
18.02.2021, 20:46:45

The cover is amazing, and I have read another story from this amazing author, and I can say that I was with each chapter on the edge...

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LexiAnderson
18.02.2021, 10:04:45

Wow! The cover looks amazing

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Sana Vibhore
18.02.2021, 09:41:19

I love this chapter

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Sana Vibhore
18.02.2021, 09:40:56

I like the story so far...

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Sana Vibhore
18.02.2021, 09:40:29

Trailer is also awesome

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Sana Vibhore
18.02.2021, 09:40:16

What a beautiful cover... ?

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Simran Rathore
18.02.2021, 08:42:35

nice story...looking forward to read more story like this

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Chibi Cazielle
17.02.2021, 19:39:50

The book is truly amazing. The characters and their personality are well made. The plot of the story is very intriguing. You hooked me- if only I wasn't busy, I might have read it in one sitting. And like I also said, I can really relate to Emma in a lot of ways. I only read the free parts and I was really left hanging. I wonder what happened to Aiden, why he acted like that. Anyway, the only thing I noticed that you can improve on is the spacing of each dialogue. It would be nice if you can make it uniform. Keep on writing girl! Love Lots! ❤

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Chibi Cazielle
17.02.2021, 07:20:59

I can really relate to Emma. A girl who wakes up late - who has pushy friends for me to experience life and well... lol... I'm finding it hard to find a man. I'm still into old kind of love.

Riya Sarkar
17.02.2021, 07:35:28

Chibi Cazielle, Definitely hard for women like Emma LOL

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DreamerM
14.02.2021, 13:08:39

hi...firstly thats a great beginning....keep writing
and i just want to ask whether this book will be free or not?
once again ...keep writing...lots of love

Riya Sarkar
15.02.2021, 15:47:04

Manjot Kaur, LOL thank you so much

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Shahwar Fatima
12.02.2021, 16:17:43

Great.. you write in such a smooth way... I like the story... different from typical ones .

Riya Sarkar
12.02.2021, 16:58:39

Shahwar Fatima, Thank you so much, that means a lot. Do check my other books too if you like mystery ;)

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Beata Gos
06.02.2021, 13:12:00

Emma's behavior is understandable, she being a nerd as to relationship

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Beata Gos
06.02.2021, 12:24:01

Nice terrain of events

Riya Sarkar
06.02.2021, 13:11:20

Beata Gos, I'm glad you are liking it so far :) which Chapter are you on?

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Beata Gos
06.02.2021, 09:00:29

I do love the chasing

Riya Sarkar
06.02.2021, 10:54:20

Beata Gos, I kinda liked that too ;)

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Savannah Amermaid
29.01.2021, 10:22:10

He care about her that's all but she need sometime

Riya Sarkar
29.01.2021, 20:01:41

Savannah Amermaid, Hope you read till the end *wink*

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Savannah Amermaid
29.01.2021, 09:49:32

A hot possessive billionaire I guess

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Savannah Amermaid
29.01.2021, 09:42:34

loved this chapter I was waiting impatiently for this lovely book's update ❤

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Syeda Noorah
29.01.2021, 08:17:31

Nice story but it ended...unforgettable my lovely cuties aiden and emma...i will really missed them

Riya Sarkar
29.01.2021, 09:40:23

Syeda Noorah, Me too *crying*

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Pooja Singh
28.01.2021, 20:25:09

Nicc story

Riya Sarkar
29.01.2021, 05:38:05

Pooja Singh, Thank you so much *kisses* please put a follow on my profile for more story updates.

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Syeda Noorah
28.01.2021, 18:03:37

Awww so sweet...Finally he confessed...the story is getting very very interesting. ..Waiting for further updates..

Riya Sarkar
28.01.2021, 19:47:21

Syeda Noorah, It's complete thanks for staying with me on this journey. Do follow my profile for more story updates. *kisses*

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Syeda Noorah
27.01.2021, 08:03:09

I didn't expect it to happen...getting interesting. ..waiting for further updates

Riya Sarkar
27.01.2021, 11:30:10

Syeda Noorah, It's coming to an end... *crying*

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Tina Edoho
24.01.2021, 15:08:56

nice write up

Riya Sarkar
24.01.2021, 15:58:43

Tina Edoho, Thanks. Please do put a follow too, for helping me out.

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savi santana
23.01.2021, 20:00:31

omg..this is so so so sad amd and heartbreaking

Riya Sarkar
23.01.2021, 20:45:09

savi santana, I know right... I wish I could send a crying emoji here

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Nyssa Quadros
23.01.2021, 18:11:35

Hey Riya,

Just read about two chapters (might read more later) and I have to say you have skill when it comes to writing natural dialogue and it really shows. Besides it is incredibly easy to read. These are aspects I have seen a lot of authors (including an amateur like myself) struggle with but I think you have it down quite well...

If there is one suggestion I would give, it would be to focus a little more on flow and add a bit of verbal imagery. (The latter is something I personally love in books and might be giving it a little undue weightage out of personal bias). Apart from this, I did spot a couple of grammatical errors but nothing that can't be fixed by a quick proof read

That being said, please do check out my book if you find the chance. I am still starting out and would really love your feedback given how different our writing styles are (you'll know what I'm talking about when you see it) if that's not too much trouble. Either way, all the very best !!

P.S: I did also notice that you have three ongoing books and I cannot quite wrap my head around how you do it. More power to you girl!!

Riya Sarkar
23.01.2021, 19:56:41

Nyssa Quadros, I will definitely work on your suggestions and will check out your book too. Thanks for your review

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Odun Ayo Godon
15.12.2020, 12:23:45

pls update fast can't wait

Riya Sarkar
18.01.2021, 13:46:11

Odun Ayo Godon, it's updated

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Savannah Amermaid
11.09.2020, 20:46:28

This was so hot

Riya Sarkar
11.09.2020, 21:23:10

Savannah Amermaid, More to come

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Alex admin
11.09.2020, 19:08:32

Hello, please, change the description of the story so that it can be clear what is the story about and it could be accepted to the contest. Thanks.

Riya Sarkar
11.09.2020, 19:56:19

Alex, i did, please kindly check back and let me know. Yours sincerely.

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Anie Angel
11.09.2020, 08:26:52

I will support you anywhere Rii. Best of luck. I am kinda enjoying it too

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