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The Vale


Story about:
first love, segregation, parenthood


26 18 2518

#127 in Science fiction

On Hold: 11 Feb 31 pages

Publication: 05.12.2018 — ...
Contests: Small Towns Big Stories

Description of book "The Vale"

The Factory Provides.
In the all-male community of SunVale, Cole Anderson has an ordinary life, living with his brothers and father in a town surrounded by a high wall. The factory at the edge of town provides him with everything he needs. That is until a child is dropped on his doorstep, and he is pulled into the adventure of his life as he seeks to answer the ultimate question: where do babies come from?

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Total number of threads: 9

Yara Nasser 16.03.2019, 10:07:46

The book is so good I don’t have any idea how could I complete reading it ?? Please inform me

Corrine Couey 07.02.2019, 11:55:51

please, update

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Mydnyteraven 11.02.2019, 20:31:28

Corrine Couey, Posted! Many apologies. Please enjoy!

Kelli Callahan 27.12.2018, 18:46:27

even better then I expected

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Mydnyteraven 27.12.2018, 21:03:20

Thank you, that is high praise

Anna Morrigan 21.12.2018, 16:06:58

this story is too good

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Anna Morrigan 24.12.2018, 17:02:11

Mydnyteraven, thank you for your story

Linsey Smith 22.12.2018, 16:14:35

congrats, you write great

Fina Abaerazuela 13.12.2018, 04:56:05

Hope you update more, Ms. A!

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Mydnyteraven 13.12.2018, 17:49:19

More coming as soon as I write it!

Fina Abaerazuela 13.12.2018, 04:55:46

Hope you update more, Ms. A!

Mydnyteraven 11.12.2018, 03:49:56

I just want to thank everyone who has read this so far. The Vale is really rough and I know it. If anyone has any questions, or if I have made some mistakes or left out important stuff, I am happy to clarify and make changes as necessary.
Again, I’m really happy to have gotten so many reads on so few chapters, and if you enjoy, it would me a lot to me for you guys to hit that “like” button.

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Tasha Nickolson 11.12.2018, 17:54:41

Mydnyteraven, thank you for this beautiful story!

Tasha Nickolson 05.12.2018, 14:01:58

is it a christmas joke of his father??

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Mydnyteraven 11.12.2018, 03:35:22

Thank you so much for reading this!

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