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My Brother's Keeper

Payal Mandal

Story about:forbidden love, mafia, love and hate

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#200 in Billionaires
#96 in Contemporary Romance


Complete 242 pages

Publication: 07.05.2021 — 14.07.2021
Contests: Forbidden Love


Description of book "My Brother's Keeper"

"Don't you dare to touch me."
"Oh Really? Why would I listen to you? You are my wife, I can touch you wherever I want"

Lucian Frederick, an Australian mafia who is obsessed over a young and beautiful Nina Walker so much that he ends up abducting and marrying her. Soon his obsession develops into genuine feelings but that's when he finds out that she loves his brother Jasper, who has Schizophrenia which makes him question one thing, is it love that Nina has for Jasper or it's something else?

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Arethieyrah
14.07.2021, 09:00:49

So she will ended up with Jasper huh?

Payal Mandal guru
01.06.2022, 07:18:05

Mahamotha Khatun, ♥️

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Poonam Lunker
01.06.2022, 07:11:32

what a story...the best amongst all...i loved how strong you portrayed a woman's character...full marks on that.. beautiful characterization... beautiful plot..i wish we could have bonus chapters and i wish we have Lucian's story as well...great job author

Payal Mandal guru
01.06.2022, 07:17:55

Poonam Lunker, Thank you♥️
Do check out my other books, Psychopath's Wife, His Little Angel and Alpha's Lethal Love.
You may love them as well :)

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Sonia Chang
27.12.2021, 01:50:10

I love the story...

Payal Mandal guru
27.12.2021, 08:41:06

Sonia Chang, Thank you❤️
Do check out 'His Little Angel' as well :)

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Jharna
27.11.2021, 19:15:14

I love the story.
but I feel bad for lucian.
though he was a bad person.
but when he try to love he get betrayal.

Jharna
28.11.2021, 10:37:56

Payal Mandal, I have already purchased it

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Leah Sulatra
22.11.2021, 11:05:21

Lovely story, but I feel sad for Lucian to be in prison for life, a sad ending not every reader like to read. I had a long sigh after reaching THE END. Great piece of work.

Payal Mandal guru
28.11.2021, 03:55:50

Leah Sulatra, Thank you❤️
Do check out my other book, 'His Little Angel' as well :)

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Lakhan Sav
10.11.2021, 11:54:37

heyy author... will u conduct giveaway for this book and rukhsar..within few months... I'll wait.. ヾ(^-^)ノnow when I read ur 2 books I really want to read ur all books... ur all female characters are amazing.. fearless.. strong.. this make ur book soo daamn interesting..

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Lakhan Sav
10.11.2021, 13:31:29

Payal Mandal, I'm schl student so i can't buy it even if it will be on discount (T_T)

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Dark net
09.08.2021, 11:37:45

Good

Payal Mandal guru
27.09.2021, 12:36:07

Dark net, Hey, check out my other book, 'HIS LITTLE ANGEL'

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Jennifer Zeigler
16.07.2021, 06:16:19

It’s truly a beautiful story. Loved it ❤️

Payal Mandal guru
27.09.2021, 12:35:57

Jennifer Zeigler, Hey, check out my other book, 'HIS LITTLE ANGEL'

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Jacqueline Berridge
13.08.2021, 05:46:10

love this book

Payal Mandal guru
27.09.2021, 12:35:49

Jacqueline Berridge, Hey, check out my other book, 'HIS LITTLE ANGEL'

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Neha Garg
14.08.2021, 17:01:38

hey payal. I purchased this book And read till Ch 14. but from ch 15 it's not showing anything. I mean no written matter. only chapter name showing. what's wrong with it.

Payal Mandal guru
27.09.2021, 12:35:40

Neha Garg, Hey, check out my other book, 'HIS LITTLE ANGEL'

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Johanna Martinez
15.07.2021, 01:01:13

I loved the book. It was awesome.

Payal Mandal guru
27.09.2021, 12:35:30

Johanna Martinez, Hey, check out my other book, 'HIS LITTLE ANGEL'

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Sanskriti Kumar
21.09.2021, 10:13:00

Ah again an amazing story . Di every twist and turn has literally left me baffled . The story takes an unconventional route but I won't tell what . It is exciting and the chemistry and dynamics between the characters is constantly changing . You made sure we can't trust a single character in what they want. The dead and alive both. Who is responsible or who is the mastermind . The suspence remains intact and the message too. Nina is an unconventional female of a dark romance . She is sarcastic she is funny and caring at the same time . The boys they have a van of secrets attached to them which slowly get peeled off. If you want an dark romance that will not force you to question your sanity and will have justice intact this is the book for you. Awesome work . Love you

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Mantasha Sabir
17.09.2021, 19:02:07

This is story is quite impressive. I have always loved forbidden love stories and this book is something which contains all the mix up of forbidden love. I really fancy the authors way of portraying the scenes ,plots characters. I love the story writing. Nina is a fierce confident female lead. Jasper way of caring shows how humble he is. Lucian is the perfect mafia lead. I am quite much into the Fascination about the love triangle. Would love to read whom Nina chooses. At the end I would love to recommend this book to new readers.

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kriti mehta
17.09.2021, 17:21:51

From the free chapters I have read I can say that Nina is a very strong and independent female. She knows how to stand up for herself. I don't know what mystery she is hiding and what happened that night but it's commendable to put a smile on her face and carry on with your work. Lucien on the other hand came across as an obsessive lover who gets what he wants and doesn't take no for an answer where as Jasper is struggling with his mental health and hallucinations. I am quite curious to know about Megan and his relationship, how and when did she die.

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Swati Singh
17.09.2021, 10:15:13

I feel so bad for jasper he needs help & nina is the right person whom he needed.... I hve read till the free chpts so don't knw what hppns in end but plzzz don't let nina end with that lucian... may be he will have a change of heart....but still he forcefully marry her & love is smthing which can be forced....

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Sanskriti Kumar
17.09.2021, 09:26:33

How people don't let their sick family members get treated to save their reputation . How schizophrenia can be treated with right balance of medicines and love . Nina is right here men like Lucien don't respect their own mother let alone respecting other women for them women are just sexual toys to fulfill their needs meant to obey them . I want to read his growth where his own actions will take Nina away from him forever and he will be in deep shit. I want to read a beautiful growth in terms of how nina helps Jasper in his health issues and their love grows. Because love isn't about just being together in love it is being together in pain as well. I love how Mohit said how would you feel if someone did heinous things to your family members . So just because the victim is not related to you you can't just let them suffer. Nina is a breath of fresh air who will fight against the patriachal mindset and will come out of this darkness with her strength of character and conviction. Beautiful

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Sanskriti Kumar
17.09.2021, 09:20:27

Firstly what a compelling writing this is girl it is amazing how beautiful you have conveyed a story with conviction . The topic you choose is sensitive and once again none of it is caricaturish. Nina is a very natural confident and very relatable who will now bow to the miseries of her life who will fight back no matter what and make a path for herself despite the darkness. Her conservative parents and their dual standards who didn't even fight for their daughter and told her to adjust is the reality of so many houses. Their is a poignant contrast between Jasper and Lucien . While Jasper is a guy going through miseries but standing strong in front of it. Not loosing his morals is a guy anyone will dream to have . He is caring but not intruding ( A beautiful point that is highlighted). Cares for what Nina what what are her comforts and then there is Lucien who thinks women are objects to fulfill men's desires. Who doesn't respects them let alone love Nina. He is selfish , condescending and a character I have beginning to abhor because of his views and behaviour towards women . Moreover the highlights of mental illness are aptly described.

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Ritika Gupta
17.09.2021, 07:52:40

I love this book soo much. It is soo interesting. I was only able to read the free chapters but I am literally obsessed with the book just like Lucian is obsessed with Nina ;)
Till what I have read, I ship Jasper and Nina!! I find them cuteee together. But Lucian gives me those sugar daddy vibes ;)
I like Lucian's obsession stuffs but sometimes it does go to another level.
I want to read more?
I lovee this book soo much❤

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SHUBHAM KUMAR
27.08.2021, 21:13:02

Jasper explaination about marriage
just beautiful

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SHUBHAM KUMAR
27.08.2021, 20:56:42

sympathy for nina
and big claps for the author
wonderful storyline going on....

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Syeda Meherunnisa
15.08.2021, 18:42:28

nice

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Dipika Ojha
25.07.2021, 20:27:37

I hated Lucian whole time, he deserved that but in the last he did what he should....

Payal Mandal guru
26.07.2021, 05:10:54

Dipika Ojha, Yeah :p

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Nonkanyiso Bongeka
18.07.2021, 23:41:20

wow amazing story it is unique I love how Nina stands up for herself from bullies, like Lucian and i love the bond that Jasper and Nina have growing everyday, I want them to end up together and I can't go through I'm stuck in page 7 is there a way to unlock the chapters without paying?

Payal Mandal guru
19.07.2021, 01:02:55

Nonkanyiso Bongeka, You can reload your wallet for free by performing certain tasks :)

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Beautiful princess
14.07.2021, 15:05:37

NICE!!!!! but aleast i was hoping Lucian will be with some other girl and with a good behaviour and perfect happy ending for evry characters ...(^_^)

Beautiful princess
15.07.2021, 09:51:28

Payal Mandal, Yeah it was unexpected .... i love it (^_^)❤❤

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Zunish Khan
14.07.2021, 18:33:21

Finally Rebecca and mohit get their karma but they got an easy death.
First time i was feeling very bad for lucian but after all he did with Nina its not possible for her to move on with him.
Happy For jasper and Nina finally they both are happy in their lives. they fought with darkness but they get a happy life which they deserve.
moreover lucian is truly in love with her and making himself a better man
Ending was Awesome
Payal you did a great job. You bring every emotion in this story. Loved it (Heart) Looking forward to read more. Really appreciate your efforts

Payal Mandal guru
14.07.2021, 18:35:32

Zunish Khan, Thank You So Much ♥️♥️

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sofia rizoy
14.07.2021, 17:35:45

Author, I can't believe my favorite story has come to an end. A lot of bravo for this amazing story. Rebecca and Mohit arrived their punishment for doing a lot of bad. I couldn't believe with what I was reading that Lucian had changed and that's what I really liked. Nina and Jasper finally together happy.

Payal Mandal guru
14.07.2021, 17:46:52

sofia rizoy, Thank you so much♥️♥️

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Mahamotha Khatun
14.07.2021, 16:56:24

I am happy for Jasper & Nina but little sad for Luc

Payal Mandal guru
14.07.2021, 17:46:41

Mahamotha Khatun, ♥️♥️

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Darsha riti
14.07.2021, 15:47:46

A perfect ending... Everyone has got their punishment...Lucian is changed now and feeling guilt...great... finally nina have a happy life with Jasper... This story can inspire many as it tells us that we can't ever fall in love with our abuser.. never ever... Life is not a fairytale..be practical be mature.. that's how we should live our life... Nd if we are in darkness we can fight it, we can fight it on our own, it just needs a strong will

Payal Mandal guru
14.07.2021, 17:46:30

Darsha riti, Thank you♥️

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Piyu Aggarwal
14.07.2021, 13:37:44

Perfect ending
lucian ko apke hisse ki saza milgyi
jasper nina ab ek normal happy life jee payenge
without any worries
nina lucian ko maaf krdi shi ki use maaf krna bhi zruri tha uske khudke peace of mind k liye

Payal Mandal guru
14.07.2021, 14:26:42

Piyu Aggarwal, Thank you so much♥️

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Chibi Cazielle
14.07.2021, 13:19:27

The power of TRUE LOVE ❤️ this is such a wonderful book ❤️ I love the ending.

Payal Mandal guru
14.07.2021, 13:22:35

Chibi Cazielle, Thank you so much ♥️

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Sai Haritha
14.07.2021, 12:17:18

who did she end up with? Lucien or Japser...

Payal Mandal guru
14.07.2021, 12:23:03

Sai Haritha, It's mentioned in the Epilogue ;)

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Saloni Seth
14.07.2021, 11:15:49

woww just an amazing ending... the way Lucian acceptes his mistake and changee himself... it was fabulous

Payal Mandal guru
14.07.2021, 11:33:04

Saloni Seth, Thank you :)

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Piyu Aggarwal
14.07.2021, 10:21:00

lucian surrendered woww
pdhte hue goosebumps feel hue aj emotions pain love revenge self reflection realisation or jaane kitne saare emotions the idhr
well written bhn ........

Payal Mandal guru
14.07.2021, 10:49:36

Piyu Aggarwal, Thank you so much bhn :)

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Saloni Seth
14.07.2021, 08:30:45

Finally Rebecca is dead

Payal Mandal guru
14.07.2021, 09:18:09

Saloni Seth, :)

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Arethieyrah
14.07.2021, 09:00:49

So she will ended up with Jasper huh?

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Mahamotha Khatun
14.07.2021, 07:35:15

I am crying so much

Payal Mandal guru
14.07.2021, 07:36:11

Mahamotha Khatun, This isn't a sad ending :(

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sofia rizoy
13.07.2021, 20:09:57

Author what an amazing, fantastic chapter it was there are no words to be characterized. I loved Nina and all the power to take on the Rebecca for everything she's done, but also to expose the traitor Mohit. Now it's time for Lucian to be arrested by the police, but with him they'll take Rebecca because they've done a lot of bad things. Author, I'm very sad because my favorite story is coming to an end and I hope Nina and Jasper have a happy ending.

Payal Mandal guru
13.07.2021, 20:53:19

sofia rizoy, let's see what happens in the last chapter ;)

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Zunish Khan
13.07.2021, 18:35:21

The most awaited confessions. Nina you rocked it girl. One of the strongest female lead. loved it the way she is slaying and showing everything to Lucian and jasper i am enjoying it. now Rebecca and mohit realize they did a huge mistake by choosing nina for all of this.
ok lucian is genuine fall for her but its too late now She is not belonging to her anymore. What will happen to rebecca and mohit anxiously waiting to know it (wink)

Payal Mandal guru
13.07.2021, 20:52:44

Zunish Khan, oh you would love their fate :p

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Darsha riti
13.07.2021, 16:40:01

The most awaited part... All are exposed now... I was waiting for this since ever... finally nina would be able to breath again with full freedom..hufff
Jasper is with her... nd Lucian realised his mistakes bs they should get their punishments as well... Everything which Nina endured..for all that they must be punished

Payal Mandal guru
13.07.2021, 16:43:09

Darsha riti, They will be :p

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Heavenly
13.07.2021, 09:38:41

OMG

Payal Mandal guru
13.07.2021, 16:42:55

Heavenly, :p

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Mahamotha Khatun
13.07.2021, 08:27:36

I am speechless

Payal Mandal guru
13.07.2021, 08:38:48

Mahamotha Khatun, Whoops :p

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Piyu Aggarwal
13.07.2021, 08:04:07

no words bhn itna acha part tha k smjh ni aar
a kya bola jaaye
Rebecca mohot exposed jasper nina ki galtfami dur hue lucian ka guilt police
waiting flr next

Payal Mandal guru
13.07.2021, 08:38:41

Piyu Aggarwal, :p

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Innayat Hussain
13.07.2021, 07:47:56

wow, ... I read two chapters and it's interesting... nice expression of feeling

Payal Mandal guru
13.07.2021, 08:38:26

Innayat Hussain, Thank you♥️

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Saloni Seth
13.07.2021, 06:55:56

Super amazing part

Payal Mandal guru
13.07.2021, 08:38:17

Saloni Seth, Thank you :)

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Chibi Cazielle
12.07.2021, 20:30:20

This is sooooo intense! Oh my gosh!
Goodbye manipulative mother! Go to hell alone!

Payal Mandal guru
13.07.2021, 05:02:17

Chibi Cazielle, :p

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Darsha riti
12.07.2021, 16:34:40

Oo my...Lucian...Kya yar..puri disha badal di...such a great change in him..it was unexpected...nd i loved nina's last dialogue hehehe...Bold and bitch...Wohooo... Now Rebecca should just back out..huhh

Payal Mandal guru
12.07.2021, 16:51:15

Darsha riti, :p

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Beautiful princess
12.07.2021, 07:16:29

So Nina will end up with Jasper ..?

Beautiful princess
12.07.2021, 14:20:16

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Niharika Nafisa
12.07.2021, 12:14:21

What did just happen? Such a big change in Lucian! Or in your mind? I know what's cooking in your mind but not the whole recipe obviously. I hope you remember the recipe too. (Ghoorne wala emoji)

Payal Mandal guru
12.07.2021, 13:14:42

Niharika Nafisa, I forgot the recipie (Rone wala emoji)

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sofia rizoy
12.07.2021, 12:11:03

Thank you author for the update. Author very nice chapter. I loved that Nina had power and went up against Rebecca . I hope Jasper and Nina are together and Lucian doesn't get between them.

Payal Mandal guru
12.07.2021, 13:14:06

sofia rizoy, Let's see what happens next ;)

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Piyu Aggarwal
12.07.2021, 09:32:53

oh to lucian ko nina ka jasper k liye pyaar dikha waah ye to new chiz hue
sb ekdusre k liye marne ko rdy hore waah
Rebecca k to spne hi tut gye bechari tsk tsk........

Payal Mandal guru
12.07.2021, 11:42:29

Piyu Aggarwal, :p

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