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Opening of Secret in the forest Book One Unexpected find

Babs

Story about:fantasy, short story, crystals and spells

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#792 in Fantasy
#370 in Mystery


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Publication: 04.10.2019 — ...


Description of book "Opening of Secret in the forest Book One Unexpected find "

Fedor is exploring the Dark Forest, he uncovers a great secret which even his family did not know about. A strange cottage that has stood untouched for centuries. A place that echoes with a dark and terrible time in history.

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Babs 10.01.2020, 18:42:04

Titan's aunty's name has been changed from Perseus to Aether (Roughly pronounced Alferfee, Αἰθήρ. In English Upper sky) this is because there is also uncle Perseus and my editor thought it would cause some confusion. Also in Greek mythology Aether is the son of Erebus (Darkness), This is also Titan's grandmother's name, so it fits nicely and goes well with Hermes.

Babs 06.12.2019, 15:23:49

Update I have since split The Volt into parts it might change over the weekend once my editor has had a chance to look at it, I will keep you all updated. ^_^

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Babs 10.01.2020, 15:40:11

Mark Pearson, You're welcome. In the end my editor and I split the vault in to a three parter. I am trying to keep the chapter size down to between 5, 10 to 18 pages long. ^_^

Andy Rose 25.10.2019, 21:24:31

it is written so good that it's a great pleasure to read it

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Babs 10.01.2020, 15:37:13

Andy Rose, That makes me very happy to hear. I am currently working on chapter 20. I hope to it going for as long as possible ^_^

Dee Peric 06.12.2019, 14:03:55

the last chapter is quite long

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Babs 06.12.2019, 14:58:42

Dee Peric, Thanks for bringing this to my attention. I did not realise it was 22 pages. I might see if I can split it so that it is 10 to 12 pages long. I'll get my editor to lend a hand over the weekend to see what we can do as the Volt scene is in two parts. I am now concerning making it in to three parts or possibly four ^_^

Jeffrey Nighty 05.10.2019, 16:36:13

do you speak this language?

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Babs 27.11.2019, 11:14:19

Jeffrey Nighty, (giggle) Thanks ^_^

Tedd Kirsten 07.11.2019, 01:40:41

like it

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Babs 07.11.2019, 02:25:24

Tedd Kirsten, Glad to hear ^_^ Please click the like button.

Dorian Early 29.10.2019, 20:53:52

hope you'll continue

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Babs 30.10.2019, 09:21:25

Yes I am and hope to post the next chapter soon. Follow me and you will be alerted the moment I publish it ^_^

Hillary Owen 22.10.2019, 00:32:30

continue

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Babs 22.10.2019, 01:53:58

Hillary Owen, I am posting it as fast as I can ^_^

Kimberley Ostin 21.10.2019, 16:34:23

very interesting book, eagerly waiting for the continuation

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Babs 21.10.2019, 17:22:19

Kimberley Ostin, Waiting for a while yet as it is going to be a mini series :)

Goo Jim 07.10.2019, 17:46:44

the story I adore, with a profound meaning

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Babs 11.10.2019, 16:37:58

Goo Jim, Glad to hear it ^_^

David Tallman 06.10.2019, 18:14:07

a lot of mystery here

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Babs 11.10.2019, 16:37:25

David Tallman, Giggle so glad you say so, it means I'm doing a great job ^_^

Michelle Shelburn 04.10.2019, 19:31:02

this story is so different

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Babs 11.10.2019, 16:32:51

Michelle Shelburn, Thanks I thought I would try my hand at a bit of mystery ^_^

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