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Our Shocking First Night

S kajal

Story about:love marriage suspense divorce, shortstory

Rating:
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Ranking:
#13 in Short stories
#23 in Inspiration romance


Complete 16 pages

Publication: 26.01.2022 — 01.02.2022


Description of book "Our Shocking First Night"

Avni, after her wedding, on her first night asked for "DIVORCE" from her husband . Though,it was a "love-cum-arrange" marriage still she was asking for something like this which was very unexpected for her husband.
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• What's the reason behind it?
• After knowing the reason, will her husband be ever get ready to give her "Divorce"?

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Lynn Austria
12.06.2022, 11:42:17

Thank you very much, I like the story ?????

S kajal
13.06.2022, 15:56:50

Lynn Austria, Thanks :-)

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Laila Naseem
07.06.2022, 08:50:29

Bless u

S kajal
13.06.2022, 15:56:40

Laila Naseem, u too dear :-)

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Sanju sharma
25.02.2022, 18:06:22

So beautiful..... the way you wrote ...

Sanju sharma
25.02.2022, 18:38:24

S kajal, oh myyyyyy!

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Sanju sharma
25.02.2022, 18:37:42

Beautiful...

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Sanju sharma
25.02.2022, 18:31:09

She doesn't have any disease, right?

S kajal
25.02.2022, 18:33:07

Sanju sharma, No..!! The reason is clearly mentioned.. :-|

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Nora Amburgo Cortez
23.02.2022, 14:44:09

The best tools
in relationship are trust, honest, faithful and respect to each other

S kajal
23.02.2022, 14:52:41

Nora Amburgo Cortez, Crct :-)

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Pavitra Chavan
03.02.2022, 03:12:43

such a sweet story

S kajal
03.02.2022, 04:03:09

Pavitra Chavan, Thank you :-)

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Arshita Navin
02.02.2022, 17:52:13

It's actually a short and intresting story. A just wigh it could extend a few more pages but nevermind I still fully enjoyed it and would definitely expect more from you( but a little longer one).. Loved it :)

S kajal
02.02.2022, 18:20:32

Arshita Navin, Will surely try and Thank you :-)

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Daniels Elizabeth
01.02.2022, 23:12:02

am honored. I'll love to read more of your stories, don't stop writing

S kajal
02.02.2022, 08:02:48

Daniels Elizabeth, :-) :-)

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Priya Singh
02.02.2022, 07:31:49

it's an awesome book
lots of appreciations n support author
will be waiting to read other awesome stories by you

S kajal
02.02.2022, 08:02:37

Priya Singh, Thank you for your kind words.. :-)

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Daniels Elizabeth
01.02.2022, 22:46:34

congrats on your first story. I enjoyed it. nice work author

S kajal
01.02.2022, 22:50:48

Daniels Elizabeth, Thank you Ma'am...I wanted to write your name as well in the thanks giving .But didn't write as I thought what if u get offended.. :-(...Because you were the biggest motivator through out the journey of this story...

So a special thanks to you... :-)

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Akash Hosen Akash
01.02.2022, 21:40:13

as ur 1st story I really enjoy it.... keep it up don't stop writing... . hope u gave us another interesting story....

S kajal
01.02.2022, 22:01:11

Akash Hosen Akash, Thank you for your kind words.. :-)

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Daniels Elizabeth
30.01.2022, 18:50:13

I hope she's not about to die, it's something the two of them can handle as couple.

S kajal
30.01.2022, 20:58:04

Daniels Elizabeth, I hope so too :-(

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Daniels Elizabeth
29.01.2022, 18:54:37

wish the remain together. I like them

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Daniels Elizabeth
29.01.2022, 18:16:40

am just curious why she wants divorce the same day she got married

S kajal
29.01.2022, 18:33:20

Daniels Elizabeth, Within one or two parts it will be revealed as it is just a short story... :-)

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maame himah
27.01.2022, 23:14:24

Your story seems interesting. Please update soon

S kajal
28.01.2022, 07:48:09

maame himah, Thank you..sure. :-)

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Daniels Elizabeth
27.01.2022, 11:52:45

she better have a good reason for ruining their wedding night. nice beginning

S kajal
27.01.2022, 18:01:19

Daniels Elizabeth, Thank you.. :-)

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