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My Brother's Keeper

Payal Mandal

Story about:forbidden love, mafia, love and hate

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Ranking:
#5 in ChickLit
#41 in Contemporary Romance


Ongoing: 17 Jun 126 pages

Publication: 07.05.2021 — ...
Contests: Forbidden Love


Description of book "My Brother's Keeper"

"Don't you dare to touch me."
"Oh Really? Why would I listen to you? You are my wife, I can touch you wherever I want"

Lucian Frederick, an Australian mafia who is obsessed over a young and beautiful Nina Walker so much that he ends up abducting and marrying her. Soon his obsession develops into genuine feelings but that's when he finds out that she loves his brother Jasper, who has Schizophrenia which makes him question one thing, is it love that Nina has for Jasper or it's something else?

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sofia rizoy
17.06.2021, 20:07:18

Very nice writer's chapter I'm looking forward to the next chapter and I definitely want to know jasper's past if he looks like Lucian in deeds too. Now the title of the book will be clarified.

Payal Mandal
17.06.2021, 17:15:14

sofia rizoy, let's see ;)

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Darsha riti
17.06.2021, 17:37:33

Oo my..what is happening suddenly... Story me twist :D what's Jasper's past... nd jasper should understand nina in this matter..

Payal Mandal
17.06.2021, 16:33:09

Darsha riti, Let's see what happens ;)

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Piyu Aggarwal
17.06.2021, 14:55:44

jasper ki jealousy ye glt h wo khud bhi janta h k nina ko shonk ni chadha tha mrs lucian bnne ka to fr jls kahe hona
megan shi hai uski point out ki baaton me wazan h and humko to abhi pata v nahi k jasper ksa tha past me or past me hua kya h exactly to jasper ko good boy smjhne ki glti ni krenge
haam suffer kr rha h wo jante bt usne kya kia h wo ni jante
and ye bndi kon h jo nina ko dhmka rhi kis wjh se kr ri or kha kaam kr ri nina iska
chalo lucian shant hai achi baat hai
Brother's keeper??????????

Payal Mandal
17.06.2021, 12:42:06

Piyu Aggarwal, :p

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Mahamotha Khatun
17.06.2021, 14:27:24

I wanna know about his past maybe he is also like his bro

Payal Mandal
17.06.2021, 12:41:41

Mahamotha Khatun, maybe :p

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Beautiful princess
17.06.2021, 14:14:50

Cant wait to know whts gona hppnn nxt !!!

Payal Mandal
17.06.2021, 12:41:30

Beautiful princess, ;)

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Siya Rajpoot
17.06.2021, 13:34:10

so here comes the Book title.
brother's keeper
poor lucian, he don't know that she is his brother's lover.
twist and turns again turns and twist, I am seriously enjoying this.

Payal Mandal
17.06.2021, 11:05:34

Siya Rajpoot, you will enjoy more :p

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Zunish Khan
17.06.2021, 12:53:43

Lucian cares for his brother and Nina. I can sense there are more deeper secrets about jasper. The way megan told about his past. Nina forget about the fact that lucian killed megan

Payal Mandal
17.06.2021, 11:04:43

Zunish Khan, ;)

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Chibi Cazielle
16.06.2021, 15:43:37

It's nice to know that Lucian cares for his brother. I thought he doesn't care about him. Nice :)

Payal Mandal
17.06.2021, 08:58:48

Chibi Cazielle, Whoops ;)

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Chibi Cazielle
16.06.2021, 15:31:25

I feel sad for Jasper... :(

Payal Mandal
16.06.2021, 13:01:40

Chibi Cazielle, me too :(

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Chibi Cazielle
16.06.2021, 15:49:28

I vote for Jasper. LOL!

Payal Mandal
16.06.2021, 13:01:17

Chibi Cazielle, he is cute though :p

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Chibi Cazielle
16.06.2021, 15:18:05

A strong woman. Go for it Nina!

Payal Mandal
16.06.2021, 12:23:48

Chibi Cazielle, :p

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Zunish Khan
15.06.2021, 18:14:18

Their feelings are gradually growing up. They both care for each other. There is a mystery about Nina too.

Payal Mandal
15.06.2021, 15:36:57

Zunish Khan, :)

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Darsha riti
15.06.2021, 15:52:26

Why didn't he tell about his hallucinations..han...

Payal Mandal
15.06.2021, 13:02:07

Darsha riti, Idk :p

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sofia rizoy
15.06.2021, 14:33:06

Amazing author story !!!! Nina has to be a couple with Jasper to be happy.Lucian is very bad he has not treated her well.He is to blame for what his brother suffered .I expected that Lucian would be to blame for Megan's death and forcing his own brother to suffer from mental illness. I do not believe it. I am looking forward to the next chapter author.

Payal Mandal
15.06.2021, 11:34:09

sofia rizoy, Thank you so much :)

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Piyu Aggarwal
15.06.2021, 09:21:55

ye part soft hai swt sa
and jasper ki feelings esa lgra k kuch gzb gdbd hone waali
and hallucinations k baare me nahi btaya
shyd wo megan ko reality manta h isliye nahi btaya
megan iti easily nahi jaayegi or na hi jasper itni asaani se use jaane dega
waiting for nxt

Payal Mandal
15.06.2021, 06:22:24

Piyu Aggarwal, ;)

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Mahamotha Khatun
15.06.2021, 08:31:01

omg , forbidden love , crying

Payal Mandal
15.06.2021, 05:35:03

Mahamotha Khatun, ;)

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Zunish Khan
14.06.2021, 15:53:38

Wait What! Lucian killed Megan just because she ended up with his brother Like seriously. He is pathetic psychopath.

Payal Mandal
14.06.2021, 13:25:57

Zunish Khan, :p

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Joe Fletcher
14.06.2021, 10:24:39

very well written. this book is keeping me on the edge. Can't wait for the climax

Payal Mandal
14.06.2021, 08:29:56

Joe Fletcher, Thank you :)

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Manogyna Marthi
14.06.2021, 10:01:10

a very nice book well written with all the emotions covered. I personally recommend to every one to buy it.

Payal Mandal
14.06.2021, 07:03:37

Manogyna Marthi, Thank you so much :)

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Rose Blaze
13.06.2021, 19:38:56

This story is something else, I didn't realize I have to read to the ninth chapter without doing anything else.
I got so hooked when Jasper character was introduced, Lucian should chill, he acts so domineeringly, I also love how clear the author was in describing the events.
I just love this book so much and I am adding it to my library

Payal Mandal
13.06.2021, 16:51:22

Rose Blaze, yaaay, thank you :)
Do read the entire book you will love it ;)

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Darsha riti
13.06.2021, 18:52:33

When I think this lucian can't stoop low further from this level.. he again proves me wrong... I mean seriously he liked megan and just because he couldn't get her, he killed her... Finally jasper will get treatment

Payal Mandal
13.06.2021, 16:06:44

Darsha riti, :p

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Riya Sarkar
13.06.2021, 10:16:23

Oh god... Lucian is very ignorant about his brother's health. He says that he cares and did all these things for him but actually he is just looking for himself and his reputation. He just doesn't want others to know how badly his brother is affected... he is okay with Jasper going mad in a room? What the hell! How are people even rooting for a character like Lucian!

Payal Mandal
13.06.2021, 07:54:32

Riya Sarkar, idk :p

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Mahamotha Khatun
13.06.2021, 10:09:33

this Lucian is a ............ I wanna beat him

Payal Mandal
13.06.2021, 07:53:45

Mahamotha Khatun, sure :p

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Saloni Seth
13.06.2021, 08:10:18

Lucian is giving me surprise

Payal Mandal
13.06.2021, 05:40:16

Saloni Seth, me too :p

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Piyu Aggarwal
13.06.2021, 06:56:06

chalo lucian maan to gya treatment k liye bt nina nashe me jo boli uska result bkwas hoga
dekhte lucian kya krta ab

Payal Mandal
13.06.2021, 04:04:11

Piyu Aggarwal, :p

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Zunish Khan
12.06.2021, 09:11:52

Details about Stockholm Syndrome

Payal Mandal
12.06.2021, 12:06:46

Zunish Khan, Welcome :)

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Zunish Khan
11.06.2021, 22:11:45

Oh Finally Lucian Is behaving good. Nina will heal Jasper soon. Ghost possessed denom. I wanna ask you about Stockholm Syndrome

Payal Mandal
11.06.2021, 23:28:30

Zunish Khan, Yeah ask :)

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Bookaddict
11.06.2021, 16:18:13

I must say your FL is strong. But the ML is to brutal.
a very intense story with thrilling plot.
enjoyed reading it.

Payal Mandal
11.06.2021, 14:12:00

Bookaddict, Do read the entire story to unravel their fates ;)

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Darsha riti
11.06.2021, 15:30:57

Ghost part... :p hihi... this one was fab.. nd when they said "what?" I was also like, "what?" Nina showed her courage..let's see what will she gain out of it..

Payal Mandal
11.06.2021, 13:13:30

Darsha riti, She is drunk that's why she has courage :v

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Saloni Seth
11.06.2021, 10:42:01

what??? i like this reaction of both

Payal Mandal
11.06.2021, 07:47:14

Saloni Seth, :p

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Piyu Aggarwal
11.06.2021, 07:10:15

So ye acha acha banne wali acting lucian ko sochne pr mjbur kr ri acha h socho socho ab tk jse yr nina ko treat kia or jo isne kia uski to vse bhi koi maafi ho nahi skti
Recover hope so jasper jldi recover kr ske
Waiting for next bhn
Janna av to is gudi gud demon ka reaction

Payal Mandal
11.06.2021, 05:15:45

Piyu Aggarwal, :p ghost possessed demon :p

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Mahamotha Khatun
11.06.2021, 06:05:36

me also what ???? I loved that ghost part , sweet possessed demon haha , love it dear

Payal Mandal
11.06.2021, 05:15:24

Mahamotha Khatun, Thank you :)

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Darsha riti
09.06.2021, 17:30:58

Ohh..yes some ghost must be possessing him...hahaha...Sudden changes is Lucian..Let's see ye kab tak rhta

Payal Mandal
10.06.2021, 04:22:51

Darsha riti, ;)

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Piyu Aggarwal
09.06.2021, 17:22:00

Lucian considering someone's words well that's something new bt chlo dekhte ye v
Waah nakli sweetness dikha ra ye to
Ab ese ekdm se acha acha behave kra ekdm se koi v smjhega k bhoot ghus gya h wrna ese log kabhi ni badal skte
Or ye bhi ni bdla bs ek nakab phn lia h kuch tym k liye

Payal Mandal
10.06.2021, 04:22:31

Piyu Aggarwal, Let's see ;)

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Zunish Khan
09.06.2021, 13:03:48

That ghost part was funny. Jasper is doing all this for nina's safety. who was on the phone call and talking about which videos?

Payal Mandal
09.06.2021, 10:23:34

Zunish Khan, Will get to know soon ;)

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Saloni Seth
09.06.2021, 10:44:38

this is unbelievable lucian is considering Jasper's words

Payal Mandal
09.06.2021, 10:23:17

Saloni Seth, :p

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Mahamotha Khatun
09.06.2021, 09:51:05

what happened to Jasper I am so egar to know

Payal Mandal
09.06.2021, 07:39:54

Mahamotha Khatun, :p

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Beautiful princess
09.06.2021, 08:10:09

Haha " lucian had been possessed by a ghost " :))

Beautiful princess
09.06.2021, 05:15:48

Payal Mandal, Thanks for the update!! i love itt❤❤

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Zunish Khan
08.06.2021, 01:25:42

14 parts completed and i am loving nina's confidence Tit for tat. thr bastards like Lucian deserves this. i am feeling bad for jasper. In his hallucinations megan is too much ughhh she made him so weak

Payal Mandal
08.06.2021, 01:15:03

Zunish Khan, :)

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Darsha riti
07.06.2021, 15:44:08

Jasper and Nina look comfortable together. They're able to take each-other's pain at least. Who was on that call now..

Payal Mandal
08.06.2021, 01:14:58

Darsha riti, :)

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Zunish Khan
07.06.2021, 13:50:57

Finally completed 8 parts
i am hating lucian such a bastard he is. who doesn't know how to respect a women and treat her like an object bloody mindset. Hope jasper will help nina. Nina is strong I am feeling happy how she kicked him he literally deserves this proud of nina

Payal Mandal
07.06.2021, 11:56:54

Zunish Khan, :))

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Zunish Khan
07.06.2021, 12:24:59

4 parts completed. Jesper is going through all this but overall he is a gentleman and sweet guy. His sweet gestures are enough to attract attention. Nina is going through something worst what happened with her i am just curious to know it. on the other side Guy like Lucian ughh they are bastards who even Don't now how to respect a girl.

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Saloni Seth
07.06.2021, 11:45:14

if i got a chance i will surely kill lucian

Payal Mandal
07.06.2021, 08:52:46

Saloni Seth, :p

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Zunish Khan
07.06.2021, 11:07:10

Finally Stated this Story Prologue was amazing Nina will surely Blast on Lucian. 1st part was interesting Lucian is quite a dangerous man But i was expecting it because he is a mafia leader. Jesper character is quite interesting I don't know much about his disease but hallucinations is so bad manh. Nina is strong Kind girl Hope she will get rid from problems

Payal Mandal
07.06.2021, 08:20:33

Zunish Khan, :)

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Piyu Aggarwal
07.06.2021, 08:31:46

Lucian ko koi pyar vyar ni hai nina se its like ek bigda hua bacha h jise har wo chiz chahiye jispr uski nazar pd jaaye insan ko v khilona smmjhta ye Jasper nina are Love Kon h ye jo phn kia nina ko jo nina ekdm darr gyi

Payal Mandal
07.06.2021, 05:41:22

Piyu Aggarwal, :p

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Mahamotha Khatun
07.06.2021, 04:26:59

now who is he ????

Payal Mandal
07.06.2021, 05:23:09

Mahamotha Khatun, let's see ;)

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Mahamotha Khatun
06.06.2021, 09:02:42

I think Lucian done something with Megan & that led her to die , that's why Jasper is also miserable now

Mahamotha Khatun
06.06.2021, 09:52:56

Payal Mandal, thank you

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Darsha riti
05.06.2021, 16:49:10

Well, on a serious note, I want to kill Lucian... He is a fu*king asshole...I just can't tolerate him... Nina and Jasper kissed...but jasper regretted it...nd nina is scared of whom..

Payal Mandal
06.06.2021, 01:30:09

Darsha riti, Let's see ;)

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Piyu Aggarwal
05.06.2021, 16:10:44

Lucian is scared waah
He ended up smiling but deserve to krta ni ye bnda smile krna
Chutiya shi me ese insan se to shaitan v pyaar na kre and iske aage jhukne se btr hoga dub k marr jana
This marriage was indeed a scam
love schme hume strong bna deta h bt whi love agar negative ho usme obsession ho to sb bigaad v skta h
Chlo acha h jasper apne khayalo se bhr nikla or khane k liye rdy hogya
Jaspr shnt h ab
And lucian k khwab khawab hi rhjane shi me
So moral of the story is k writer hume ni bta ri k lucian actually kya kia jasper k sath kita cruel hua k jaspr ki halt esi hogyi
Khair jasper ko yaad nhi hoga bhi kse
Bt ye lucian k alawa kon h jo bhagne baad nina ko pglayega
Waah kiss
Bt kiss? Abhi jasper k is action ka reaction kya hoga
Megan uske samne ni aayi?
2months lets see 2 months baad kuch kr v pata ya ni
Oops ab lucian kya react krega

Payal Mandal
05.06.2021, 13:26:49

Piyu Aggarwal, Sabka answer milega :p

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Saloni Seth
05.06.2021, 12:11:34

nina is scared of whom... who will hurt her more than lucian

Payal Mandal
05.06.2021, 11:51:28

Saloni Seth, Some sawa sher.. bigger than Lucian :p

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