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#101 in Contemporary Romance
#77 in Romantic suspense
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278 pages
08.10.2022 — 20.02.2023
373 comments
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Log inI came here to comment but I have no words to describe how I am feeling. I am emotional and speechless. I feel something in my heart, dont know what that is. A strong feeling, like I am very happy because this book is outstanding and intriguing. I am sad with the events in their lives, their sufferings. I am grateful to God and to you for giving me the chance to read this fantastic book.
After every chapter, I feel that it is the best chapter but I am surprised by the next chapter. Dear author, you are truly magical. You have produced a marvellous piece..an actual plot, a story which keeps one hooked since beginning and promises the readers a rollercoaster journey of many emotions.
There are many overhyped books with the same story line but this book is truly a beauty, so unique, so different from the rest.
After reading few chapters, I need a break of few days before continuing it because I am so overwhelmed by the emotions.
I wish to have your autograph if we meet ever in future.
gratus sum, That's really very kind of you, I wish you all the good in the world, dear reader.
This book deserves so many stars..millions, billions of stars.
It is such an outstanding book. The story is so mindblowing.
Not the usual riff-raff mafia stories but an actual plot, an amazing story line.
Well done, author.
You are such a versatile writer.
where can we get the complete story
Sarah Brown, Thanks
The best part of the story is...that it is the best story.
there are only 20 chapters where are other chapters?
Raman, the book is open for editing, that's why only free chapters are visible to you
Wow.... thank u for this beautiful ending and Love this story a lot....
will it remain free???
As always,your stories are amazing!!! Will there be any bonus chapter or is this the end?
it was an awesome book!!! thanks.
Tammy Heccker, I am happy to know that u liked it
a thousand times thank you dear for making me part of this incredible journey!
i wish I could do more cause this story like all your stories are splendid!
thank you again dear author!
Heartfixer, Dear, the pleasure is all mine
Oh no Sarah ! You should do some bonuses ! Can’t end like this . Please
Fair Lady, When I had created Mia's character, sje was just a college girl, a girl chasing her freedom. She evolved with time, and became a businesswoman but I couldn't change her more.
Besides, this books and its plot was not ordinary, so how could I end it with a cliche? I hope you will understand why I didn't drag it.
Congratulations author!!! Finally a happy ending!!! Thank you!! It was nice to meet Mia and Tim and their love story!!!
please update
please update
update please author
So beautiful… finally they both get to an happy ending!!!!
Let’s hope no one comes between these 2 lovers and beautiful couple
I am loving this protective Tim.
wishing all the best in their new journey together!
did I cry? yes.
did my heartbeat skip a beat? yes
why? cause when author Sarah BROWN decide to make a story my heart goes on rollercoaster.
I never aspected this way!
everything was so good put on!
THIS STORY DESERVE THOUSANDS OF STARS AND COMMENT!
EXCELLENT JOB AUTHOR!
Heartfixer, yes , her books are always amazing
Bvv guys!!! It’s always good to heve around an elderly person!!!
Lol ! Let’s give give it to Noah !
wow this short chapter make me laugh out loud!
PLEASE READERS READ IT NOW AND YOU WILL KNOW IT WHY I LAUGHED.
I am waiting the next chapter!
Finally, I completed the chapters about the flashback.
Woah..
Their past was so touching and heartbreaking!!
Wow...quite an interesting Wedding one could say.... happy for both of them.....
i’m so so happy!!!
Both of then experienced pain but now they are together. I am happy for them
you are cruel and i like it ;)
Yupiiiii…. Was about time,Tim!!! What took you so long!! Im sooo happy for you too!!!
Finally :))))
Happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What a beautiful turn of events ! Love it . Was Noah acting all this time ? Why is their mom and Mia grandpa not surprised and instead smiling when the sky is falling down ?
Aww .. am so hapyytgg
more than happy
Finally the long awaited twist and the beginning of their love story.... Happy wedding to Tim and Mia ...thank u author....
hahaha...i am really happy that she choose him, Tim was really fool and he was coward real one. hehehe..i am really happy after this chapter
i am a t chapter 51 and is blowing my mind as all you stories dear author. i give a peek to recent chapter please don't do that to Tim!
Sarah Brown, your fault! that invitation was so tempted and God makes me read in one breath all chapters!
can’t happen! please
I hope at least Tim will find love . And not Mia divorcing and going to him after she is heartbroken.
Tim is a hot guy whom ever woman would dream about. Not sure why he failed to fifth for Mia, may be it in as never meant to be . Tim deserves the best and not a divorcee .
I feel for Mia , she However made her choice . Hope she makes it rather than sulking on her wedding day . I however wished it was Mia and Tim and Noah as their best man .
I hope at least Tim will find love . And not Mia divorcing and going to him after she is heartbroken.
Tim is a hot guy whom ever woman would dream about. Not sure why he failed to fifth for Mia, may be it in as never meant to be . Tim deserves the best and not a divorcee .
I feel for Mia , she However made her choice . Hope she makes it rather than sulking on her wedding day . I however wished it was Mia and Tim and Noah as their best man .
Waiting for any twist
Must be the saddest wedding to attend .
Nope it’s not my cup of tea.. I like to wish my greetings to Tim and Mia, Noah it’s a good guy but not for Mia!!!
congratulations *sob*
Noah is the father of comedy in this book! That he could not forget the strippers waistline on his wedding day is too funny !!! Lol .
Why does Tim keep eavesdropping them anyways ?
god....have mercy of that poor handsome man, it's too much for a person to see his love getting married to someone else in front of him ,i hope the situations turn in next chapter
he is definitely provoking him...
Well done to Tim for maturity . I feel his pain though
I also want to cry with him and for him . So sorry Tim
At least Tim has accepted and moved on . Good first step to start healing . Hope he won’t collapse on the wedding day
I feel really bad for both him and Mia though
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