It's about Aayush Subramanium, an average Indian man who is stuck in unusual wedlock. Soon the wedlock turns into his true love and as we all know that happiness does not stay forever, his so-called lush life turns into a mess when he is encountered with his ex-girlfriend. Soon his wedding reaches divorce and...
interesting, spelling and punctuation aside... the best advice I can give so far on the structure of you're story is hit the space bar once in a while or else you risk losing the reader. As for the story itself, you started strong, finish strong too
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I'm going to read this. I'm sure it will be amazing like the writer : )
sadaf, I doubt. I'm sure it will be interesting : )
interesting
Thank you so much
Thank you Dennis Norman
don´t stop
It is quite amazing. I m eagerly waiting for next part. ?
I love it
Thankyou ?
Vry good Story waiting for the nxt part
good story
some chapters have titles, other are going with numbers,why don't you organize it a little?
I am glad to,thank you Karoline Stars
interesting, spelling and punctuation aside... the best advice I can give so far on the structure of you're story is hit the space bar once in a while or else you risk losing the reader. As for the story itself, you started strong, finish strong too
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Thanks Londa cele?
translation of what was said in Hindi in brackets in English would have been nice
who's the trio? mom. aunt and in law? which one... mother in law?
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